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Primary school students' aunts, netizens: cosmetics are not poisonous I don't know, your composition is really toxic

After children go to school, they will find that they have to face a big problem, that is, "writing essays", and children have no knowledge reserves, so they think of something.

Their composition descriptions often make people cry and laugh, because they are strange and real, there are several cute elementary school students' essays on the Internet, we may wish to take a look at it together.

Primary school students' aunts, netizens: cosmetics are not poisonous I don't know, your composition is really toxic

My sister-in-law: Her nose is fake

This child first praised the beauty of the aunt and described the appearance of the aunt after makeup, but the child adopted the writing method of "first yang and then suppressed", which also made people laugh.

After praising the appearance of the aunt, he began to think divergently, the sister-in-law's nose can not be touched casually, because it is fake, touched to lose money, our family does not have money.

Netizens laughed: "Children, to tell the truth, you know too many secrets."

Primary school students' aunts, netizens: cosmetics are not poisonous I don't know, your composition is really toxic

My sister-in-law: Toxic

Of course, this "poison" does not mean that the aunt's heart is not good, the aunt's heart is still very kind, especially good for children, and often buy her clothes, it is said that when the aunt was a child, she was more naughty than her!

But such an aunt has one of the biggest flaws, that is, the older she gets, the lazier she gets, and she collapses in bed every day to play with her mobile phone, and children at a young age can't watch it.

The point is, the child said, grandpa said that the aunt's cosmetics are toxic, so do not let the children use, although said that the aunt is a bunch of bad, but I like the aunt.

Netizen: "I don't know if my aunt's makeup lot is poisonous, your composition is really toxic, why can't you feel your liking for your aunt?" ”

Primary school students' aunts, netizens: cosmetics are not poisonous I don't know, your composition is really toxic

My mom: Not very ugly

This little student's description of his mother's sentence is cute and sincere, are you really praising your mother?

The child's sentence is very contradictory, saying that the mother is not very ugly, not very fashionable, not very elegant, it should be the description of the mother's impression.

However, I usually neglect to observe, so I can't describe my mother in detail.

Netizen: "Mom's mood is complicated. ”

Primary school students' aunts, netizens: cosmetics are not poisonous I don't know, your composition is really toxic

My sister: Narcissistic and obsessive

A look at the description of this composition, you know that it is "pro-sister", there is no "first raise and then suppress" routine, mercilessly count the shortcomings of the sister, the sister wants to hit people when she sees it.

The elementary school student wrote that the sister was particularly narcissistic and loved to look in the mirror; there was also special violence, because she beat her up because she didn't agree; and she was particularly lazy, and she didn't retreat what she bought, and she called her sister at will.

Do you think this is the end of it? No, the brother's accusations are really too much, the younger brother also said that the sister is particularly crazy, see the handsome brother said that it is her husband.

The sister is also particularly sloppy, at home do not trim the edges, only know to say "dry rice", see these descriptions of the younger brother, it is really a bitter smile, the sister also because of the description of the younger brother, became a hot female star on the Internet.

It seems that you can't usually offend your brother, otherwise you don't know what kind of depreciation you are in the composition?

Netizen: "At least this composition level is still very good, look at my family, it is also very speechless." ”

Primary school students' aunts, netizens: cosmetics are not poisonous I don't know, your composition is really toxic

I can see that in addition to the last primary school student's essay, in fact, the first 3 children's essays, the content is crying and laughing, and some children's content descriptions are even more scribbled.

The last article about the sister, the organization is much clearer, the reason why this child wrote well, one is that as he grows older, his vocabulary and language logic ability gradually mature.

Second, because this child is very good at observation, we can see that although what she wrote is small, it is very vivid.

She described the details of what happened in her life. Therefore, people read it, and they also find it very interesting and eye-catching.

Primary school students' aunts, netizens: cosmetics are not poisonous I don't know, your composition is really toxic

Therefore, parents can improve their children's writing level in this way

The first step is the reserve of daily words, which are certainly indispensable, only if the words are sufficient, they can be expanded into sentences, and secondly, the child's language logic ability should be trained, such as accompanying the child to some situational dialogue.

If you want to write a good essay, the ability to observe is naturally indispensable, and only when the child carefully observes the details of life will he have a sense of picture and article material when writing.

Therefore, parents may wish to guide their children to learn to observe, and they can take their children out for a walk and increase their knowledge.

Primary school students' aunts, netizens: cosmetics are not poisonous I don't know, your composition is really toxic

The child's writing level is slowly improved, this is not something that can be achieved overnight, parents do not have to force the child too much, give the child less pressure, let the child find the joy of writing, the child's composition will be more vivid, more interesting, more touching.

Then again, how does your child write and construct sentences? There is no point that makes you feel funny, or helpless, welcome to share.

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