When I saw the word "absolute sound", I remembered the poignant "absolute sound" of the thorn bird.
According to a candidate, when the college entrance examination team went to his school for preparation guidance, he said that this "Absolute Sound in flames" was the highest score essay of the year.
The following is this composition, which can also be called "full score composition".
The plot of "school performance" and "teacher telling stories" mentioned in this part, and writing the children's reactions after listening to the story, are all foreshadowing.
"Flooded", meaning "full", with a pejorative meaning. It is better to use the neutral word "full" in the text.
Let's start with the review.
The author of the question definitely wants to guide students to go in the direction of positive energy, such as self-esteem, mutual respect, perseverance, ordinariness and greatness, responsibility, etc., but since there are no similar keywords in the question, students can also have their own interpretation.
The little author apparently saw a different color. Sometimes, a thing that looks good or great actually hides a lot of "unbearable", or there is "bitterness" that we can't bear to say. Why is it that only The Old Master works alone in the depths of the mountains? Why do I have to travel more than 40 miles a day and have no other means of transportation? The old man takes care of the safety of others, and who cares about his safety? Is he well fed?
So, at the beginning of the article, "Old Plan" had an accident. The "not good" behind the "beautiful" appeared. Then, a unique perspective came out.
Of course, there are also people who think that this article is off topic.
Let's talk about the gist.
This article should be based on a fire on December 8 many years ago, which was a pain in the hearts of hundreds of families. The fire gave birth to the phrase "let the leader go first", and every year on this day, people mention it, although these five words are actually still a "Rashomon".
The article is ironic. Putting aside the backstory, such things are definitely there in life, and the article is of practical significance. It will provoke some thoughts that may not be the author's intention: Who is the party that should be educated? Is there a distinction between high and low life? How words and deeds match...
The candidate wrote it this way, which is very novel and risky, but this article is handled very cleverly, and the author puts what he wants to say in a story, and does not give a single sentence of evaluation of the whole thing.
We will not encourage middle school students to write critical articles, but if they must write, they must know that "bashing" is not the purpose, and we must pay attention to proportions in expression, and the background color is bright.
The author is so brave. This idea is probably the only one among tens of thousands of people.
When it comes to writing, there are also many advantages to the article. There are many buried foreshadowings, and the back naturally echoes; the language is clean, and there is simply no superfluous sentence; the carefully arranged contrasts between the story and reality, the shining eyes and the "no longer exist" highlight the theme; the material is cleverly embedded in the text; the main theme of the novel is subtle but not obscure, very advanced.