Xiao Lou published, I met her, it is a fate. At first, after a long period of follow-up reading, I met many excellent contemporary poets and had zero-distance contact with contemporary poetry. At that time, I did not dare to expect to publish my works. Later, my heart itched, and I began to post poems in the message area, and occasionally submitted a manuscript to the mailbox. This long pursuit process is very wonderful and happy. It wasn't until July 29, 2019, that my seven-sentence "Lu Xingxing" climbed the small building for the first time. On that day, I happily wrote a testimonial when forwarding: "Climbing a small building is like going up a mountain!" Since then, he has begun to publish works in the "Little Building Listening to the Rain Weekly" and has published dozens of poems so far. Since then, Xiaolou has become more and more cordial, vivid and vivid in my heart.
Editor-in-chief Zhang Xuefang, group writer Wang Zhiwei, Cai Zhicheng, Liao Runchang teacher, proofreading teacher Feng Xiao, although we usually do not communicate much in the group, but we have established a very sincere and subtle trust with each other.
The relationship between poets and poetry journals is not as simple as you submit articles, I publish articles, it is a kind of mutual appreciation, a kind of mutual recognition, and a kind of mutual achievement.
Every poet wants to write a good work, and every poetry journal wants to create a good column. The "Weekly Jade Test" column can be said to be the golden signboard of the small building. A large number of poetry critics watered her with painstaking efforts, and they blossomed delicate flowers, which attracted the wide attention of readers.
The small building is thick to me! Over the course of two years, the humble work has been supported by many poetry critics, and ten poems have been reviewed last year alone. This compilation is not only a summary, but also a tribute.
The small building that is famous in the poetry world has become a poetic habitat for poets at home and abroad. I only hope that she will do better and better.
Ding Yonghai
Published: January 4, 2021
【Poetry Collection Review】
Gengzi Layue's late steps met the snow
Heavy snow throws lights on the sky, looking up at the moon.
The driver and I were silent, only asking the door to be less idle.
Ah Li commented: The snow has already fallen, how can the moon still be expected between the two? And with the driver to nag in violation of traffic rules, although the driver is not nagging, it is also advisable to write in the poem. Another: nagging words, flat water rhyme is flat sound? If you look at it with a new rhyme, two sentences look out? For reference.
Sharpen the knife
Shouting for a long time, Mars bursts with water.
It is very fast for people, and there is no way to count the deep ravines.
Zhang Qingkai commented: The topic is good, and the conclusion is the purpose of the topic. Turn the pun, dedication as beauty, enjoy it. The description of the sentence is too plain, fails to add color, or can "sweat" and "water" to inject some emotion.
Bird's eye
The window sill of the house is falling, and the hair is buried in the feathers.
Afraid of panic and putting down the pen, it is not enough to scrutinize.
Yang Jinglong commented: The five are the silhouettes and sketches in the poem, because of its short body, limited words and sentences, and cannot be laid out, so it is most suitable for writing about a moment's smell, a moment's experience, and a moment's perception. As the poem is written, the author is spreading paper and pencil inside the window, making a new poem, looking up and catching a glimpse of a house finch falling outside the window, burying his head in combing feathers. The poet was afraid of disturbing the family, so he gently shelved his pen and gave up the careful consideration and polishing of the verses. The daily scene outside the window of the first two sentences, and the psychological activities of the characters in the last two sentences, the transfer of nature, shows that the poet is affectionate and has a benevolent heart that is good at body and matter. Reading this contemporary five-word poem, people can't help but think of a small word between the five generations of flowers: "Shore far away Shaping." The sun is obliquely returning to the road in the evening. Peacock self-pity golden tail. Waterfront. Recognize pedestrians who are shocked. In fact, the poet may wish to continue to chant oh deliberation, because it is a house sparrow, naturally and the poet of the home is intimate, so even if the poet's knocking on the golden jade sound, for a while shocked by this comb feather family bird, think it will also "recognize the poet can not be surprised", continue to comb its lovely feathers, and the poet can continue to write his own beautiful and meaningful work of writing poetry.
Turn over the teacher's graduation photo
A period of youth is scattered, and young boys and girls are dressed in clay.
Deep in the crease, only the original intention has not turned yellow.
Chen Tingyou commented: Everyone has it in their hearts, but none of them have it. This work has reached the realm of transformation.
Chen Zhiwen commented: The dialogue between time and space is the eternal theme of life. The magic lies in a fragrance, a dress, a yellow. The color and fragrance are all there!
Think of the small village
The mud wall of the broken table is invaded by white dew, and the dog Dou dou learns pinyin.
Childhood followed the sun, and the footsteps of the school bag did not sink.
Chen Tingyou commented: Nostalgia, always a mixture of sorrow and joy. Even if it is bland, it also makes tears.
Sheng Kui Tibet went to receive the award
Take a turn around the streets of Lhasa, and the snow eagles above the Red Palace will spin.
Guess Junding and Cangyang meet, and infinite poetry is ignited.
Note: Born queen, colleague Liu Junye.
Chen Tingyou commented: The first two sentences are good, good in the word "spin"; the transfer sentence is good, good in the god to mention the condensation; but the last sentence is general, not caught. Because the poetry is ignited, it is not necessarily to see Cangyang.
Osmanthus chant
The old wife's name is Gui, so Aisi flowers.
Even if he encounters others, he feels home for no reason.
Lonely Mountain Plum Rain Commentary: A song of humorous and true feelings, the deep affection of the two of them. The reason for the lack of the first sentence the author does not necessarily appreciate the osmanthus flower, but the poet loves the gui for a very beautiful reason. As far as poetry is concerned, this idea does not seem to be inferior to the wisdom of quoting scriptures. Straight to the chest, but do not feel too blunt. Sometimes, the law cannot be, and the voice flowing from the bottom of the heart naturally sculpts.
Watch the play
The old clown came away from the clown and pretended to be Chincha.
Without exception, three fires were fired, and the cloth was draped to cover people's eyes and ears.
Lonely Mountain Meiyu Comment: The character image content of the author's trick is understood with the new official who has been in office since ancient times and is good at confusing the public. The pen is simple and vivid. The aftertaste may be increased.
Cry sister
Last night there was also a video, bad news this morning report.
Sit still and cry for a long time, spare Micro Signal.
Lonely Mountain Plum Rain Review: The author writes about the more impermanence of life in the internet/video era. The shortening of the space-time distance in Gein increases the abruptness of the loss. On the other hand, the Internet and WeChat also make the estrangement of relatives and friends caused by postmodern busyness seem to have a meta-universe (virtual space) place that can be slightly compensated for by family and friendship... Condolences to Mr. Ding, and I hope you mourn.
Heavy snow rewards old classmates SMS
The old family is lonely, and the cold weather should be considered to be the same.
The Liangzhou brothers are like a small stove in Xiangshan.
Li Junru commented: With the classic of Fragrant Mountain. The language is plain, the use is accurate, and although the expression technique is very simple, it feels that there are countless meanings that are included in these four sentences.
Ding Yonghai, a native of Lanzhou, Gansu, is a middle school Chinese teacher, a member of the Gansu Writers Association, and a member of the Chinese Poetry Society.
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Published: January 2, 2022
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