Grade 8 Upper Book Chinese Unit 2 Essay Guidance and Assignments

Writing Practice:

First, from falling to the ground to growing into a teenager, you have more than ten years of life experience. Write a self-introduction, review your past experiences, and tell your thoughts about the future. About 300 words.

You spend time with your family day and night, but do you know their birthdays, hobbies, and experiences? Please write a short biography of one of your family members, no less than 500 words.

Third, observe the students around you with an appreciative eye, find the shining points in them, choose one, communicate in depth, and write a small biography for him. Not less than 500 words.

Technical guidance

A "biography" is an article used to describe the deeds of a person, also known as a "biography." There are many types of biographies: in terms of length, there are large and small biographies; from the perspective of biographical characters, there are autobiographies and other biographies. So, how can you write a biography of a person who is both a god and a god?

First, connect with life, the content is true

Writing biographies of characters must be true and credible, in line with the reality of life, adhere to the principle of seeking truth from facts, one is one, two is two, merit is merit, excess is excessive, not fictional rendering, not praise and depreciation, so that people are true, things are true, words are true, feelings are true, images are true, and people are touched by truth. Only in this way can people benefit a lot and pass it on for a long time.

When writing, we should start from the characters written, comprehensively collect the information of the characters, and conduct a comprehensive and specific analysis, look at the good and bad characters in two, and then determine which materials to choose. In addition, when writing, the characters written should also be placed in the interpersonal relationships in which he is located, from the superficial phenomena to the internal connections, and grasp the essence of the characters for accounting.

Second, grasp the personality, the image is clear

If you want to write the characters alive, you must grasp the personality characteristics of the characters and make a clear image.

How can you make the personality of the character stand out? "There are no two identical leaves in the world", we can grasp the personality of the character by grasping the appearance, body, dress, etc. of the character. "Words are the voice of the heart", people's thoughts, feelings or wishes are all expressed in their language, and the use of typical character language is also an important way to express characters. "Facts speak louder than words", writing people without typical examples can not be done, because the character's ideological quality, personality characteristics, must use facts to speak, so with the help of typical and novel examples to express the personality of the character, you can make the character image full, the personality is distinct.

Third, grasp the order and be clear

There are many things to involve in writing a biography: the basic situation of the character, the character characteristics of the character, the achievements and contributions of the character, and the typical events that reflect the essential characteristics of the character. For a large number of collected materials, we must carefully identify, strictly select materials, abandon the crude and refined, remove the false and the true, and let these materials be organized in a certain order, so that they are clear and clear at a glance, so that readers can clearly understand the level and context of writing.

Fourth, pay attention to details, see the micro-knowledge

Writing biographies, there is another point that we need to pay special attention to is not to focus on the big things, the details of the description can not be ignored, sometimes the character characteristics of the characters are expressed in some details, properly described in detail, can see the micro-knowledge, enhance the credibility and appeal of the biography, and even play a greater role in the future development of the characters.

American text leads the way

Title: True Color Season Envy Forest

Zhang Manling

Ji Lao often said in a joking tone: "In recent years, Ji Xianlin has become popular. "But I've had an urge lately to tell people about the nature of Ji Lao behind the media fog. For more than twenty years, he called me a "little friend", and I have been a "mentor and friend" for the rest of my life. He was a real and upright scholar on the campus of Peking University, an old man with a kind and delicate heart and often silent.

The Ji Xianlin I know is obsessed with every precious past in his memory. He had told me about Lu Xun, about Hu Shi, and about his mentor Chen Yinke. His expression was extremely humble, as if the master was still in front. He said they are very protective of young people. Hao Bin of Peking University once told me about him accompanying Ji Lao to Taiwan. He said that as soon as the invitation came, Elder Ji immediately agreed. It shows that he has something in mind and wants to go. When he arrived in Taiwan, Ji Lao proposed to go to Gurudwara's tomb. That day, Hao Bin followed him. Elder Ji stepped forward and bowed respectfully to Mr. Hu's tomb, then turned back to Hao Bin, who was following behind, and said, "Bow! "The tone is very harsh, and there is no room for negotiation. This is rare in ji lao's usual time. Hao Bin then quickly bowed. Later, Hao Bin said to me, "He doesn't bark, and I have to bow too." Because he was in front of me, I meant to wait for him to step back down, and then I would go forward to salute. Unexpectedly, Ji Lao was so anxious. He was afraid I wouldn't behave. "The eagerness of the emotion is conceivable. After returning, Ji Lao wrote the text "In front of Hu Shi's tomb". The feelings that had been buried in his heart for a long time were finally cathartic. It can be seen that Ji Lao is a person with a spiritual bottom line. In the face of years of insults against Hu Shi, Ji Lao could only remain silent. But the things that should be watched, he did not throw away.

