A good poem has its "poetic context", and the "poetic realm" comes from the poet's "state of mind". For poets, they have their own inspiration, ingenuity, knowledge, experience, and charm; to read a good poem, you must obtain "enlightenment", that is, from the "poetic realm" to the poet's "state of mind", which is the understanding of the poet's inspiration, ingenuity, knowledge, experience, and charm. Read a poem, get one, be self-sufficient.
1061
Homecoming puzzles
Zhang Lihua (Hebei)
On the street corner of the village, the winter sun is drawn, and the three or five idle men are short and long.
Looking at the only pain in his heart, there was no father's word to ask the cold.
Seeing the idle man and the heart aches, the sadness after pouring out is all in the end of the sentence. (Guiqiao)
1062
In the middle of the Sanqingshan Road
Liu Yushuang
The Cloud Mountain Fog Pavilion is not clear, and the python road is circling nearly Taiqing.
The most joyful mountain people are unworldly, and the sound of hoes is like the sound of footsteps.
The ending sentence is empty and the taste is thick. The emotion of birth is between the sound of hoes and the echoes of the valley. (Guiqiao)
1063
Towards the evening
Zhang Lihua (Hebei)
The cicadas whistle like a stream, and people come and go endlessly.
Why not stand quietly in the downtown area, and the locust flowers are clustered under the branches.
From the "endless" hair, in the downtown, people want to quietly stop, but see "locust flowers under the branches." "Hidden in the closing sentence. (Guiqiao)
1064
Qin Huai
Wang Yutong
Jiang Ling's house is desolate and deep in spring grass, and the beautiful incense upstairs is lonely Zhuqin.
The only remaining piece of Moling Moon flows out of Qingxi.
The house is deep in the grass, the building is silent, and the only remaining piece of moling moon can witness Li Xiangjun, one of the eight Yans of Qin Huai, out of the mud without staining, cynicism, nostalgia for the homeland, and this bright moon flows out with the Qingxi, where do we go to find these past personnel. The closing sentence is somber. (Guiqiao)
1065
Su wang huling mountain villa
Snow windows
Lakes and mountains are leaning on the house, and the birds are smoked and lonely.
Pillow is the most suitable for wind and rainy nights, lying down to listen to the anger of wanlu in the tide.
"Evergreen Anger in the Tide" is a communication fusion of hearing, vision, emotion and thought to expand the scope of readers' feelings. (Guiqiao)
1066
Selling sugar cane for the old man
Black eyes
Livelihood when the street is empty, the white head helplessly cries the west wind.
Ayasha half a horse He zeng saw, envy nanshan selling charcoal.
"Envy" and "selling charcoal", the cruelty, pain, and profundity of reality are all in contrast. (Guiqiao)
1067
Sleepless
Lin Shan
The center of the cigarette is quiet, and the finger gap smoke is lightly hanging.
The stars have eyelashes and night draperies, and a trace of the moon is hot.
Three or four sentences expand the inner space of "not sleeping" and "quiet" to accommodate their emotions. The word "hot" at the end of the sentence is quite wonderful. (Guiqiao)
1068
Night rain
Lin Shan
Recently, the New Year's situation is cool, and the cigarette embers are easy to worry about.
One night in Jiangnan Ding Ning rained, reporting that Ding Ning was in his hometown.
"Ding Ning Rain" wonderful, "and near new year" think of relatives, with the help of night rain, across the space, from this and the other, associated with relatives Ding Ning, ingenious conception, euphemism, intriguing. (Guiqiao)
1069
Over the mountain temple
Xu Yining
Thick clouds deep lock courtyard Xiao Xiao, who holds the wooden fish ginseng lonely.
Ten thousand trees withered and yellowed, and Akiyama was impatient with a knock.
"Akiyama is impatient to knock" Is even more lonely in the ethereal. (Guiqiao)
1070
Behind closed doors
Yuy
Thinking about last year's red behind closed doors, the guest is in a soul-destroying thought.
I turned around and thanked him again, and my career was full of spring breeze.
"Closed door" and "turn around" words come out of the world, "in the end" and "negative" see helplessness. (Guiqiao)
Biography:
The young man once herded cattle on the banks of willow creek and collected salaries in the wilderness of the peach forest; the old man wanted to stick to the heart of the ghost and return to the purity of nature, so he had the alias of Guiqiao. I like to read poetry, and occasionally have one; I scribble and talk about making up for my temperament.
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