It is often said that the adult world is becoming more and more complex, the child's world is full of fun, children have some strange ideas, some of their ideas, so that parents can't help but marvel, children's hearts, many things do not need logic, think about how to do.
For example, in the aspect of writing essays, the composition written by primary school students makes people angry and loving, parents have broken their hearts in learning, many parents can't help but raise their blood pressure when tutoring their children with homework, it is difficult to control their emotions, even if they tell themselves to be calm, they still can't help but give a big shot to their children, let's take a look at the composition written by primary school students.
Elementary school students wrote "My mother is really hypocritical", the teacher laughed and her stomach hurt, and her mother wanted to hit someone after watching it
"My mother is really hypocritical": The child describes his mother in the composition, every woman wants to be young, but the child does not understand, when others ask him how old his mother is, the child directly says the real age, outsiders in order to avoid embarrassment, say that your mother is always eighteen years old.
The teacher laughed and her stomach hurt after seeing it, and her mother was so angry that she wanted to hit someone, so she complained about her mother and had to pinch a cold sweat for the child.
The student described that when the double 11, the mother bought a lot of things, everyone knows the double 11, many people will rush to buy things, the price is cheap. At this time, men are definitely not happy, women have the pleasure of unplugging couriers, and men look at some messy things that cannot be used, and it is inevitable that they will not be happy in their hearts.
The student described in the essay that he heard his father secretly scolding his mother for being a loser, but he did not dare to tell his mother, for fear that the two people would quarrel because of this, it seems that the child is still very filial piety, understanding both father and mother.
When this student wrote the essay, he did not understand the position of the role at all, he was an uncle who came to find his mother, and was directly written by the child into an ambiguous composition, it is estimated that after the father read it, it is inevitable that family conflicts will occur, and this composition should be hidden, do not let the father see.
The elementary school student wrote about a meaningful day when her mother was cleaning the refrigerator and found that garlic had rotted and turned black, and many young shoots had grown. The mother took the garlic that had sprouted and told the child that although they had rotted, they had given birth to new life, which was a tenacious spirit.
The child's next words, the teacher does not know how to evaluate, the child's heart, the garlic into the raw bud is a particularly lazy behavior, clearly indicating that they will find a wife in the future do not find such a lazy, it is estimated that the mother sees this article angrily wants to hit people.
Take a look at the zero-point essay written by the student, "Me 20 Years Later": I also wrote it in elementary school, 10 years later, myself after 20 years, this student wrote about me 20 years later.
At first, it was well described, but later it was described that a homeless old lady was actually a Language teacher 20 years ago, and the code words in it were self-evident. No wonder the teacher gave me a score of 0, and after saying that, you will stand and listen to my class.
"His Life": From this question, it can be seen that the student describes the life of a certain person, but the student only said 9 words, he hung up after birth, no wonder the teacher will be angry and directly give zero points. If the student really wants to write well, please be serious and do not feel that the teacher's temper is used to provoke.
Essay on love: The essay asks students to describe an essay about love, which should be concise in language, and must end in tragedy and have unlimited words. The finishing touch is a rolling word, no matter who it is, see this composition and want to give a 0 point.
Students usually write essays, usually must accumulate more materials in writing, so that the writing essay will not appear empty, each material accumulated by students may be used in composition, use language to express their feelings about life, and at the same time need students to exercise more.
When writing essays, there are some beautiful words and sentences or famous sayings and aphorisms, which can be fully applied to the composition, adding luster to their own compositions, and sublimating their own compositions with the help of poetry, integrating the author's emotions and their own emotions together.
Each essay has a structure, such as describing a thing, expressing an emotion, etc., so that others can also read the connotation expressed in your article, and some rhetorical techniques need to be used in the composition, such as metaphor, anthropomorphism, exaggeration, ranking, etc., so that their composition is stronger, but pay special attention not to use rhetoric too much, otherwise it will appear that the article is a little too fancy.
Now the composition is a computer reading paper, to write the word well, the same article, different people write it, the score given by the grading teacher is not the same, the writing will be preconceived, to give the teacher a good sense of composition writing.
Primary school students writing essays are often imaginative, which may have a lot to do with students' thinking, usually exercise students to write essays, pay special attention to let students understand, what is the emotion to be expressed in the composition, what is the center of the composition, must let students around the central idea to describe, do not get off the topic.
Today's topic: What interesting essays have you seen?