Ji Xianlin is a serious person. The rigorous personality of the scholar is also reflected in the ordinary life. When I was filming The Apocalypse of the Southwest United Congress, I offered to interview him. Ji Lao first refused. Thought it was inappropriate. He had never turned me down anything. But this time, because he himself was not from the Southwest United University, he was studying in Germany during the War of Resistance. I said that I interviewed him because this film needs to talk about Chen Yinke, and there are not many people in China who can talk about Chen. Elder Ji agreed. He emphatically told me about the "patriotic tradition" of Chen Yinke's family. He said: "Patriotism is also genetic. "They are the only three generations to enter the family of Ci Hai. When interviewed, he was also invited to talk about the Southwest United Congress, and he talked very cautiously, and his identity was very appropriate. I thought to myself: I will do the same in the future. You can't stick a lever into everything. Ji Xianlin was not a saint. As an intellectual who came out of various "movements" after the founding of the People's Republic of China, his steps could not have been straight. There have also been a number of wanderings, and once they wake up, they do not follow the current. Iron shoulders bear moral righteousness, and the body protects calves. This is the reason why I sincerely admire Elder Ji and are willing to follow him all my life.

At that time, I was in Hainan and wanted to start a vocational university. Ji Lao gladly supported me and raised 600,000 won for me to use the invoice to get. But the university didn't work out, and the money didn't move. After that, what he said to me the most was that what a nation needs most is someone who creates culture and spreads culture, and he wants me to be that person. Every time we met, he asked me to sit down and write, to sit on a cold bench. He said: "If Manling can sit down, there will be great achievements." Regarding reputation, he once said to me on the phone: "It deserves it." ”

Recently, he was living in Hospital 301 and is still asking me, "What is she doing now?" Teacher Li Yujie replied, "Anyway, her two hands will not be idle." "This time Ji Lao's inscription for the "Zhang Manling Anthology", I want to use it. I know that he used the wind and candle to burn all year, tossing and turning on the sickbed, holding a pen for me with both hands, and carefully stamping, the purpose of which was to encourage me to remind me that to write, to "sit on the cold bench." Sitting on the cold bench is actually the true color of Ji Xianlin. This is also where he feels at ease.

One of his favorite quotes is: "The task is heavy and the road is long, and the soldier cannot fail to carry out the fortitude." "He devoted his life to the study of Oriental culture. This was explained one by one in his book "Learning the Sea pancha", and in recent years, people have blindly given him the title, which actually undermines his scholarly demeanor.

"What 'generation of masters' seems to be deaf to the ear." Ji Xianlin reacted like this.

Then ask him, "If I were given a definition, what would it be?" ”

He said: "I am a professor at Peking University, an orientalist, enough. He also said: "For a man, to give him a true definition, he himself is at ease." If it doesn't live up to its name, he himself eats and sleeps restlessly. A lot of things don't come out that way. What is a 'Master of Sinology'? We have to figure this concept out first. In his heart, Wang Guowei was called the "Master of Guoxue".

The last time I came to his house was to see him in my bedroom. He said to me in a half-sitting position, "Enough is enough, that's it." "The look was very idyllic. Ji Lao was in many ways unlike his predecessor Chen Yinke. But there is one thing that is the same thing, that is, nine deaths without regrets, the life and into the Chinese soil, a lifetime without leaving the Chinese university. (Excerpt from "Being Human and Dealing with the World")

Ji Xianlin is a famous "master of traditional Chinese studies", but he has never accepted such a title, and his lofty and bright mind and humble character are awe-inspiring. The article closely revolves around Ji Xianlin's "true colors" and counts the past events that he has witnessed with his own eyes, making Ji Xianlin's character image come out: he respects the teacher and has a humble look; he is rigorous in his handling of things and does not follow the current; he sits on a cold bench and is at ease; he is indifferent to fame and fortune, selfless dedication... This is exactly the vivid portrayal of his "cloth clothes, words and things, deeds, poverty and unmoving, pampering and not shocking".

