How to break the college entrance examination essay? The full score experience that parents must talk about with their babies is more effective than watching news broadcasts
Yesterday, I read the "2023 General College Entrance Examination Chinese Composition Test Analysis and Proposition Ideas Report" published by China Education Daily, which suddenly made me think that I might as well combine authoritative documents and try to "break the question" with you for this year's college entrance examination essay questions.
Source: China Education Daily public number
When we first see this question, what will we think, from which angles will we analyze the topic, and the logic of the next pen will be more "deep" and more hopeful of getting a high score?
As adults, if you need to write in your work life, you all need this step;
As a parent, our baby's five years and ten years later, also have to take the college entrance examination, since childhood there is a habit of discussing "how to solve the problem of composition" with the baby, which must be helpful to the baby.
Come on, just do it!
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Take a look at it overall, look at ten years at a glance
Nowadays, there are many different sets of questions in the college entrance examination, and the Beijing Wa, Shanghai Wa, Guangdong Wa, and Yunnan Wa exams are not a set of questions at all, and of course there are a lot of essay questions.
The first step to being a parent: find a summary table online and take a look at it first:
See something?
My feeling at this glance is: Oh, this year is all about "current affairs"!
(I don't see it and I'm not in a hurry ha, I'll say it slowly one by one later)
In contrast, last year's "Dream of Red Mansions" was again a Go term "native hand, clever hand, ordinary hand"... It can be said that the most eye-catching part is "Chinese Studies" in 2022 and "Current Affairs" in 2023.
Remember these two key words, "Chinese studies" and "current affairs", the college entrance examination is the national examination, for the selection of talents, then it will definitely firmly grasp the real "national affairs", what is the biggest event in China in the past ten years?
The great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation.
A total of 9 characters, remove the "of", the key of the key is the two parts "Chinese nation" and "great rejuvenation".
Chinese culture and traditional culture are to let children better understand who we are and who the "Chinese nation" is;
And "current affairs" is to examine whether children, as the future pillars of the motherland, pay attention to what we have done and how we have done Chinese on the road of "great rejuvenation";
Don't look at the college entrance examination today, tomorrow, these children will take over the baton and rush to the future.
How to learn "Chinese Culture" and "Traditional Culture" has been written a lot before, and there are many good resources recommended, and the links are placed at the end of the article, welcome to use.
I didn't write much before the current affairs part, today we can combine the college entrance examination essay questions and talk together.
In addition to these two great tricks, there are three more and we must not forget that the "2023 General College Entrance Examination Chinese Composition Test Analysis and Proposition Ideas Report" clearly writes out the four principles of the proposition.
1. Hold high the banner of ideology and strengthen ideals and beliefs (this is the great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation around everything)
2. Based on student life and encouraging personality expression (this is to let children tell the truth, talk about things around them, talk about people, and speak from their hearts)
3. Select critical materials to improve the quality of thinking (this is to break the topic and don't forget "everything has two sides, think about it the other way around")
4. Reading and writing association, guiding deep learning (this is since we have read so many books, we have to let the examiner see it)
After the college entrance examination essay questions were announced, there were essays written by big Vs on the Internet, as well as a large number of articles written by artificial intelligence, which are quite good at first glance.
But often the second one is the most lacking: the writing is not from the heart, the things around you, there is no true feeling, there is no 18-year-old youth between the lines, true and warm youth.
Sincerity, is the highest skill of writing, there is no one.
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Analysis of essay volumes across the country
The college entrance examination essay is a "reaction on the spot", the language is only 2 and a half hours in total, in addition to the big essay, there are also "small essays" and a large number of topics, two essays up to 1 hour, the time is quite tight.
I used to get the paper and look at the essay question first, see what keywords I caught, and start to do the previous topic with "inspiration at first glance", while doing the question, I continued to think about the composition, and after the topic was completed, I thought for more than 1 hour, and I could start.
This first inspiration is very important.
A look at the question:
The first reaction is to raise a hand from the little partner who "Isn't this writing to play with the mobile phone";
The second reaction is, didn't you say that this year is all "current affairs" questions, playing mobile phones is considered current politics?
Hahahaha, the first thing I saw was three (group) keywords: technology, time, "someone mastered, someone became a servant"; Later, I looked at the "Analysis of Test Questions and Propositional Ideas" and sure enough, it was on the number.
