A friend asked what does the "aviary" mean by "aviary" that is like snow?
This question is very interesting, what does "aviary" mean, isn't it a bird's nest? But how can a bird's nest be "like snow"?
So it obviously doesn't make sense here, but when a large number of people on the Internet talk about SuManshu, they all talk about this poem. Because Su Manshu is a very special person, not only is he a writer and translator, but he has also been ordained three times, and naturally he has also been vulgar several times. Not only is he a poet monk, but he is also a love monk, and at the same time he is entangled with many women - this poem is written for a Japanese girl. Such a talent, also known as the last near-body poet, bizarre life, tortuous love road, coupled with an identity and talent similar to Cangyang Gyatso, made Su Manshu one of the favorite materials for Buddhist writers who talk about poetry, poetry monks and writers who like to talk about modern celebrities.
Unfortunately, they have only paid attention to Su Manshu's talents and privacy in life, accompanied by self-speculation and explanation of "Benshi Poem", but they never dared to doubt whether the works of "Bird Raw Fish Soup" were wrong.
The "aviary" here is clearly a mistransmission, but it has been expounded and played by countless people as Sumanshu's writing. If you search for this sentence "The aviary Lingbo muscles are like snow", you will definitely brush up on a video of a big monk talking about Zen poetry, saying that it is Zen, it is simply a reproduction of the living Buddha, as if Su Manshu is this meaning - it is estimated that there will be many people singing the Buddha trumpet and praising it - the ignorance of culture is so far, what can Be beneficial to Buddhism?
Buddhism is a subject of knowledge, not a matter of course.
But what Buddhism wants is not to question it, and to believe in it when it sees a bald head and a yellow robe.
The original poem is one of SuManshu's "Benshi Poems":
Usher Lingbo's muscles are like snow, and he holds the red leaf sophistry inscription.
He also wept mercilessly, hating not meeting without shaving.
See no, it's "Usher". What does "Usher" mean? Ushe is a goddess, quoted from "According to the Brahmanese tradition, the goddess Ushe guards the heavenly pavilion and feasts on the gods", which refers to the recipient of this poem, that is, the Japanese girl Whose love and love with him, Hyakusuke Maple, who hopes to go further with him, but Sumanshu shirks it as a Buddhist.
However, refusing to refuse, the talented Su Shi monk is not a straight man, he chose the most literary way - writing poetry.
Since the two have been happy with each other and have the heart to refuse, it is natural to pay attention to the art of rejection, not to be cold, and to be like Li Shutong, a master of Hongyi. Therefore, in the first sentence, I will first exaggerate the Hyakusuke Maple to the heavens.
"Ushe Lingbo muscles like snow" - you are like the goddess of the Buddha's kingdom, with the posture of Luoshen (Lingbo), and your skin is white and bright.
Such a beautiful woman, but did not hesitate to surrender her identity for me, like the former dynasty palace girl Red Leaf inscription poem to kiss me. The red leaf inscription poem is a popular story in the Tang legend, probably referring to the large number of palace women in the Tang Dynasty, which is reflected in a large number of Tang Dynasty palace complaint poems. The palace ladies did not get the favor of the emperor, and spent their time in the palace, there was the use of sycamore leaves to write poems flowing out of the palace gutters to dispel loneliness, plus the self-condition of some poets, some legendary oil and vinegar, forming the old classic of "red leaf inscription poems". Here Su Manshu is used to imply that Baisuke Fengzi further takes herself emotionally, improves the identity of the other party, and makes the woman feel that she is the party who gives, not the party who asks, both to earn face for the other party and to win for herself.
"Holding the Red Leaf Inscription Poem" - Today is no better than in the past, it is necessary to use the flowing water to convey affection, noble you personally to convey your affection to me, let me sincerely fear.
When you're done talking nicely, you have to showdown. Therefore, the third and fourth sentences are turned crisply and neatly, and never drag the mud and water.
"I also have a bowl of merciless tears, and I hate not meeting when I am not shaved." I have received your affection for me, but I can only reject you, not because I am ruthless, but because we are not born at the right time. You are very good and beautiful, but unfortunately I have become a monk, and there is no two-fold Dharma in the world.