Excellent work

Title: Daddy Biography

Shuangjian Middle School, Mengcheng County, Anhui Province, Li Ming

Dad was an ordinary man, engaged in the noblest cause under the heavens - teaching and educating people. We are a family of three, and my mom and I are big "fans" of dad.

In 1977, dad was born in Mengcheng, Anhui, the hometown of Zhuangzi, and was admitted to the teacher's school at the age of 16 and stepped onto the podium at the age of 19. He was not only an excellent people's teacher, but also a well-known teaching assistant author. In the past few years, he has published more than 1,000 works in more than 20 publications across the country, with nearly one million words, which is deeply loved by teachers and students.

Beauty-loving dad

"Everyone has a heart for beauty." As a teacher, Dad paid special attention to his appearance. He was not only neatly dressed, but also paid special attention to some details of life. Every day, before Dad walked out of the house, he always went to the bathroom to comb his hair neatly, then shaved his beard clean, and then took out shoe polish and brush to wipe his shoes spotlessly, and also called it the "Three Lights Policy" - hair combed, beard shaved, leather shoes polished. For this reason, his mother did not give him less "white eyes". Dad, not only was he not angry, but he also loudly defended: "Good image, good mood, good work." "Savoring Dad's words, it's really not unreasonable."

"Out of tune" singer

Dad likes to sing, no matter where he is, no matter when, as long as he is in a happy mood, he will lead the song.

However, what my mother and I could not bear was that no matter what song my father sang, he would go out of tune when he sang. I remember that when CCTV broadcast the TV series "Dong Cunrui", my father was very fond of the theme song "Your Shoulders", so he learned to sing it with the TV every day, just watched a few episodes, and actually learned. One afternoon, as soon as I walked into the house after school, I heard my father triumphantly singing a song he had just learned. Singing and singing, his old mistakes were committed again. I covered my ears and shouted, "Out of tune! "No way, I can't sing this song out of tune." Dad never admitted that he was singing out of tune. "If you don't run far, you'll be two miles away." Mom laughed at the side. "I wondered, it's impossible!" Dad was still muttering in his mouth.

Although Dad's singing voice is not so beautiful, if I can't hear it for a few days, I am really not used to it!

Mentor

At school, Dad was a mentor and friend to the students. In the classroom, he was strict and never tolerated the shortcomings of each student; after class, he mingled with the students and was happy for the progress of each student.

At home, my father is my strict teacher, but also my loving father. When I was 10 years old, I stole my mother's 5 yuan because of my gluttony, and my father found out and beat me up fiercely. When I was beaten for the first time in my life, I felt extremely aggrieved, and ran into the bedroom in a huff, did not eat or drink, and fell asleep crying. When I woke up, I found the note that dad had put on my bed: "Son, Dad is too impulsive today and shouldn't have taken a simple and rough approach to you." Dad is wrong, forgive Dad..." After reading Dad's words, tears blurred my eyes.

That's my dad and I love him!

[Comment] This is a successful biography of a character. The author is cleverly conceived, by capturing typical examples in life, from the three aspects of "beautiful father", "'out of tune' singer" and "good teacher and friend", the image of the father is ready to come out, and the writing is dense and well-organized, which is the biggest highlight of this article. In addition, the language of the article is vivid, humorous and funny, and the use of words such as "fans", "three-light policy", "white eyes" and "out of tune" adds a lot to the article, which shows the good writing skills of the small author.

(The above author Shang Dynasty, from the "Little Dragon Man Newspaper")

Other writing coaching

【Writing Requirements】

1. Biographical requirements must be true and ensure that the narrative is true and credible.

2. Biographies should specifically show the words and deeds of the characters.

3. The language is vivid and interesting, don't just be a boring biography or resume.

【Teacher Tutoring 1】

How to write an autobiography

Autobiography is the account of one's own life and deeds, and is a more common applied style.

