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Writing this thing, to be divided into people, like my son prefers the subject of physical and chemical biology, composition for him is a "century problem", but I told him that there is a way to improve the level of writing, that is, to help me write a self-media article every day, but people are firm and powerful to refuse.
Nowadays, writing in self-media is the least goal for me to complete at least 8 articles per month. Because I found that the process of writing from the media is not only as simple as earning income, but more importantly: the ability to think, the improvement of writing level, these two points are more affordable than making money!
Today, we will talk about the composition of elementary school students.
I believe that everyone has heard of an essay called "Me twenty years later".
The text reads:
Today the weather is good, my wife and I took our lovely children around the world. Suddenly, a foul-smelling, filthy, homeless old lady burst out of the side of the road. Oh, my God! She turned out to be my Chinese teacher twenty years ago!
Don't know how this child is now? I don't know if his Chinese teacher was angry when he saw such an essay? In short, for a period of time, this paragraph was still very "popular", and there were many people reprinting it.
Another essay is "My Ideal", which reads:
My dream is to be a philanthropist so that I can travel the world with my wife and children. If I encountered the chinese teacher who was homeless, I would give him some money...
This small essay, judging from the notes, is not like a word for primary school students, but more like a deliberate effort by adults to attract attention.
There is also a primary school student essay "My Mother" written like this:
My mom is like this, she wears beautiful clothes every day. And every time she sends me to school, she has to wipe lipstick again, I said Mom, you can hurry up, it's almost late, he's still a big pig, because he can eat and sleep, this and the pig is originally a brother, her words are a bit more, every day when he is about to go to school, he says it again, every day to drink water, to unite with classmates and so on, my ears are almost not their own...
Makes sense!
Another child's essay reads:
The title of the essay is: On the Importance of Physical Education Class. It says that if a group of teachers are locked in the same room, what are the topics doing?
Among them, the Chinese teacher is writing a suicide note... Let the Chinese teacher not be calm after seeing it!
This can be seen from the comment "You gave me a lesson standing in the back".
This child is really very powerful, writing can smear the Language teacher, just like the "twenty years later" said that the teacher became a beggar, is this really a "fairy tale"?
So why is physical education important? Because, the physical education teacher walked to the door and kicked the door open without saying a word!
From this point of view, the physical education class is not important, I don't know, anyway, I think the physical education teacher is very important!
There is also a more excessive small essay - "My Teacher Zhang". After everyone read it, I promise to laugh until my stomach hurts. Look at the length, full of two pages of essay paper, write a lot, visually measured to be a sixth-grade student, right?
The student said that their teacher Zhang, who is not good at all, does not look good, so his face is full of makeup.
The teacher has a mole on his nose, which makes the teacher ugly! Moreover, she also said that the girls are as beautiful as heavenly immortals, and I think the girls in our class are ugly and possessed, and they are ugly and don't want them.
This child, I'm afraid, is it a boy? Not only said that the teacher was ugly, but also said that the girls in the same class were ugly, which gave him so much courage? Could it be that Liang Jingru gave it?
However, looking at the teacher's comments, you can also find that Teacher Zhang seems to have read this small essay very patiently, although the text says that she is ugly, and also says that she may be an old demon of the black wind after removing her makeup...
Now it seems that being a teacher is really a profession that tests people's psychological endurance.
Of course, in addition to "slandering the language teacher", there are also "distressed language" teachers. For example, this little essay "I want to say to the language teacher":
In fact, I feel that the previous words are quite polite, and I can also objectively describe the fact that the language teacher is very hard, but the last sentence, how can I listen to it so awkwardly? Don't know how everyone feels?
Another child wrote an essay on "Housewives": Is it appropriate to love the mother's child? Especially the last sentence———— mom said: No! I just didn't do anything today.
The essay scored 100 points, antecedents and consequences, a stroke of thought, profound meaning.
There are also essays related to Dad! Some children even introduced the object to their chinese teacher, and this object was not someone else or their dearest person...
This small essay called "My Heart's Words" is not known to be written by a grade child, or was it deliberately done by someone else? Anyway, after reading the whole article, it gives people the feeling that children are so mature?
Finally, I have to introduce my father to the Language teacher as a boyfriend... I don't know what the child's mother should say to the teacher when she arrives at school?
Little friend, are you your mother's biological child? Or do you really want to save your mom from the "fire pit"?
There are also some children, the composition written is that they can explain the problem with a few words, and definitely do not write more than one word. For example, the title of this exercise is to narrate someone's life in a flat narrative way.
The children's essay is "His Life", the content is: He was born, he hung up!
If you look at the title and requirements of the essay, the writing is not wrong; but the teacher still gives 0 points.
Why?
What needs to be understood is, what is the purpose of primary school students writing essays? It is to let children think, learn to use the language and words they have learned to correctly express their feelings, and describe what is really happening in life.
For example, when I was just browsing the news, I saw a news of "6-year-old sister looking for a 4-year-old brother", and the 6-year-old sister can clearly and completely express the fact that her brother is missing, which is ability.
Some of the above small essays of "laughing to the stomach" do show a certain ability to think, but there is also a feeling of "not afraid of the world". Whether it is to describe the teacher or the parents, it is direct and not in line with the rules of life, no wonder teachers and parents will not be so easy to accept from the heart after reading it!
One of the most important functions of composition is to summarize, summarize, sort out things and characters, find key points, find breakthroughs, find more ways to solve problems from words, or convey emotions, values, and opinions.
If the composition is as simple as this "8-word life narrative", how can we tap into the potential of children in the use of language?
Composition, not difficult!
Stick to writing every day, start writing 500 words, and then slowly write thousands of words, the article will be more fluent, the thinking will be more open, and the point of view will be clearer.
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