preface
Classes 1-27 of the seven-sentence pattern were introduced earlier, and continue today to introduce classes 28-30. It is still based on five sentences, and is analyzed by inserting 2 words in different positions and expanding them into seven sentences.
The content is from Mr. Wang Li's "Chinese Poetics".
28. Expanded from the 70th category of five words
The characteristics of the 70th category of five words: the sentence form is wrapped in a 3-word predicate form. There are two main types.
The subject is a noun, N-Vnn-V, in the form of a 3-word predicate, for example:
Stars - linwan households - moving, moon - nine clouds - more.
Mountains - Linqingsai - Broken, River - To Baiyun - Ping.
Tree- Take the city Wu - go, jiang - even twilight rain - sorrow.
The subject is a verb or adjective, V(F)-vnn---F, for example:
Listen - Linguan Moon - Bitter, Clear - Into the Sea Breeze - Micro.
There are 3 ways to expand this sentence form into seven sentences.
1. Insert an adjective noun in the first word and an adverb in the third word
River stork - Qiaodang trail - bath, neighbor chicken - also over the short wall - come. Remove the 2 words and simplify it to five sentences as: stork - when the trail - bath, chicken - over the short wall - come.
The corresponding five sentences are: 樯 - take the city Wu - go, jiang - even twilight rain - sorrow. Add 2 words, expanded to seven sentences: White Tree - Far Away City Wu - Go, Han Jiang - Even Twilight Rain - Sorrow.
From Du Fu's Seven Laws, "Wang Seventeen Attendants" brought wine to the Caotang to be sent... Please invite the thirty-five envoys of the High School to come with you:
The old man lay down steadily, and the white house was cold and warm.
The stork happened to be a trail bath, and the neighbor chicken came over the short wall.
Embroidered clothes are often allowed to carry home, and soap covers can forget to fold wild plums.
The fake frost threatens the mountain Jane, and must become a drunken xi chi back.
2. Insert an adjective into the 1st word and an adverb into the 3rd word
Blue water - far from a thousand streams - falling, jade mountain - high and two peaks - cold. Remove the 2 words and simplify it to five sentences: water - from a thousand streams - falling, mountains - and two peaks - cold. The middle predicate form uses a number word: from a thousand streams, and two peaks.
The corresponding five sentences are: stars - linwan households - moving, moon - nine clouds - more. Add 2 words, such as: the stars - high lin ten thousand households - moving, lonely moon - also leaning nine xiao - more.
From Du Fu's Seven Laws of The Nine Days of Lantian Cui's Zhuang:
Old age sad autumn strong self-forgiveness, happy today to do the king's joy.
Shame will short hair also blow hat, smile Qianqian bystander for the crown.
The blue water fell far from a thousand streams, and the jade mountain was high and the two peaks were cold.
Who will know about this next year? Drunkenly take a closer look at the cocoon.
3, the 1st and 2nd words are the name words, when a noun is used, the 3rd word is inserted into the adverb
Peach blossoms fall thinly, yellow birds fly at the same time as white birds. Remove 2 words and simplify it to five sentences: flower - yang flower - fall, bird - white bird - fly.
This link is a double pair, with 2 flowers on the top and 2 birds on the bottom, which is more special. The 1st and 2nd words are a word, leaving only one word, and without knowing what to do, merge into one word. For example: cherry blossom - poplar flower - fall, magpie - white bird - fly.
The corresponding five sentences are: mountain - Linqingsai - broken, Jiang - to Baiyun - Ping, Chushan - Zhenglin Qingsai - broken, Yangtze River - gradual to Baiyun - Ping,
From Du Fu's Seven Laws of Qu Jiang versus wine:
The head of the river outside the garden could not return, and the water spirit palace turned slightly.
Peach blossoms fall thinly, yellow birds fly at the same time as white birds.
Indulging in drinking for a long time and judging people to abandon each other, laziness is really contrary to the world.
The official felt even more distant, and the old man was injured and did not brush his clothes.
29. Expanded from the 77th category of the Five Words
The characteristics of the 77th category of five words: the first 2 word name words, the last 3 words double predicate. For example:
Qiang women still cry, and Hu'er walks and sings. bN-V-dV
There are two ways to expand this sentence form into seven sentences.
1. Add modified nouns in front.
Mr. Wang Li's example is: lonely city - return to the red will be, near the city - floating smoke and heavy. After removing the 2 words, it is: back to the photo - red will be collected, floating smoke - green and heavy.
The corresponding five sentences are: Qiang women still cry, Hu Er walks and sings. Add 2 words, such as: before the car - Qiang women still cry, horseback - Hu Er line and song.
From Du Fu's Seven Laws of "Sending Pei Shidi to the Bell Tower of the Si'an Temple":
Twilight leaned on the tall building against the snow peak, and the monk came silently to chime the bell.