These two sentences are actually rewritten sentences, and the original poem is Tang Zhang's "Returning the Emperor Mingzhu with tears, hating not meeting and not marrying". Although Zhang Yuan's "Festival Woman Yin" looks like a euphemistic rejection of the suitors of affectionate money, it actually uses this image metaphor to reject the digging of the central civil officials by the lord of the clan. However, because of the huge power of the other party, such as the sun in the sky, Zhang Zhi even if he refused, he did not want to offend, so he came up with the "Le fu poem", similar to Cao Zhi's "long death into the King's Huai" spring and autumn brushwork to respond.
As a result, I don't want these two sentences to be written in the bone, suitable for too many men and women who are wrong in the world, but instead become a representative sentence of regret feelings - a woman, after marriage, meets her ideal type, but is afraid that she will sigh in her heart: "Hate not to meet when not married."
As for Sumanshu's changes to these two sentences, this must be done. First, he has no pearl to return, so it is changed to "a bowl of ruthless tears", the word "bowl" strengthens identity, "ruthless" and "tears" form a phrase with opposite meanings, how can there be tears? So in fact, it is not heartless, but it is involuntary. Changing the word "marry" to "shave" in the sentence is naturally a rewrite of the actual situation. The first is that he is a man, and it is inappropriate to use the word "marry"; the second is that he is a monk, of course, using "shaving" as the dividing line of his identity.
Therefore, the changes in these two sentences are reasonable.
But it's not as good as some of the touted handwriting.
Reasonable, but not rosy.
And Zhang Yuan's original sentence, the difference is too far.
This is a standard song that does not rhyme, and the seven absolutes of the "four branches" of the flat water rhyme are correct and rigorous. As "the last peak of the near-body poets of the Republic of China", there is no need to worry about the format, and we do not need to put a beak here.
Su Manshu's work, things are clear, but if you want to say the level of art, you can only say that it is quite average, far inferior to some of his other works.
Selected poems
Jasper Mo worries about the world,
Fellow country fairies are alone.
The robes are dotted with suspicious cherry petals,
Half lipid marks and half tear marks.
Spring Rain Building Head Shakuhachi,
When to return to Zhejiang Tide.
The broken bowl of the man's shoes is unrecognizable,
Step over the cherry blossom bridge.
Modern people look at Su Manshu, it is easy to be amazed by his magical life experience, multi-faceted literary talent, in the face of such a character, it is easy to lose the judgment of literature itself.
As far as poetry is concerned, this rewritten work is really general. Not on the poetry of poetry, standing in the situation at that time, in the face of the tearful Hyakusuke Maple, Su Manshu's beautiful refusal means, although some people are dizzying, but I have to say that it is quite scummy.
What is even more ridiculous is that today's people read this work as "Aviary Lingbo Muscle Like Snow", and can also interpret a more profound "philosophy", in fact, when you think about it, it is not absurd - isn't everything in the world like this, and it is not a study, how many people are serious?
There are even more absurd things, some people think that "hate not meeting when not shaved" is not changed well - in fact, it is really not good, so they start to think, looking for a more appropriate word, the word "shaved" is replaced by the word "hipster": "Also a bowl of ruthless tears, hate not to meet when not fashionable."
This is so good, the word looks ancient, "hip" is the ancient toddler's short hair hanging in front of the forehead. How good is this, all of a sudden, the "hate does not meet" advanced to two small guesses, is not more impressive?
These are some words that are taken for granted and out of stock.
"Hipster" is Yang Ping, Ping Shui Rhyme "Four Hao" Department, so changed, the last sentence became "仄仄平平仄平平", a good rhythm poem, lost, out of the law.
Of course, as an ancient poetry, there is no big problem, but it has always been changed from the ancient style to the grid, and there is no practice of rewriting the ancient style from the style.
It's as if you've learned to use chopsticks to eat, and in places where you all eat with chopsticks, you don't break people's chopsticks and force others to eat with your hands.