In the 4th New Youth Essay Competition, Wang Ning from Hangzhou Xuejun Middle School in Zhejiang Province won the first prize in the high school group.
The title is "Ma Yun, You Listen to Me", and she used the way of continuing to write "Dream of the Red Chamber" to virtualize the story of several characters in the Dream of the Red Chamber who made online shopping.
Mr. Lu Dunji, a judge of the competition, scored a full score of 10 points, on the grounds that the tone of all the characters was very similar to the original and very in place.
If you were asked to rate it, how many points would you give?
"Jack Ma, You Listen to Me"
One hundred and twenty times have not been accomplished and Qin Qing has passed away! Sigh! The younger generation is not talented, the courage of the dog tail continues to sable, one respects Qin Qing, and the second remembers the great changes in life to honor Ma Yun, for all the kings to laugh.
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The first Ali back
Xue Baochao was kind enough to buy on behalf of him
Wang Xifeng made a lot of fun
It is said that Baoyu was talking and laughing with Dai Yu in the Xiaoxiang Pavilion, only to see Bao Chao walk in in, and Bao Yu saw Bao Chao come in and smiled:
"Sister Bao, you can also come to see, Sister Lin has not been crying and mourning like before in recent days, just holding a mobile phone and smirking." My sister Dao Yuanchun gave everyone's mobile phone from the palace, and it really had a wonderful use. The ancients had the saying that the princes of the Beacon Theatre bought a smile for thousands of dollars, and it was also the laughter of Sister Lin, even if it was ten thousand gold, it was worth it. ”
Bao Chao smiled and said, "It's made up again, the previous sentence is there, and the last sentence is only afraid that Qingwen in your room will make a laugh of tearing the fan and making a thousand gold laughs." Sister Lin is blessed, and in the future, there will be a brother-in-law Lin who wants to buy you a smile. ”
Dai Yu listened to Bao Chao teasing her like this, and her cheeks were flushed with shame, and she pounced on Bao Chao's mouth and said, "Look I don't tear your mouth." ”
The two laughed and laughed, but sat down again. Bao Chao said, "I don't know what fun my sister got on her mobile phone, so happy?" Dai Yu smiled and did not speak.
Bao Yu said, "I don't know if my sister has used that mobile phone Taobao?" The things in there are really dazzling, fair prices, and there is no need for compradors to maneuver around. It was even possible to scratch in the boudoir little by little, and there were small squatters who passed on the goods from all over the place. You say novelty is not novelty? ”
Dai Yu smiled, "You're staying again." I don't know that Sister Bao's family is doing business, that royal things, are all through her family's hands, good sister Bao is also a clever person, how can you not know this mobile phone Taobao? I'm just afraid that the money in her Alipay is even more than the combined sisters in the garden. With that, he picked up a small axe and enjoyed it carefully.
Bao Chao clapped his hands and smiled, "Exactly, don't be clever?" I looked at you with familiar eyes, and I think it was the one you and I used to eat tea in the Myo Yu Li Cui Nunnery a while ago? ”
Dai Yu smiled: "I have so much money, this is a high imitation, I only bought it on Taobao a while ago." Poor one of my daughters' family, and there is no father and mother, where is the idle money.
Even if the old lady is distressed, she only rewards a few silver on weekdays, and there is no bank card that can bind the Alipay. I saw this on Taobao a while ago, I like it, or I still want Zijuan to find a substitute for the Wang family. The Wang family was very refined, and they collected a lot of silver. ”
Saying this, he remembered that he did not have a father and mother to send people under the fence, so he wiped his tears with a pa.
Bao Chao saw that Dai Yu was in tears, and said, "I came here precisely to send you some rhinoceros, and I am getting together with that Huang Yan." I wanted to buy it and send it to you, who knew that it was so best-selling, but it was sold out. ”
He ordered Ying'er to bring a gift box to Dai Yu. He added, "I'm not stronger, my father didn't have to be early, even if I had one more brother, you know it." There is only one more mother, and she also recognized you as a daughter, what is the difference? Dai Yu gradually stopped crying.
When Bao Yuyuan saw Dai Yu crying, he was distraught and did not know how to persuade him, but when he saw that Bao Chao could persuade him, he was secretly happy in his heart: "The Tao is that the two innocent daughters are talking, and Hugh called me a dirty man who is defiled!" So he didn't open his mouth.
After seeing that Daiyu stopped her tears, she had a plan in her heart, and smiled: "I have a plan, ask Sister Bao to buy for her sister, isn't it much better than that Rao head being earned by the next person?" ”
When his sisters heard this, they clapped their hands and smiled, "Good! Hard for you to figure out! Dai Yu then picked a few of the most satisfactory hair and BaoChao from the shopping cart that had long been piled up, and BaoChao bought it by promise.
