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Hello everyone, this is home peace, I am Nana.
Facing the sea, spring blossoms.
Let's take a look at a small essay written by a second-grade child:
On a spring morning, I put on my clothes and finished my breakfast. Dad led me to an endless lawn. Happily flew the kite. I zhuai kite, Dad zhuai head. Dad said, "Now I can run, my dad and I are running fast." "The flowers on the ground are like a small face of a person, and now the kite is already very high. Dad said: Now, you can hold it. Because the kite is already very high. So, you can fly the kite by yourself," I said to Dad, "thank you Dad." ”
The little essay above was written by my little nephew, who had just been in the second grade.
The teacher made corrections, and the end was:
I worked with my dad to fly the kite and we made it. I felt the flowers smiling at us.
Children's ability to write essays actually comes from the oral expression ability and brain thinking ability in life. To be honest, my little nephew's children of the current age are very smart, and most of them can express themselves in real life, and their heads are the same.
For example, yesterday, we all ate at home. My third sister, the third aunt of my little nephew, called and said: Leave me a meal, I will come home from work to eat!
The little nephew quickly said a word: Okay! No problem three aunts! Leave you 1 noodle! You go home and eat!
The third sister listened, angry and laughing.
The above is the children's eloquence and reaction ability now.
Next, let's talk about a little essay about flying kites.
The following small essay of "Flying a Kite" is very level, and the use of words, scene descriptions, and character expressions are very in place.
Also "Flying Kites", the interaction between friends is the most interesting. However, what happened to the uncle and aunt at the end suddenly appearing?
The following article is also "Flying Kites", describing different kites, which shows that the children's observation ability is also very good.
"When the wind comes, I speed up, and when the wind passes, I slow down; not just my kite, the sky is full of kites, and I can't count them." ——Teacher's comment: Wonderful description!
In the following small essay, two primary school students actually quarreled because of flying kites!!! Hahaha, laugh off the big teeth!
The content of the essay is as follows, there are typos Oh, do you see it?
Today is a clear day and the best weather for flying kites. Xiaoming, Xiaohua, and Xiaohong went together to fly kites on the lawn of the park. The little flowers in the park have turned crimson, and the grass has grown this sharp thorn. Xiaoming tried to test the direction of the wind, so he let Xiaohua hold a kite, but he didn't expect that we didn't have a gong (gong). Xiao Hong said: Xiao Ming, Xiao Hua, you are fantastic to try once and become a gong (gong).
Bob modestly replied: Wherever. Xiao Hua was arrogant there (yes) of course.
Xiaohong saw that her kite did not fly, and then Xiaohong said excitedly: Xiaoming and Xiaohua, can you help me fly the kite? Xiaoming said happily: Yes, Xiaohong.
XiaoHua said: Our kite flew high, I don't want to help you, Xiaohong your kite is like an ugly butterfly, mine is a handsome one. (Nana comment: When I saw this paragraph, I really wanted to laugh, why do you call children "little people", it is indeed a small person who is careful with his eyes.) ）
XiaoHong said angrily, "Your kite is the ugliest." ”
Xiaohua said: Forget it.
Xiaoming said: I put your kite high, and my little butterfly flies so high.
———— What," I didn't fully understand in the end, did the little red kite fly in the end?"
Of course, in addition to the above "Flying a Kite", there are three remaining small essays with the same proposition, and other children are written like this:
Look at the picture written: flying a kite.
This font is very neatly written, and it should be a particularly good child.
There are also words such as "good, good" and "right" between the lines, it should be a little girl, right?
Quoting ancient poems as the beginning of a small essay, this is a very smart child.
There is also a small diary of the baby mother, the baby son.
Write at the end
I believe that after reading these cute and loving children's little essays, their hearts must be full of happiness and innocence.
Although the fonts of these children are not so neat, the order of expression is also messy, and even some people are arguing with you in the composition, this does not affect the children's growth on the road of writing essays.
Dare to write, insist on writing, in order to see the day of writing better and better.
Writing a small essay is: true expression, free life.
For children's small essays, we who are fathers and mothers, conforming to children's thinking and patiently guiding the correct value orientation, is the most important. (Image source network, invasion and deletion!) ）
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