The lonely city will return to the red, and the nearby city will be green and heavy.
Many diseases and loneliness are often lonely, and the old people do not see each other calmly.
Zhijun thinks bitterly about the thinness of the poem, and is too lazy to travel to everything.
2. Words 3 and 4, and words 5 and 6 are parallel words
The second instrument - clear turbidity - is still high, three volts - hot steaming - must be there or not. The 3rd and 4th characters, the 5th and 6th characters are all inseparable words, but in order to illustrate the sentence pattern, 2 words can be removed and simplified to five sentences: eryi - qing - also down, three volts - yan - fixed nothing.
The corresponding five sentences are: Qiang women still cry, Hu Er walks and sings. Add 2 words, such as: Qiang woman - speech - also weeping, Hu'er - walking - and chanting.
From Du Fu's Seven Laws of "And Do This To Serve the King":
The northwest building became the capital of Xiongchu, and the mountains and mountains scattered the rivers and lakes.
The two instruments are still high and turbid, and the three volts are steamed or not.
Pushing the hub for a few years is only calm, dragging the sleeve all day long.
The white head taught Jian Yan to be able to endow, and it was as if he were a doctor.
30. Expanded from the 81st category of the Five Words
The characteristics of the 81st category of five words: the first 2 words of the name of the word, the last 3 words of sentence form. For example:
The grass and trees are late, and the frost and snow of the Guanhe River are clear. NN-NN-F。
Sai custom - people - none - well, yamada - rice - there is - sand. nN-N-V-N。
There are also 3 ways to expand this sentence form into seven sentences.
1. Preceded by a modified predicate form
Zhibei - Guanshan Jingu Zhen, Zhengxi - Chema Yushu Chi. Remove 2 words and simplify them to five sentences: Guan Shan Jin Gu Zhen, Che Ma Yu Shu Chi
The corresponding five sentences are: the grass and trees are late, and the frost and snow of the Guanhe River are clear. Add 2 words, such as: near autumn - grass and tree years late, welcome guests - Guanhe frost and snow clear.
From du Fu's Seven Laws of Qiu Xing Eight Songs, No. 4:
Hearing that Chang'an is like playing chess, the world has been sad for a hundred years.
The first house of the princes is the new lord, and the literary and martial clothes are different from the past.
Zhibei Guanshan Jingu Zhen, Zhengxi Che Ma Yu Shu Chi.
The fish dragon is lonely and the autumn river is cold, and the homeland is peaceful and thoughtful.
2. The first 4 words are double-named words
Gao Jiang - Rapid Gorge - Thunder Bucket, Gu Mu - Cang Teng - Sun and Moon Dusk. Remove 2 words and simplify them to five sentences: River - Gorge - Thunder Bucket, Wood - Vine - Sun and Moon Dusk.
The corresponding five sentences are: the grass and trees are late, and the frost and snow of the Guanhe River are clear. Add 2 words, such as: weeds - dead wood - years late, Hanguan - Long River - frost and snow Clear.
From Du Fu's Seven Laws of the White Emperor:
The clouds in the White Emperor City went out, and the White Emperor City rained and turned the basin.
High River Rapid Gorge Thunder Fight, Ancient Wood Cang vine sun and moon dusk.
It is better to return to Ma Yi than to return to Ma Yi, and there are now a hundred families in a thousand families.
Mourning widows to the end, weeping where is Akihara?
3. Insert adverbs into words 3 and 4
Dry go- back to the dust with the eyes, sideburns - should also - snow full of head. Remove the two words of 3 and 4 and simplify them to five sentences: dry go - dust with the eyes, sideburns - snow full of head.
The corresponding five sentences are: Sai folklore - people - none - well, Yamada - rice - there is - sand. Add 2 characters, Sai custom - never - people without wells, Yamada - He Kan - rice with sand.
From Du Fu's Seven Laws of "Sending Du Wei, NearLy Hearing the Wide Law Away from Xinzhou":
Recently heard about the wide law away from the new state, I want to see the return of Prozac.
Although the guests are all gone, the sad king has been flowing for ten years.
The dry situation is dusty, and the sideburns should be full of snow.
The Yulei inscription book is confused, when will it be more qujiang tour.
Conclusion
If the five sentences are inserted in positions 3 or 4, they are all out of step with the expansion.
The above examples of Du Fu's poems also have awkward sentences, such as: the grass and trees are late, and the Guanhe River is frosted and snowy. Five-dimensional body, the sentence to save.
These additions and subtractions are all meant to illustrate the structural changes in the sentence pattern, so there is no need to impose a law. When actually composing poetry, the poet will naturally adjust to the rhythm.
@Old Street Taste
From Du Fu's poems to see the Seven Laws Sentence 15, the flower path has not been swept by guests, and the Pengmen is now open for Jun