In terms of the object of writing, autobiographical composition is a person-based essay. It's just that this character is himself, and the technique of writing people can be applied here.

However, how to write an autobiographical essay well is not as simple as writing a person.

First, know yourself. Autobiographical essays should write a real, living "me". This me should be the real way I am in life, not a layer away from the real self in life, so that after people see it, they feel that it is not you, or it is not a completely real you. The process of writing an autobiography is sometimes a process of finding and discovering yourself, and you have to follow a line, chase yourself back, examine it, analyze it, and finally truly know yourself.

So, how do you express yourself authentically and vividly?

More self-reflection: Who am I? What kind of person am I? What is my personality? What do I like and don't like? What is my ideal? What do I want my future to be? Why do I have these hobbies and ideas? When I was growing up, who had the biggest influence on me? What impressed me more? ......

Ask this question, make a record, sort it out, and a more specific autobiographical composition will come out. Writing an autobiographical essay is much easier than other writers' essays. This is because it is written by oneself, there is no lack of materials, and there is no lack of understanding.

However, there are more materials, and there is a problem of material selection and cutting.

Writing autobiographical essays, the most taboo to write as a running account. The autobiography of yourself should have a distinct personality. An autobiography is not simply a record of people, it should reflect the growth and change experience of the characters.

Although we are still young now, we have grown up and have experienced it, which is better reflected in the autobiography.

In autobiographies, there are sometimes also feelings and views on things, but also to write about the lessons of life, but these are not the same as other literary and artistic works of direct lyricism, discussion, but allegory, rational in the narrative, so that the reader feels it, that is, indirectly revealed.

For example, in Mao Zedong's Boyhood, "In retrospect, I think my father's harsh attitude turned out to be a self-defeat. I learned to hate him, and we built a real united front against him. At the same time, his harsh attitude is probably good for me. This makes me work very diligently, and makes me keep the accounts carefully, lest he have a handle to criticize me..."

An autobiography is different from a resume. The autobiography pays more attention to literary color, from which you can see the cultural quality and language expression ability of the master, and you can also see his spiritual world, and on the basis of truth, you can appropriately make some comments to express your own opinions and propositions. Resumes, on the other hand, are only a mechanical illustration of a person's experience.

Autobiography, generally to write their name, birth year, place of origin, family, hobbies and main experiences, but also to write their own ideals, write about their views on life and society. Each stage of growth can have its own focus. Early childhood ------ focus on writing and playing, which can be relayed by other family members. Teenagers ------ write about interests, studies, thoughts, habits, and spirits, and should write in detail. Youth ------ sketched and can grasp a fragment.

The language of the autobiography should be generalized, especially the memories should not be comprehensive, and there should not be too many detailed portrayals. Language can be literary or simple.

【Teacher Tutoring 2】

How to write a biography

First, we must have a deep understanding of the deeds of the written object, pay attention to the selection and analysis of materials, and write out the personality and style of the characters.

Any article should be written around the theme. To do this, it is first necessary to possess a large amount of information, and then carefully analyze its characteristics and determine the center of writing. Choose materials around the center and organize them, don't be all-encompassing. Only by selecting materials around the theme can its materials be useful and its works have a soul. Students must pay attention to avoid the following situations: just list the materials, no matter how big or small, a bunch of sesame beans, no clue to run through, and no unified theme. Writing a biography like this is unsuccessful.

Second, we must adhere to the principle of seeking truth from facts, not exaggerate, shrink, or make up.

Biographical works need to be completely authentic, including time, place, people, events, and important details. The distortion of a single detail can shake the value of an entire biography, let alone an important plot. But this is not to say that the biography should be painted according to the gourd, the eyebrows and beards should be grasped, and the character's smile should be recorded without omission. On the contrary, it is necessary to have a focus and a detailed strategy, and to choose those events and plots that are closely related to the life, thoughts, and work of the characters to write. In order to write the characters in both form and spirit, you can also make some literary renderings appropriately, such as the desert described in many places in "Deng Jiaxian", and the writer's own concern for his friends naturally makes the article more emotional to read. When students write biographies of their parents, they must understand and recognize their experiences with feelings, and convey their recognition and respect for their parents in objective narration. Of course, these renderings must be in line with the identity and personality of the character.

