Spring is coming, minus winter clothes; flowers red butterflies, leaves willow green; green branches who want? "Pleasant heart". Pedestrians in the streets and alleys are full of "poetic feelings".
Five-Word Verse: Spring Solstice
He Yongqiang (Wangshan)
Published on March 20, 2016
It was rebuilt on April 23, 2022
Spring solstice to winter beauty,
The sidewalk lanes are wide.
Reduce the heat in the room,
Foliage trees remove the cold.
Grass green bird puppet,
Red butterfly stop single.
Branches and green companions who look,
Happy contract under the moon?
Interpretation: Spring is coming, and the scenery of "ten thousand trees withering" and "cold wind whistling" in winter is completely gone; there are more pedestrians shopping and walking on the road than in winter, and the streets appear crowded and wide.
Day by day to reduce clothing, only because the room feels warm day by day; all kinds of plants are also constantly "changing with each passing day" to grow young leaves, and the young leaves increase in width to better absorb the sun so that trees can remove the cold and "thrive";
The grass buds on the ground are also growing day by day, attracting countless birds to "chirp" to call for even birds to peck, and the flowers "Zi Yan Red" also attract colorful butterflies to no longer walk alone and fly in pairs; the branches gradually glow with natural green, making people feel "thriving", such a beautiful "spring" scenery, accompanying who can rejoice under the moon?
"Reduce the heat in the clothing room, increase the leaves of the tree to remove the cold"; "grass green birds call puppets, red flowers and butterflies stop single". Two and two opposite.
The whole poem rhymes with "cold rhyme". The first sentence: "Spring Solstice to Winter Yan" The "Yan" character is "delete rhyme", which is in line with the "poetic rhythm" of "the first sentence can be pressed to rhyme". The seventh sentence: "Who looks at the green branches", in line with the "special sentence pattern" in the "poetic grammar": ping ping ping. This sound rhythm "sentence style" "originated in the Tang Dynasty and prevailed in the Song Dynasty". The ancients thought it was "catchy" and "out of style".
The above tests meet the requirements of the law. The flat format is as follows:
Spring solstice to winter yan (平仄仄平平), wide sidewalk lanes (平平仄仄平). Reduce the heat of the room (仄平平仄仄), and the leaf-increasing trees remove the cold (平仄仄平平). Grass green bird call puppet (仄仄仄中仄), flower red butterfly stop single (平平仄中). Who does Zhiqing look forward to (平平仄平仄), the contract under the moon (仄仄仄中平)?
The reason why the words are rewritten is because the original (March 20, 2016) jaw link (three and four sentences) "reduce the heat of the room, increase the heart of the leaf increase tree" of the "leaf increase tree heart cold" sentence, people are prone to ambiguity - is the leaf increase tree heart cold?
For several years, "doubtful" has not known how to correct it? At the beginning of 2022, I signed up for the poetry class of Haidian District University for the Aged, and the ambiguity of "leaf-increasing tree heart cold" and "old things are recalled", and after speculation and deliberation, there was occasionally a day and "suddenly realized" the final draft. In order to be dual and conform to the poetic rhythm, the jaw joints are modified. After the modification, it is more in line with the requirements and original meaning of the law.
Verses and verses are also known as "verses". Writing "grammatical poems" needs to conform to the rules of the predecessors' "conventions", such as: can not be lonely and peaceful, can not lose the sticky, can not lose the right sound law; must not rhyme with neighbors (the first sentence can be pledged), and according to the rhyme of the "Pingshui Rhyme" rhyme book rhyme to the end of the rhyme; but also have the mood, thought, word count, the limit of the battle (jaw, neck joint) and other regulations. Writing "words" is the same as writing "grammatical poems", which needs to conform to the rules of the previous generation's "conventional" sound rhythm, word rhythm, and rhyme (according to the rhyme book of "Cilin Zheng Rhyme" rhyme book) and other rules.
When composing a poem (word), the depression of "meditating" and "stripping away the cocoon", and the gorgeous joyful mood of "pupating into a butterfly" after the poem (word), the taste of the poem (word) can only be experienced in the author's heart.
"Ancient for the present". Although he is a lawyer in Beijing, in addition to doing a good job as a lawyer, "in his spare time", inheriting, discarding and developing one of the traditional gezhi poems of one of the cultural treasures is both "self-cultivation" and recording the process.
He Yongqiang (Wangshan) original works on March 20, 2016 (published at 17:38 on March 31, 2018), and rewritten poems on April 23, 2022, written at his residence in Beijing.
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Selected message: Jingying Shenbi (Qi Runhe), there are more people, the laneways are crowded and narrow, how can it be said to be "wide"?
Beijing lawyer He Yongqiang (author):
"The tide is flat on both sides of the river, and the wind is hanging in the sails." It actually means the same thing. The tidal water is equal to the width of the river bank, which naturally looks wide on both sides of the river visually (boats in the river cannot be seen). "The sidewalk is wide", and it seems crowded when there are many people, but you can see a wide landscape from a high place."