"Technology" is one of the biggest "current affairs" keywords at present, whether it is China's manufacturing to turn to the general pattern created by China, or our breakthrough in the field of 5G technology, this is "technology" competition.
Seeing the two of "technology" and "time" put together, the word "Chinese speed" immediately appeared in my head, the legend of high-speed rail exceeding 300 kilometers per hour, and our construction of Vulcan Mountain Hospital in 9 days and Leishenshan Hospital in 12 days during the epidemic.
You see, we are in a very interesting era, a mobile phone + ubiquitous Internet, let us adults "go to work to build the motherland", all the way thunderbolt with lightning, China's speed shocked the world.
But after work, I lay on the sofa, and as soon as I brushed the live broadcast room on my mobile phone, I became only smirked with "hahaha", and when I heard "123 on the link", I impulsively chopped my hands, and I brushed until midnight, and the next day I went to build the motherland with panda eyes.
I guess there must be many 18-year-olds who have seen such scenes at home, seen their parents, and sometimes are the masters of technology and time; Sometimes it is a slave to technology, and owes a debt of time in the ass ...
This should be an interesting story to write, what do you think?
The national volume B directly quotes General Secretary Xi Jinping's speech, and friends can see that this is a "diplomatic issue".
The first sensitive word in the diplomatic field is "Sino-US relations", which is obviously inappropriate to write in the college entrance examination essay, and there is a longer-term and grander layout is the "Belt and Road".
Well, the Belt and Road is not only "current affairs", but also immediately related to "traditional culture": the ancient Silk Road, the ancient maritime Silk Road, Zhang Qian's envoy to the Western Regions, Zheng He's voyage to the West... There's so much to write and say.
Just write an argumentative essay, the score is not low, there may be friends will ask, so that the writing is too high a banner, it is not very "connected to student life", not very true feelings, write about the surrounding affairs.
Yes, if it were me, this article would probably start from last dinner when my mother made me a cucumber (the seed that Zhang Qian brought back from the Western Regions) or my favorite thing to do in the summer, which was to hold half a watermelon (originating from Africa, introduced to the mainland from Xinjiang in the Tang Dynasty) at night and looking up at the stars.
A world of open, pluralistic and equal communication will make every ordinary person happier, and every family's table can prove this.
The proposition of the new Curriculum II "Quiet and undisturbed" is quite close to children's lives.
It should be noted that it should not be written as "pure complaining text". If I write, I will probably talk about the two traditional cultural views of "leaving blanks" and "gentlemen cautious independence", which will not be expanded here, and interested partners refer to China Education Daily "Test Question Analysis and Proposition Ideas".
The storytelling essay question of the new course standard I is probably a relatively popular online discussion.
Many big Vs wrote this question, Ai also wrote it, and I also saw some friends in the circle of friends say that this question should be combined with current politics, and the stories of the same person are mentioned.
Gui Haichao who rushed from the small town of Yunnan to space - I am a Yunnan examinee, such a big news, if I take the high school exam this year, I will definitely write it - but all Yunnan candidates may write it, plus the whole country...
I can't help but feel some sympathy for the teachers who read the papers, I have to watch Gui Haichao's story dozens of times every day, who is this high score for?
Therefore, you can't just write about Gui Haichao, in fact, people who are sensitive enough to current affairs, when they see the proposition of "story", the first sentence that pops up in their minds is also General Secretary Xi Jinping's instruction to "tell Chinese stories well".
Gui Haichao went to space, this is the story of China's spaceflight, China's aerospace recently in addition to the "Shenzhou 16" to the sky, but also announced that China will achieve the moon landing before 2030.
If it were me, I would write the story of the Chinese and the moon, the story of the Chinese flying sky.
When I was a child, my grandmother told me the story of "Chang'e Rushing to the Moon", which was a flying dream Chinese in the "Classic of Mountains and Seas";
When he was a teenager, the story of "Trouble in the Heavenly Palace" was staged on TV, which was the flying dream Chinese in the "Four Masterpieces";
Later, for a while, about the universe, the sky and the moon, we heard the story of Gagarin, the first cosmonaut in the Soviet Union to take to the sky, and the story of Armstrong, the first astronaut in the United States to land on the moon.
As I grew up, there was really a jade rabbit (lunar rover) on the moon, a "Tiangong" (space station) overhead, and our Chinese teachers were in the sky, lecturing to students on earth.
