Dreams are also silent: "Climbing the Stairs" No. 9 - The Relationship between the Rhythm of Long and Short Sentences and Words
Staggered new growth shorts, emergency stops at the time of undercurrent shock.
The circular wind makes the breath comfortable, and the rivers are light.
It is said that Wang Cang liked to listen to the cries of donkeys in his lifetime, and after his death, Cao Pi took ordinary scribes to make a "donkey singing funeral" for Wang Cang to comfort the dead.
What Wang Cang thought when he heard the donkey's song, we don't know today, but some people with common sense know that among all the animal sounds, the donkey song is the most rhythmic, sometimes high-pitched and sometimes low, high-pitched and sometimes low,High-pitched when the passion is free and unrestrained, low when the deep back is gentle and whimpering and smoking, as one of the representative figures of Jian'an wind and bone, Wang Caizi loves donkey song, perhaps loves this free and unrestrained passion and gentle repressed grievances, listen to the donkey song, long groans and short sighs, swing back to the intestines, staggered, pitching feelings, It's really a long and short tune with rhymes.
People say that listening to the mountains and flowing water and then singing has a fairy style and elegance, and Wang Cang loves to listen to the donkey's song and should also have some insight from it.
In "Climbing the Stairs", the length of the sentence pattern is very exquisite.
Usually, when you are depressed, you will wear colored glasses no matter what you look at, and only see pale gray tones and intricate environmental structures. But Wang Yue's ascent had a different atmosphere.
What he saw in his eyes was an unparalleled spaciousness and superiority, "where Si Yu was located, it was really open and vengeful", not only was it spacious and superb, but also smooth and convenient, there was no obstacle, "The Tongpu Xi of Qingzhang" carried a smooth and natural harmony, "The Changzhou of Leaning on Qu Depression" had a steady and solid flow of homeopathy and gentle flow, and the two sentences constituted the flow of flowing water, both the smooth flow of the river down the river, and the gentle rhyme of the wandering water. Here, "openness" and "communication" are in contrast to his depressed and depressed mood at this time, and "coercion" and "dependence" are in conflict with his long-term feeling of emptiness and helplessness that has suffered from chaos, not to mention, where this building is located, backed by a solid and vast continent, facing the bending and gentle flowing water, taking a foot back is a carefree and calm, and taking a step forward is a graceful expression, how not to let the poets who have a relationship at this time be jealous and unable to help themselves.
This "combination routine" gushes out like flowing water without hanging, and what matters is a "shun" word.
"Shun" to the climax, sudden change of style, with short sentences to promote the rhythm, such as water hitting the stone through, backflow agitation, from the momentum of the flow of water is jumping and rushing but did not change the direction of the flow, but from the sense of rhythm, but to the reader's thinking with the effect of "brake", the momentum of the literary atmosphere is like a wild horse that has lost its reins and is strangled by the reins, and a sharp sound of the front hoof stands up and stops at the edge of the cliff.
To the "Huashi We Ye Huang Ji Ying Domain" seems to have a blank rest, this short pause, attracting great attention, and then, the mood took a sharp turn, negating the previous paving.
In the past, when learning English in school, there was a saying called "yi group", the same meaning group is to be read continuously, before "Hua Shi We Ye Huang Ji Ying Domain", all belong to one yi group, "although xinmei is not wu tu xi" is followed by another meaning group.
Such a long and short rhythm, the ups and downs of the poet's inner involvement and tearing waves.
This passage, from content to form, the treatment of meaning groups and rhythms, is the prototype of later words (also known as long and short sentences), especially Xiao Ling, a literary form.
The staggering of words, not only in the coherence of the filler words, but also in the continuity and cutting of the meaning group, unlike poetry, the transition between the upper and lower sentences of the word can not have too much span, between a small section, is to continuously express the content of the same group of meaning, and it is a flowing trend step by step, such as the long sentence before "Huashi We Ye Huang Ji Ying".
At the node, that is, the beginning of the four-word sentence, the transition turn, from the meaning of the association can not have too much span, but from the tone rhythm to reflect the sense of rupture of the node, that is, in the "Huashi We Ye Huang Ji Ying Domain", take a breath, turn to the next group of meaning, so that you can reflect the aftertaste of the swinging qi in the rhythm.
This long and short rhythm in "Climbing the Stairs" has set a precedent for the creation of small orders or general heart notes in later generations.
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