In addition, biographical characters should be portrayed in the spirit of seeking truth from facts, and they should not only be written and beautified because they liked; nor could they only be written bad and ugly because they were dissatisfied. The portrayal of biographical characters should be as objective, accurate and comprehensive as possible, and cannot be arbitrarily written by their own preferences.

Third, we must have literary color

Biographies are written about people. To this end, in writing, we must grasp the characteristics of the characters, record their important representative major events and the typical small things that can best express the personality characteristics of the characters. If you don't write big things, you can't show the contribution of the characters; if you don't write small things, you can't make the characters come alive. It even tends to make articles generalized and shallow. In order to make the biography vivid and touching, it is necessary to seriously study the life deeds, personality characteristics and ideological character of the characters, and use creative brushwork to show the ideological outlook and personality characteristics of the characters. In order to write the characters alive, it is necessary to excavate and possess typical examples and details that are sufficient to express the characteristics of the characters from all sides, that is, the thoughts, speeches and actions that best embody this characteristic, as well as anecdotes and anecdotes, etc., to be described and rendered.

【Teacher Counseling 3】

Things to note when writing biographies

The content is authentic. This is the fundamental principle of writing a good autobiography and a short biography. In the content expression, Ding ding is ding, 卯 is 卯, not fictional, not distorted; not whitewashed, not vainly beautiful; not disturbed by customs, not taboo for His Holiness. Important points include time, place, environment, and character speech, action, etc. must be based on evidence, and all the time, place, person, event, etc. involved in the text must be accurate; however, it should be noted that the biography is not a boring biography or resume, and the author can use his imagination to fill the gap in the facts and vividly represent the character;

Typical material. The materials selected should reflect the identity, life, personality, and interests of the characters. If you are a writer, you can choose materials such as literary activities and literary achievements; if you write about students, you can choose materials such as diligent study and healthy growth. In short, you should show your personality.

The details are appropriate. This is a special condition for writing a good autobiography and a short biography. The main experiences, hobbies, and behavior of the characters can be highlighted, and the other materials do not have to be comprehensive, such as names, places of origin, family and other materials can be mentioned in one go. In short, let the reader get a peep in the eye.

The clues are clear. This is the basic guarantee for writing a good biographical article. Because writing a biography should collect all aspects of the characters, and choose them to focus on the impressions and understandings given to us by different aspects of the characters' lives, the clue arrangement should be clear and clear. Generally, it should be written in chronological order. For example, if the characters are students, they can be written in order of kindergarten, elementary school, and junior high school.

Language flexibility. This is a solid foundation for writing a good biographical essay. Because biography should respect history and respect facts, the language is accurate and plain. However, in order to break the dull and boring habit of "eight strands", it is not necessary to prevent the integration of emotions into the narrative, that is, in the narrative with a sincere attitude, the characters' distinct ideological tendencies and love and hatred emotions are infiltrated. However, it should be noted that biography does not have to be as meticulous as prose, and recording typical language and key actions can often achieve the desired expression effect.

In short, in order to write a good biography of a person, it is first necessary to possess the material in detail; secondly, it is necessary to strictly select the material, according to the characteristics of the character, to choose the material that has great significance, has a major contribution to society, and can best express the essence and characteristics of the character; finally, it is also necessary to organize the material appropriately.

【Excellent Work】

Assignment 1: Mother's Biography

There will always be people in life who deeply affect us. In my life, the person who influenced my life was my mother. I especially love to pestering her in my spare time and listening to her tell stories of the past.

Childhood anecdotes

My mother was born in ×× (place of origin). When I was young, my family was still relatively wealthy. But because there were many children in that era and her mother was the eldest sister, her childhood was naturally not very peaceful. It was still an era of son preference, especially in the countryside, and the average family would not let girls study, and when they were about ten years old, they had to work in the fields. And the mother vowed to study, so with tenacity, always ranked at the top of the school, the teacher also continued to persuade, so insisted on finishing junior high school, and with excellent results into a local key high school. The letter of admission had come down, but grandpa was ill that year and the family was in difficulty. In order to take care of her younger siblings, her mother resolutely gave up her studies, and her mother, who was only fifteen years old, took up the burden of life.