——What year did Gui Haichao take the college entrance examination?
When he wrote the college entrance examination essay, would he think that one day, he himself would become the "star" on the essay paper of tens of millions of students?
The children who passed the college entrance examination and entered the university in 2023 will graduate from college in 27 or 28, will there be outstanding representatives among them who will participate in the great history of Chinese moon landing?
I'm looking forward to it, the Chinese story that belongs to this generation of college students.
There are so many examples given earlier, the two questions of the Beijing volume, let's participate in the discussion together.
The "battery life" of question 1, combined with current affairs, is the easiest to think of?
I think of "electric car", "battery", "BYD", "Musk", "Tesla";
In an interview in 2011, Musk listened to the host ask him "his opinion of BYD, a Chinese electric vehicle company", and he smiled wickedly.
Now, in the first quarter of 2023, BYD ranks first in global electric vehicle sales with a market share of 21.10%, and Musk himself has just visited China and strongly advocates trade cooperation with China...
What does battery life depend on? Starting point low weight either? Poor conditions either? So what's the most important thing, where is the core motivation for Chinese endurance, and as a student, what supports me to work hard from the first grade of elementary school to the third year of high school?
After the college entrance examination, we who enter the university, should we accumulate strength and sail in which direction?
Let's look at the "appearance" of question two.
Debut is a traditional opera art term, so I will break the topic and will definitely write some traditional cultural content.
As I shared before, I am a heavy user of station B, and seeing this topic immediately made me think that there are many, many UP masters in station B, and the story of promoting Chinese culture abroad.
For example, a girl in a Hanfu playing guzheng in France, a young man dancing with a red fan in front of landmark buildings around the world, and a super sassy girl wearing a bachelor's uniform at the graduation ceremony of a world-famous school...
The barrage is all water: this time Chinese Kung Fu can no longer be explained...
In the years when we grew up in the 80s, traditional culture and modern civilization; Between East and West, there is a clear boundary; Chinese appearance on the world stage always needs to consider whether it is in line with the etiquette and cognition of the other party.
But today's children can wear Hanfu to ski and reproduce intangible cultural heritage in the second dimension - their free life and creation, and their freedom and confidence in front of the world, is the most wonderful appearance of Chinese.
A person is willing to explore a strange world, of course, not only for curiosity, but mainly for the possibility of obtaining greater benefits!
Seeing the title of the Shanghai Roll, as a middle-aged mother with a mortgage on the left and an interest in class fees on the right, the first thought that came to my mind was this.
Ahahahaha, of course, this cannot be written directly into the volume.
It just so happened that yesterday the "Global Science" public account published a good article that won my heart "How to write a zero-score essay for the 2023 college entrance examination, the editorial department will teach you hand-in-hand".
The title of the Shanghai volume is written "Are mice willing to explore cats, is it because they are curious", which says that if mice are infected with toxoplasmosis, they are likely to die to explore cats...
Source: Global Science public number
This article seems to be a fool's errand, and it is not unjustified to write an essay like this, but in fact, it suggests an interesting way to solve the problem: discuss the problem from a different angle.
For example, from the perspective of history and political economy, the biggest driving force for human exploration of unknown territory is to "avoid risk" or "seek greater benefits".
Zhang Qian sent an envoy to the Western Regions to confront the "enemy Xiongnu", and legend has it that Zheng He went to the West to "find Emperor Jianwen";
Navigators like Columbus and Magellan also went on expeditions in search of the treasures of the New World—exploring the unknown for profit, which is not a shocking statement.
The problem is that there are "immediate" and "long-term" benefits; "a handful" and "all of humanity";
When people explore and even plunder strange worlds for the sake of immediate and individual interests, their curiosity is called greed;
When people explore strange worlds for the long-term, all-human benefit, their curiosity is called ideal.
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End
Well, that's it for today.
To sum up, if you want to get a high score in the college entrance examination essay, the key element is the "Chinese nation" (sinology); "Great Revival" (current affairs); True feelings, dialectical thinking, deep reading;
At first glance, if you can grasp the key words, try to meet the above points in the conception process, how can you do it?
Caring about current affairs, speculation and in-depth reading also depends on accumulation over time, like myself talking to my baby every day about related content, the simplest and simplest: watching news broadcasts every day.