Read Hu Mingming's musical poem "Tail Notes"
Original poem ——
Tail note
Poetry/Hu Mingming
A needle churned a pool of water, and the fingernails ran through the glass heart
A sculptural drag cavity, then a pick
Heavy rain fell in the ears
Lightning bolts into the eye socket and stop
Those thorns are bending inward every day
There's nothing to hide, when the rest of your life
No tricks required; nothing
It can be revealed that when you turn your back on the setting sun, the fingers that leave the strings cannot find pockets to pick up and peel off
Frozen layer after layer of shell
The heart that recognizes the truth
The choking that gushed up the throat, covered with
The forehead of the seal, who is
By the original singer becomes pirated
Geese flew by, splitting the cross
The wings are folded in half. sky!
How I love its epilogue after the holocaust
- The epilogue of this catastrophe
It's just that it comes to a sudden halt, and the swimmer stands still on the shore
The water was still gushing, and when the cry turned silent
When silence becomes a high and low note of dressing...
Wen Jingtian poetry review
A confessional whisper of a woman. Full of narcissistic and sentimental flavors. The subjective inner realm leads people into the empty and missing psychological layer of self-penetration, the random lens performance (geese, water) is slightly large and inappropriate, and expressions such as "the original singer becomes a pirate" are very strange and fresh. The linkage caused by the music or notes is the beginning of the author's writing of this poem, such as the tail note that has gone through the catastrophe, which is not the end note of the music, but more like a metaphor. Similarly, the high and low tones of wearing clothes, the high and low notes here are only the size and strength of the basic action sounds, which have nothing to do with music, and of course allow them to be understood as inner high and low tones, because for women, dressing is never a simple dress, but a replacement and breakthrough of mood, which should be summarized into the list of self-life expressions. A needle and a drag cavity at the beginning of the poem, as well as heavy rain and lightning— are the music's synaesthesia effects on inner spomorphism. Overall, the poem is a great lonely song for women. Finally: Recognizing the Big Heart – this colloquial group of words makes me think the author is cute.
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