Entrepreneurship is hard

When the younger siblings were all older, my mother decided to go to the city to find a job. Because the academic qualifications only graduated from junior high school, my mother only found cleaners, salesmen and other jobs. Although the daily working hours are very long, my mother cherishes her work, no matter what she does, she is not afraid of hardship, and she works harder than the average person, and after two years, she was promoted to a sales manager, and it was at this time that she met my father. They admired each other and took care of each other, so a year later they got married, and the next year, they ushered in my birth.

Family of three

My mother told me that when she was pregnant with me, my father always took good care of her, and then simply asked my mother to quit her job and stay at home to recuperate. So on the afternoon of January 8, ××, I was born.

My birth brought unprecedented joy to my parents. Every day, my mother was busy with housework and said to me who didn't understand anything, singing songs to me, telling stories, taking me to do "gymnastics", busy and happy. Guarding me little by little, I grew fat, excitedly talked to my father who came home from work about my differences and progress every day, and every day was so worth looking forward to. She said it was her happiest days.

Gradually, I was able to go to kindergarten, and my mother went out to work again. Later, I went to preschool and began to have learning tasks. Since then, my mother has had one more mission: to accompany reading. For more than a decade, as long as she did not go to work, she would do homework with me and help me review; later she felt that she really did not have the ability to tutor me, so she sat silently next to me, watched me do her homework, chatted with me when I needed, and handed me a cup of hot tea.

When I complained that my classmates were not all sincere and kind, it was my mother who enlightened me, she said: "No matter what others do to you, you are not ashamed." When I failed in the exam, it was also my mother who encouraged and comforted me, she said, "As long as you try your best, your mother doesn't blame you." "When I occasionally played a little sex and got angry with my mother, she always came to the side in understanding and ignored me, forcing me to remember with actions that "to be angry is to punish myself."

Maybe in the eyes of others, my mother is just a humble little person, but in my heart, my mother is the most beloved person in my life. It was she who taught me how to be a person, how to resolve the contradictions between classmates and friends, and how to face difficulties and setbacks.

My mother takes great care of me, and I will follow my mother's example. I vowed to do the same as my mother, or even beyond my mother. In the words of my mother, it is called: "With responsibility, work hard for dreams." ”

【Comments】 The small author used subtitles to affectionately record his mother's life experience. Focus your pen and ink on some typical events that especially reflect the personality characteristics of the characters. Vividly expresses the excellent qualities of the mother, such as strength, hard work, ability, hard work and resentment. The article is clearly layered and completely structured, which is in line with the characteristics of the biography of the character, and is worth learning from.

Assignment 2: My Grandfather

My grandfather Was born on the eve of the founding of the People's Republic of China, and his life experience has witnessed the great changes in the motherland in the past seventy years.

Grandpa's childhood

Grandpa's childhood coincided with the founding of New China, the poor and white motherland was in ruins waiting to be rebuilt, and the people who turned themselves into masters responded to the party's call and enthusiastically threw themselves into the construction of the motherland.

But the motherland that has been bullied for a hundred years is full of holes, poverty is abnormal, and it is not easy to fill the belly, let alone other enjoyment.

Because of poverty, Grandpa had to drop out of school to work at home after only the third grade, and poor Grandpa spent his sour childhood in a low hut dreaming of going upstairs and downstairs, with electric lights and telephones.

Grandpa's youth

Grandpa grew up in hardship and poverty, and like other rural youths, Grandpa married my grandmother in a dilapidated old house.

At that time, the shackles of the planned economy were tightly wrapped around people's necks, and the days of poverty passed day by day, and there was not a single light in life.

Despite the hard work of grandparents, the family still can't make ends meet, and life is like people's clothes, gray and slippery.

In order to raise a few children, Grandpa secretly made a small business to supplement the family, so the salty radish strips would occasionally have a little oil star.

Just when people felt that their lives were extremely dull, the spring breeze of reform and opening up swept across the land of China, and the rural areas implemented the household contract responsibility system.

Because grandpa was diligent and flexible, our family soon got rid of poverty and became rich.

