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At present, there are hundreds of thousands of poets and lyricists, and there are countless lovers of grammatical poetry, or narrative realism, or lyrical romance, or enlightenment and reasoning... With a positive attitude towards life, they carry forward the truth, goodness and beauty, and continue the good traditions. A few days ago, I read a small poem by the poet Kunlun.
Meditate
When the window looked north for a long time, The south of Hebei Washun did not know.
Blow away the dreams of the heart, the tea is cold and do not complain about the wind late.
The author is a young entrepreneur in his 20s, who does not enjoy the superiority of a superior family in Beijing, and returns to his ancestral hometown to build a "New Era Civilization Practice Center" (Youth Education Center) to promote the construction of "beautiful villages" It is natural to miss home and miss his relatives, and it is even more natural to show his feelings. The 28 words of the small poem revolve around a "thought" word to lyrically.
It was a "cold spring" day, with a man sitting in front of the window looking north. I am in my ancestral hometown in the east of Henan Province, and I miss my relatives who are far away in Beijing. Henan and Hebei are nearly a thousand miles apart, but they don't know it. The village dialect is like being at home (going out to speak Mandarin, still speaking Shangqiu dialect in front of your parents) Sometimes you feel like you're around your parents; sometimes you feel far away from your loved ones.
The scene is constantly changing. Sitting for a long time, the cold wind blowing is completely unknown, the tea is cold and I don't know, missing my relatives is so focused, so attentive, so emotional, a wandering child thinking of relatives the picture of spontaneously.
The theme of his poems is prominent, the emotions are sincere, and the layers are advanced, although there is no thought, love, wonderful and gorgeous sentences, and there is no sense of skin that pours out beautifully, but it more completely expresses the meaning of missing relatives, simple and unpretentious, the sense of truth and reality Is natural, making people feel more intimate, originally missing relatives do not have to think hard about how many beautiful words and sentences, straight to the chest, so that parents are more happy, if there is false doubts.
Li Bai's "bright moonlight in front of the bed, suspected to be frost on the ground." Look up at the bright moon and look down at your hometown. "As clear as the words, it was more than a thousand years ago in the era of "Wen Yan Wen", but we were holding the tone of "Kong Yiji" in the "Vernacular Wen" era, and it was difficult to make up words and phrases, even the most beautiful words could not impress people, let alone their own relatives.
In terms of theme and language grasp, the author has made some efforts to have such an artistic effect. There are not many figurative "partition windows" and "tea cooling", but they carry a lot of imagery, "a few times", "I don't know", "a thousand miles of dreams", the meaning of the text is deep, the fusion of virtual and real, all for the sake of "thinking" and creating a situation, different sides, multiple angles to reflect the feelings of "thinking of relatives". It should be an uncommon little poem that is worth savoring.
The author, Fang Yuzuolin (Li Huimin), a native of Shangqiu Ancient City, is a member of the Chinese Poetry Society, a director of the Henan Provincial Poetry Association, and the vice president of the Shangqiu Poetry Society. He has published poetry collections such as "Sunset Left and Right", "Old Garden Rhymes", and "Dried Dream Words".
Editor: Li Xunxiu Editorial Board of Qingyanwei Literature