A good poem has its "poetic context", and the "poetic realm" comes from the poet's "state of mind". For poets, they have their own inspiration, ingenuity, knowledge, experience, and charm; to read a good poem, you must obtain "enlightenment", that is, from the "poetic realm" to the poet's "state of mind", which is the understanding of the poet's inspiration, ingenuity, knowledge, experience, and charm. Read a poem, get one, be self-sufficient.
961
The entrance to the goods is occupied
Ge Yong (Chongqing)
Nobles and honors the emperor, and hundreds of workers live in arrogance and respect themselves.
The old chef is used to iron and fire, with knife marks and scald marks.
From the glory of the nobles, to the hundreds of workers, and then to the old chef, from noble to low, layer by layer, gradually enlarging the image of the old chef and forming a tension. Accustomed to iron and fire, knife marks see its hardships. (Guiqiao)
962
Pei Xiu hand planted ginkgo biloba
White Running Hall
After all the dust and noise, the color of thousands of autumns ginkgo biloba is still there.
The wind rustles like listening to Mr. Old Age.
Time has passed, but Qianqiu Ginkgo has witnessed the vicissitudes of personnel. The wind blows the branches and leaves, and the heartstrings of the poet's emotions are touched, "like listening to Mr. Old Year". Time and space are combined, and Bixing is used together. (Guiqiao)
963
Return
Wang Wenlong (Zhejiang)
Stayed in the city for a long time, and returned to the strange upward journey.
They are all familiar with each other, and they are dumb and unknown.
Most of the "encounters" are the children and grandchildren of playmates or childhood playmates who have not been seen for a long time, so they are "familiar" and "unknown." "Dumb mouth" image. Time is fleeting, and the feelings of the vicissitudes of the world are naturally revealed in the simple and unpretentious language. (Guiqiao)
964
Mid-Autumn Festival, fishing in Iwama Lake
Hugging the calves
The color of the lake is not there, and the shadow of the green pole is not alone.
The next year the sand gulls are looking for this, and the wind is passing through the reeds and the wild sounds are sparse.
"There is no or not", "shadow", "He Mi" and "sound sparseness" constitute a kind of hazy and confused situation, which contains many incomplete meanings. (Guiqiao)
965
Autumn nostalgia
Ding did not know
Ten years of Ping's tracks turned in ten directions, and the sound of warblers became long as the sound of geese.
The heart is like late autumn rain, and every time you encounter a westerly wind, you feel cool.
The whereabouts of "duckweed" are uncertain, and the words and deeds of "warblers" and "geese" are hurried. "Late autumn rain" meets "west wind" and "guest heart" is doubly "cool", and the words of the other are also like this. (Guiqiao)
966
Guoqing Temple
Yun Qing XIV
White clouds and shadows fall on Sungai, and mountain birds call people full of rice.
A piece of gold is not enough to see, and the pure heart always goes to the west of the stone bridge.
What about "Stone Bridge West"? The title looks like it should be "Guoqing Temple" also. However, the first three sentences are extremely laid out to render the surrounding environment, and there are no words to describe the Guoqing Temple, but "the pure heart is always oriented", leaving the reader with unlimited reverie. (Guiqiao)
967
Courier guy
Huang Yunquan (Hubei)
Busy chasing thousands of guests, home delivery is hesitant.
The package is still there, nostalgia is overweight?
20 words, you can base on reality, extract the takeaway brother's spiritual feelings and experiences, and present a true, good and beautiful meaning. (Guiqiao)
968
The 72nd anniversary of the National Day
Jiangnong (Tianjin)
The sun is beautiful, and the autumn is full of fruits.
Looking back at the wind and rain road, the sideburns are white and the scarf is red.
"Sideburns" and "scarf red" form a tension, boost the whole text, followed by people, big themes, small ideas. (Guiqiao)
969
Self-conditioning
Ye Yongxin (Guangdong)
Autumn new cool taste is thin, nervous and difficult to be special.
Difficult to effect rabbit three caves, only pour a pot of wine.
You may wish to be clumsy, why use clever kung fu.
People are similar to the text, and there is no wind and current.
The second couplet "cool taste is thin", the third and fourth couplets are "nervous", hooking up and taking care of it, and opening the door at the beginning and end. Sentences can be seen in the literati situation. (Guiqiao)
970
Autumn hope
Yang Ziyi (Huizhou)
Jiuke knows the autumn half, and judges the hong by Xuan's eyes.
The fence is good in dawn and the sunset on the ridge is red.
The poem is thin because of the flowers, and the heart is empty.
Qingshan is not willing to grow old, so why should he be ashamed of frost.
From looking forward to autumn and then hurting autumn and nostalgia, ups and downs, waves and waves, with the intention of luck pen, natural circulation. The tail link jumped out of the vibration and was freed from the wounded arms. (Guiqiao)
Biography:
The young man once herded cattle on the banks of willow creek and collected salaries in the wilderness of the peach forest; the old man wanted to stick to the heart of the ghost and return to the purity of nature, so he had the alias of Guiqiao. I like to read poetry, and occasionally have one; I scribble and talk about making up for my temperament.
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