The small building began at the end of 2018, and the seven "peaches" of humble poems:
Dao Tu moved to cut by hand, and Liu Lang opened it several times after he went.
As if nong was a man of the world who often laughed, Nong asked who would come again in a hundred years.
Shortlisted for the small building "Good Poetry in the World". Editor-in-chief Zhang Xuefang invited the small building group. I remember that after being shortlisted, I also improvised a small poem:
Idle up the small building, high eyes.
Rhymes like the water of the Ting River, and the clear waves bring the moon flow.
It expresses the pleasure of entering the small building at that time.
Today, with the developed network, there are countless poetry groups, but Xiaolou is undoubtedly one of the few in the poetry world. There are many dedicated people here, there are boutiques every week, and each issue has something new. In particular, the "weekly jade test" is eye-catching and beneficial.
Xiaolou has gone through many links of receiving, reviewing and editing, and there are many teachers and friends who have worked hard. Take this opportunity to say thank you!
Small buildings such as a hundred gardens, four seasons of splendid embroidery, Meilan bamboo chrysanthemums each compete for their own fangs.
Wish: Xiaolou poetry flowers waft around the world!
Dai Bingnan
January 6, 2022
【Poetry Collection Review】
Passing through the South Pit to get motan to meet Mr. Dong Yiqiao got a sentence
Dai Bingnan (Fujian)
Mi jia picture Hengnan Guo, lotus sends you fragrant green into the eaves.
Accustomed to watching Lan Yan run under his eyes, Hugh locked his eyebrows.
The Nine Bulls wanted to save the valley and pass on the Fa Zi Zhan in person.
Laughing and going out, the stream twilight grass is thin.
Wang Hailiang commented: The middle two have seen the power. Ink painting can be seen in the weather. The "Fourteen Salts" sharp and narrow rhyme poem is not easy to do, and it is so smooth that it deserves the help of zi zhan valley.
Yao Quanming's comments: See the spirit of people, there is no bad place.
Tang Dingkun commented: Rare poet language, ancient and modern are different, but can be combined and integrated to be a hand. Unfortunately, the four sentences are too dangerous, and the tail link is slightly shallow.
Title Landscape Map
Qingfeng towered over several clouds, and a stream of spring paper was cold.
Because of the idleness of the Taoyuan, the Woyou Creek Pavilion has long been a column.
Shen Libin commented: Landscape maps are similar and different from real landscapes, such as the poems that say that landscapes cannot reflect the characteristics of "figures". This poem "Cold on Paper" not only sees the subtlety of the drawing, but also points out the difference between the "landscape map" and the real landscape. The concluding sentence "Lying Tour" has both the idea of finding a peach source and the meaning of coveting the drawing, and it is vivid to write this picture from the side. This poem should be used as a model for inscription (picture) poems.
Dew Lake Village
Hidden under the Qingfeng Peak, find a path.
The streams and mountains are full of trees, and the birds are soft in their voices.
The apricot stained gold paved the floor, and Yun Feicui entered the building.
Knowing Tao Lingyi, cultivating and reading Sheng Fenghou.
Meng Xiangrong commented: The poem narrates the scene of the village and writes its humor. The duo is both dynamic and static. However, the apricot word is slightly ambiguous. Tail link boost, see out of your own mind. Only Tao Ling's cultivation is actually a last resort, not his selfish intentions. Therefore, the use of this code should be taken into account.
The mountains are full of excitement
Lin Quan was getting cold at dusk, and he was powerless to hear the cicadas.
In order to laugh at the white clouds and love the mountains, the return has occupied several peaks.
Shen Libin commented: Although it is a common scene, the perspective is novel and the poetry is good. The whole poem also sees the meaning of "Manxing", which is light and comfortable, and it is indeed a good system.
Qu Qiubai Martyrs Monument
Luohan Peak's head did not change, and the towering white tower towered over the clouds.
Jiangnan Yiyan returned to the vast expanse, full of ears and loose waves in June cold.
Xiao Sanyang commented: Start with the scene, see praise. The sentence is taken from Qu Qiubai's famous sentence: I am the first Yan in Jiangnan, and I praise his revolutionary mind even more for the spring color on the clouds. In the end, Qu Qiubai was sacrificed in June 1935, and he wanted to see the scene at that time, and the remembrance and emotion were all contained in it. The last cold word, the emotion is more intense, the aftertaste is long. This poem is written progressively, great!
Father's Day
There is a lamp in the ventricle, and the lamp has not been extinguished.
Looking back on the old reading days, I was afraid that there was a shortage of paper and pencil.
The clay paper is threaded with needles and threads, and the lamp is folded under the late night.
Ten miles deep mountain road, buried snow through winter.
The cloak is still tied, and the heart of the mind is still hot.
Every time for the bitter tuition, choke on people when they are.
Teach children to be diligent and energetic.
Last night when I fell asleep, Ishibashi waved goodbye.
Comforter Hugh sighed and spoke earnestly.
Get up and lean on the south window, hanging alone in the middle of the moon.
Lone carnivorous beast comments: Good in the pen, things and scenery as seen. The text and the picture can still be refined.
Fuyu-sun Morning Rock Instant View
The red leaves are like Dan's eyes, a cry of birds and a forest.
Qingquan also loves the fun in the mountains, and refuses to flow to yanlan.
Zhang Chunyi commented: This poem describes the beauty of Chaodouyan. The poet used Qili's vision, took form and color as the medium, and turned the poetic realm into a painting, and painted an ink map.
Mengxin commented: The first link from the poetry of the predecessor and the end of the link use a variety of modification techniques to obtain the miracle effect of "irrational magic", which is the best structure of "imagining things".
Guilin Duxiu Peak
The independent sky wants to insert the sky, and to and from the clouds to make poetry immortals.
There is no wing, overlooking the human world with only one punch.
Comments to Xiaowen: I haven't read this extremely pure, simple and poetic language for a long time. It revealed an invisible dashing and arrogance between the lines, coupled with rich imagination and bold metaphors, which immediately attracted my attention. I also have to admire the poet's thorough grasp and expression of this language art of poetry, which shows the poet's ability to express the language of poetry.
Looking at the whole poem, it is good at using anthropomorphic tone to describe the posture and spiritual outlook of Guilin's "Duxiu Peak". With "want to insert the sky", he wrote the majesty and height of "Duxiu Peak", as well as the momentum. A "desire" word, the combination of virtual and real, opening and closing with a degree. Going back and forth in the clouds, accompanying the clouds, and "composing poetry immortals" at leisure, he wrote the dashing and boldness of "Duxiu Peak". And it is the body that has no worries, the heart is unfettered, such as the roc spreading its wings to be able to look down on the human world. It compares the human world to a fist to describe, and the imagination is extremely bold and rich. It takes courage, and it takes the power of the heart. If you don't have a mind as broad as the ocean, how can you do it?
Dai Bingnan character Yun'an, the number of the long ridge mountain people. Fujian Changting people. He is a member of the Chinese Poetry Society.
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