The lakes and mountains are old in autumn, and the cold rain is nearly the morning rest. A candle red shadow, a few autumns between the eyebrows. 2022-02-10 Some scenes, really can't use "eight sentences" to nag. Small scene, by no gossip

The lakes and mountains are old in autumn, and the cold rain is nearly the morning rest.

A candle red shadow, a few autumns between the eyebrows.

2022-02-10

Some scenes, really can't use the "eight sentences" to talk about it.

Small scenes, by not gossiping. Too much nonsense will only make it entangled...

This poem was composed into "eight sentences"? Structurally a bit "top-heavy", rather than bloated and swollen, it is better to cut it twice, and the two are not related...

This knife came happily. After the poem cuts off its tail, it is much more ingenious.

This kind of poetry, in terms of technique, if it is said in a mysterious way, can be vernacular for a long time. If you put it in layman's terms, you can give an example, just like "screw screws", a circle of force, layer by layer. This kind of use is not the method of "stacking", the rhythmic poems are stacked more, and the sentences are used less. Words, not much to use, the best is to find cold and cold, miserable and miserable relatives... However, it is not the stacking of words, but the stacking of "meaning". Poetry, "meaning" is its main spirit.

Today's "eight sentences" and "positive" poems have been written. This "four sentences" belongs to the gift. It's not that the giveaways are all inferior, this is much better than the previous "eight sentences"...

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