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#Sanya headlines #Xin Ci appreciation Sound slow Chuzhou brigade times deng dian pillow building, and Li Qingyu rhymed into an array, the travelers met, all of them illusioned out of the floor. Pointing to the high points of the eaves, the waves and clouds floating

author:Jinling Muxi

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Appreciation of the words

     The sound is slow

Chuzhou Brigade times deng dian pillow building, and Li Qingyu yun

March into a formation, the travelers meet, and all the roads are illusory out of the floor. Pointing to the high points of the eaves, the waves and clouds floating. This year's taiping wanli, strike the long Huai, a thousand rides in the autumn. Looking at the column: there is a good atmosphere in the southeast, and the northwest is shenzhou.

        The ancient Huai Song people went, and laughed at me, in Chuwei Wutou. Look at the bow knife strangely, the carriage and horse are like a stream. From now on, enjoy the pleasure, the rest of the arrangement, wine order poetry. Hua Xu dream, may the years, people like the old travel.

(This improvisational work, although it is a harmony rhyme, is written like a dragon flying and stretching freely.) It shows what the author saw and felt when he climbed the stairs, and wrote a mixed mood of sorrow and joy)

The upper part of the word, the majesty of the writing building and the view of climbing the building allude to the author's mixed feelings. The first two sentences show the momentum of the building from the perspective of tourists' amazement and admiration. In this devastated city of Chuzhou, which was destroyed by the flames of war, a tall building miraculously appeared due to the author's rectification and management, which could not help but make the passers-by stop and marvel. They looked up and pointed to this magnificent building with high teeth and clouds, and they were surprised and delighted. In the dust that people raised back and forth, it stood as if it were a miracle. The surprise and joy of this building, although the builder Jiaxuan himself owned, in expression, it was not written from the author's own point of view, but used the word "Dudao" to see it from the eyes of the wind and dust servants, and the mouth said it, which showed that this surprise was not only unique to Jiaxuan himself. The word "pointing", like an upward shot, creates a majestic landscape for the reader, so that the following longitudinal glance can begin. The next two sentences write what the author saw when he climbed the stairs and jumped. He saw that the border was peaceful and the enemy did not invade, and naturally felt gratifying. But there was no immersion in the temporary atmosphere of peace and tranquility. When he looked at the beautiful southeast and the hard-to-recover northwest lost land by the railing, he couldn't help but be happy and worried, and his mood was difficult to calm down. This breaks the cliché of the word deng, and infuses it with the deep and widespread worry of the anti-gold restoration. After paying attention to such worries, Jia Xuan's spiritual realm also appeared.

        The lower part follows the last sentence of the upper part, focusing on expressing the thoughts of the homeland. At the same time, lyrically pay attention to the change of angle and light and shade. The first sentence is written in ancient times and present, and is written around Chuzhou. Li Deyu, who wrote that the Tang Dynasty experienced the "Anshi Rebellion", in order to show that he did not forget his ambitions in the Central Plains, he built the Huaisong Tower here, and he was finally able to leave Chuzhou and return to the north. What about the author himself? Since he surrendered to the south, he has been exiled to other places for more than ten years, and he still does not know the time of returning to his hometown. Compared with Li, his own situation is really ridiculous, I'm afraid that even Li Deyu has a spirit underground, he will laugh at himself, right? Here is a "laugh" word, written into the bone of sadness, written in ten years of unseen, ambitious and difficult to reward the inner pain. At the same time, this sentence also has the effect of "brigade" in the striking title, indicating that he is actually not intoxicated in the scenery of Chuzhou, which has been renovated by himself, and has never forgotten the mood of his homeland. The following "look and take" is to open a stroke, return to reality from the contemplation of history, and write about the joy of life after forgetting nostalgia. But this is not to forget the hidden pain, but to hide the hidden pain to make fun in the pain. Because for the author, his greatest pleasure was to restore the Central Plains, not the ordinary joy of "wine and poetry", which was a kind of consumption for his heroic spirit. His greatest promised land is not in Chuzhou, a border county where "bows and knives are strange and cars and horses are flowing". A "wish" word expressed the deep uneasiness in his heart. In terms of technique, this word takes the building as a clue, the building rises and ends, and the middle is lyrical because of the rise of the building, showing the simple beauty of the structure. However, in the lyricism of the scene, it is not monotonous and boring. Writing pillow building, starting from the pedestrian side, flexible and clever; lyrical, it is suddenly bright and dark, suddenly ancient and modern, suddenly excellent and suddenly happy, the change is unprovoked, and it is boring.

#Sanya headlines #Xin Ci appreciation Sound slow Chuzhou brigade times deng dian pillow building, and Li Qingyu rhymed into an array, the travelers met, all of them illusioned out of the floor. Pointing to the high points of the eaves, the waves and clouds floating

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