Bao Yu saw that the two were busy, so he giggled and played with a reward. I saw that the texture in the cup was clear and precise, and even the inscription of Su Zizhan at the bottom of the cup was as powerful as the plate that Qian'an saw in the Li Cui Nunnery. I really don't know how to make it.
Although it is not authentic, it is used to hide and play in private, which is enough to be elegant and elegant.
Bao Yu sighed, "What a craftsman! Even if there is such a hand, it only takes a little money. It can be seen that this Taobao is so magical, and the strange way makes Sister Lin laugh every day. ”
While talking and laughing, Jia Mu passed on the meal, and the three of them went forward together.
Jia Mu was seated, and Lady Wang Fengjie was standing by her side. Bao Chao saw that Sister Feng's clothes were different in the past, and her face was also smiling, knowing that today was definitely different from usual, and the taste of the dish color was also very different.
Jia Muguo said, "Why do the dishes look different today?" I've had an old bone too, and I haven't tasted it! Sister Feng smiled and said, "The old ancestor only said that it was good or not?" Jammu nodded in praise.
Sister Feng smiled and said, "I was on Taobao to buy a while ago, and I actually saw a push from an Ali chef and invited the cook outside to come into the house to cook." As soon as I thought, the old ancestor must have liked it very much, so he ordered a Western cook to come and give everyone a taste of the early, saying what michelin is, I don't know what kind of oil qilin, rice unicorn, second master said that it is good, it is good. ”
One sentence made everyone laugh. He also said, "If the old ancestor likes it, I will ask someone to keep him for a few more days, and he will wait for him in a different way, so that he can get rid of his addiction." Jia Mu smiled and said, "Monkey! Put you in the right place! Official money, you are a man. ”
Everyone laughed again. Sister Feng busied herself with a smile: "I still can afford this little host." He ordered Ping'er: "Pay the cook a reward from my Alipay." ”
After a while, Sister Feng said that there was a trick to change, so she ordered Ping'er to send a box up.
Jia Mu smiled: "It was also bought on Taobao?" I'm too old to use it. ”
Sister Feng said, "Yes." The old ancestors who were well-informed would not even use it? That day said that Grandma Liu came up, all of them were wearing beads and greenery, only the Road was bought by Taobao, and they had to wear it to dance with other old people! ”
Jia Mu said, "He is also a savage man, and he also knows that he is trendy; I know that I will be ridiculed by her next time." Oh, Phoenix, you will teach me next time. Do you know what your trick is? ”
Sister Feng hurriedly handed over the box, looked at it with everyone, and said, "Is it empty?" "Everybody said yes.
Sister Feng closed the box and drank, "Change! "When the box was opened again, everyone was anxious to see what was inside. Sister Feng took a look first, her face changed, closed the box again, and then shouted "change" to unveil. It's still empty.
Sister Feng was anxious, pointing to the box: "I only when you are a two-faced and three-bladed snobbish villain, change and change also look at people, today I play a drama, you actually do not rely on, is it difficult for the old lady to speak, you are willing to change?" ”
When everyone saw that Sister Feng was out of the foreign phase, they had laughed so hard that they could not sustain themselves when they heard these words, and when they looked at Sister Feng's clothes, they were indeed costumes.
Sister Feng touched the box to the front of Jia Mu's bed and said to the box: "This time it is Mrs. Shi Taijun who has come to invite you, although she does not make up according to the product, she is also extremely expensive, I would like to see if you are willing to rely on it!" ”
Jia Mu smiled and fell on the bed, pointed to the box, and said, "Change! Sister Feng then took down the mechanism, and when she opened it again, it was indeed a peony.
Sister Feng put on a bun for Jia Mu, and everyone admired it. Jammu Dayue.
Just in admiration, I could only hear a "stinging" sound, not anything else, but Feng Jie's costume hooked in the corner of the case, a little force, it pulled a big hole.
Sister Feng was not ashamed or annoyed, but only pointed to the case and sighed: "Case Jun, I said that you are a righteous gentleman, who knows that you are also a small person who climbs the rich and deceives the poor?" That Lady Yipin is in front of you, you don't hook her clothes, I just dangled in front of you, then I hooked the slave's costume and taught the slave family how to sell art! ”
Everyone laughed again, and Jia Mu laughed and said, "In the end, it is you monkey, jumping up and down without a quiet." Madame Wang also said: "Although the goods on Taobao are a few dollars cheaper, those craftsmen who cut corners are not known." Don't covet convenience next time. The home is good, the old lady does not blame, let others see, what does it mean? ”
Sister Feng promised, and everyone laughed again before dispersing. To find out what happens next, listen to the next breakdown.
Late Sheng Liao attaches an oil poem at the end of the article to the great changes in his life:
A variety of goods at your fingertips, smiling proud of the ancient and modern Wanquan store.
With a treasure paid everywhere, the national output value increased by 100 points.
Borrow books to recharge to find work, and the people of Hangzhou City will benefit from convenience.
Since Ma Yun turned out, a thousand years who can be Bo Zhongjian.
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