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Elementary school students' essay "My Home" staged the "home version" of Journey to the West, and the teacher praised it after watching it

author:Shandong Education Satellite TV

When students are in elementary school, they will be exposed to composition, but basically the teacher will let students start with writing a diary to slowly guide students to experience the feeling of writing essays.

But even so, there are still many students who often write some strange compositions when writing essays, making parents and teachers cry and laugh, and then follow the author to take a look at it!

Elementary school students' essay "My Home" staged the "home version" of Journey to the West, and the teacher praised it after watching it

Elementary school students' funny compositions, the content is clear and interesting

Elementary school student essay "My home"

I believe that everyone knows that the imagination of primary school students writing essays is very rich, but I really did not expect to be so rich, this primary school student wrote an essay titled "My Home", he actually described his home as "Journey to the West".

Describe his family as a character in journey to the West, he is a "Tang monk", his mother is "Sun Wukong", his father is "Eight Precepts of pigs", and his grandparents are "sand monks", all the way he is protected by his family and often brings trouble to his family.

Elementary school students' essay "My Home" staged the "home version" of Journey to the West, and the teacher praised it after watching it

I believe that many people see this essay, they are more touched, although the number of compositions written by primary school students is small, but they can clearly describe their family members and situations.

Although the primary school student's imagination is also very rich, his metaphor for the personality of his family is just right, and even the teacher praises it after reading it.

Elementary school students' essay "My Home" staged the "home version" of Journey to the West, and the teacher praised it after watching it

Elementary school student essay "What should not be said"

Every student must have failed to do well in the test, and some parents who are particularly responsible for students will pay special attention to the fact that the students have not done well, and even carry out "scolding education" for students.

And the composition written by this primary school student is about his own failure to do well, this primary school student wrote at the beginning of the essay that he did not do well in the exam, as soon as he came home, his father beat him with a broomstick, and when he wanted to resist, he remembered what the teacher said, and he should care about his parents.

Elementary school students' essay "My Home" staged the "home version" of Journey to the West, and the teacher praised it after watching it

But what people did not expect was that when the elementary school student was beaten, he actually said to his father: Have you not eaten? It was really funny, and the teacher almost laughed out of the snot bubble after watching it.

In summary, I believe that when you read the funny compositions of these primary school students, they are all laughing, but it is not difficult to see that these primary school students are still a little worse when writing essays.

Elementary school students' essay "My Home" staged the "home version" of Journey to the West, and the teacher praised it after watching it

Although there is no harm in saying that the imagination is richer, students should still pay attention to some ways and methods when writing essays, do not write what they think, and it is best to pay more attention to accumulation.

Elementary school students want to write high-quality essays, they must pay attention to the accumulation of ordinary times

I believe that everyone knows that primary school students have rich imagination in the process of writing essays, but they always can't write high-quality compositions, which has a lot to do with the accumulation of students.

Elementary school students' essay "My Home" staged the "home version" of Journey to the West, and the teacher praised it after watching it

Because writing essays is not a simple thing as writing what you want to write, it requires students to pay more attention to accumulation and observe more things in life in their daily lives.

Because most students write essays, they write about something that happens around them, if students can develop a good habit of focusing on accumulation, then naturally they can write high-quality essays.

Elementary school students' essay "My Home" staged the "home version" of Journey to the West, and the teacher praised it after watching it

However, if primary school students want to write high-quality compositions, in addition to focusing on accumulation, they also need students to read more extracurricular books when they are normally fine, and increase their language expression ability.

Because language expression ability is very important in composition, after all, smooth sentences can make readers have the desire to continue reading, which is also the basis for students' writing essays.

Elementary school students' essay "My Home" staged the "home version" of Journey to the West, and the teacher praised it after watching it

In addition to students' own efforts to learn to write essays, the cultivation of parents and teachers is also very important, for example, teachers assign primary school students homework to write diaries every day, because writing diaries is the basis for students to write essays.

As long as students can write the diary very carefully and clearly, and the sentences are smooth, they will gradually write the composition better and better, and parents should cultivate the good habits of cultivating words, because the handwriting is also very critical in the composition, if the student's handwriting is particularly sloppy, it will not get a high score.

Therefore, if primary school students want to write high-quality compositions, they must pay attention to the accumulation of daily life, and parents and teachers should also pay attention to cultivating students' writing talents.

Elementary school students' essay "My Home" staged the "home version" of Journey to the West, and the teacher praised it after watching it

Source: Linlin Education Diary

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