The first big thing Grandpa did was to build a large tile house, and to celebrate the joy of housewarming, Grandpa also specially put on a movie! Although the days are getting better and better, the upstairs and downstairs, the electric lights and telephones are still the flowers in the mirror of the moon.

Although it is very tight to provide for several children to grow up and go to school, Grandpa, who has little culture, still grits his teeth to provide for several children to complete their studies, which is the most proud thing Grandpa feels he has done in his life.

Grandpa's old age

The happy days always passed quickly, several of Grandpa's children grew up and started their own families, and Grandpa also realized his dream of going upstairs and downstairs, with electric lights and telephones.

Now, bathed in the spring breeze of building a new socialist countryside, Grandpa and his peers enjoy the convenient and high-quality services of the community, often participate in some beneficial community activities such as chess, musical instruments, calligraphy, etc., and live a good life.

No wonder Grandpa couldn't keep his mouth shut all day.

Teacher's Comments:

(1) Assemble materials in chronological order to summarize the personality characteristics of the characters.

Childhoods with abnormal poverty and constant dreams, young people who grew up in hardships and poverty but still worked hard, and old people who have taste and are happy to close their mouths."

(2) Highlight the key activities of the characters, and arrange them appropriately.

Writing about the sourness and poverty of childhood, the provincial pen writes about the tasteful old age life, focusing on the grandfather's youth, not afraid of hardships, poverty and resolutely changed the family's past.

After reading the article, I was particularly impressed by My Grandfather.

(3) The language is witty and silent, and the ornamentation is strong.

The author cleverly and skillfully quotes the colloquialisms and novel language and appropriately develops and modifies them, and the effect is very good, refreshing, and worth savoring.

Assignment 3: The Autobiography of Dazhi

Dazhi, whose ancestral home is Shandong; there are three people in the family, it is a family of three, and the family is still relatively well-off. He is generous in nature, never bullying others, never climbing the ladder of power, not understanding flattery, and moody and anger are not good at color. Because of the wrong love of his classmates, he gave him "weak intelligence" and did not dare to resign, so he was called a "trumpet".

It has been twelve years since I entered school at the age of three, and I have gained a lot (at least I learned how to behave). Nowadays, people have learned nine times out of ten; the ancients also said: "If there is more than enough power in the line, then learn the literature." "I have been studying hard for three years, the main text is not learned, I prefer essays; when I was young, I was familiar with reading "three hundred words", "Three Kingdoms" and "Water Margin" also had experience, and the wonderful things were familiar to the heart, quoting the classics, such as probing for things. Although he prefers ancient chinese, foreign literature is also involved, such as "Jane Eyre", "Insects", "The Old Man and the Sea", "Hunter's Notes", "Harry Potter" (1-7 parts), etc., most of which are essays, and have been read several times. Therefore, although there are many books, there are no "works", and there is not much "movement" in the end.

He is arrogant and arrogant, has a very high self-esteem, never pays attention to xueba and other people, disdains the arrogant people, and also praises and demeans the ancient sages. Interested in new things, close to the root of the matter, and finally to make a clear, clear and clear; what ordinary people say: "the child's heart is not lost", in fact, "committing two" also. He is interested in easy-going people and often bullies her; gives a high-sounding reason to strengthen communication between classmates and enhance friendships; to be honest, he does not escape the nature of hooliganism; but to be honest, it is purely because of "fun" and "fun".

Life is informal, because the inner strength is strong enough. I don't wash my hair in January during the winter vacation, wear worn-out clothes in Ginza, and read books in public toilets, often going my own way, never taking the words of others to heart. Even if others speak ill of each other, they do not think of revenge, and often laugh it off, using the word "huh".

If life is not satisfactory, he often exhorts himself: "The heavens will descend upon the people of Sri Lanka, and they will first work their bones and bones, suffer their minds, starve their bodies, empty their bodies, and do things in disorder." ”

Although there has not been any shocking deeds in ten years, but the ambition has not been rewarded, one day, it will aim at the opportunity and shock the world in one fell swoop.

Comments: You are a child who has learned to apply, and the language is funny and humorous. In the form of a literary language, I wrote a small biography of myself, which is worth learning. The teacher looks forward to the moment when you will be shocked in one fell swoop, and I hope that you will have more masterpieces. Cheers!

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