A good poem has its "poetic context", and the "poetic realm" comes from the poet's "state of mind". For poets, they have their own inspiration, ingenuity, knowledge, experience, and charm; to read a good poem, you must obtain "enlightenment", that is, from the "poetic realm" to the poet's "state of mind", which is the understanding of the poet's inspiration, ingenuity, knowledge, experience, and charm. Read a poem, get one, be self-sufficient.
971
Autumn Gurudwara
Fang Yihong (Zhejiang)
The trip back goose more than ten years, the tent hurriedly passed again.
Outside the door, pinghu lake is full of autumn water, and the reed flowers are thin like sick Vimo.
"Outside the door, pinghu lake is full of autumn water, and the reed flowers are thin like sick Vimo." End with the scenery, a three-fold sentence and out of nature, with the meaning of the fullness of the autumn water of the tangible Ping Lake, the thinness of the reed flowers, and the disease of Wei Mo. (Guiqiao)
972
Fengyang Ming Ancestral Mausoleum
Li Shuxi (Beijing)
Look at Fengyang in the mountains and rivers, and the ancient temple of Ming Ling said Yuanzhang,
There is no way out of the heavens and man-made disasters, forcing the peasants to become emperors.
"There is no way out of heaven and man, forcing the peasants to become emperors." The idea is novel and straight to the chest. In the clear poetry, the feeling of rise and fall is seen. (Guiqiao)
973
Wing Bing
Lu Xiangxian
Can teach the old stone, can make the river deaf.
Once the spring wind melts, fang zhi color is empty.
The two verbs of "old" and "deaf" are quite wonderful, and the sublimation of meaning is sublimated, and the appearance of things is said in the color of ice, and the essence of things is said to be empty with ice. (Guiqiao)
974
Yipu
If you want to escape from what you want, the heart of money is not far away.
Wait for the idle bees to enter, and divide the garden in the middle of spring.
Tighten the word "Yi" and generate hair, and turn it to "wait for idle bees to enter, and divide the spring in the garden." "Words have been ravaged several times. (Guiqiao)
975
Summer
The swarm of insects shouted that the hot dream was difficult to achieve, and the wind died only the rest of the moon was born.
Wanting to shake the jade gui in the Toad Palace, the human world is afraid of autumn sounds.
"The swarm of insects shouts hot" and "the wind dies" is extremely hot on the summer night, and the Taoists have not yet said, "Yue Lusheng" paves the way for the transfer sentence "Want to go to the Toad Palace", and the closing sentence turns to raise the mood, see the poet's compassion (Guiqiao).
976
The title is self-grown carrot
Today, guan lai xiu is in the qi, but the birth body is lower than the grass roots.
Under the red skin is ice clear, enduring the surrounding feces and mud.
In the contrast between xiu, red skin, ice clearing and lower body than grass roots, the surrounding dung mud, we can see the sentiment of red skin radish in a dirty environment to maintain purity. (Guiqiao)
977
Jiuquan Flood River picks up stones
Liu Qinglin
Also seek the shape and quality of the fate, looking back at qilian snow reflecting the sky.
A stone dipped in the wind and left it in his palm, and he took it to the human world to attack the jade.
"Dipping the wind" is stained with ancient meaning, rhyme, style, and news, and those who have this "wind" should attack Yuya with them. (Guiqiao)
978
Visit the New Energy Comprehensive Utilization Pilot Zone
Star Man
After all, Suzhou has the ability to clean up the uppermost level of the high heavens.
And keep the daylight in the palm of your hand, and light up the lanterns at night.
"Packing up the top of the sky" and "keeping the daylight in the palm of your hand" and expressing new things in the form of emotional language should be the foundation of modern poets. (Guiqiao)
979
Flood River Grand Canyon Falls
Splash jade jumping beads can not be collected, with the wind thousands of miles sprinkled with golden autumn.
After Qinglian died, there was no verse, so the Milky Way was empty.
Miao borrowed Qinglian's "suspected to be the Milky Way falling for nine days" from the opposite side, so that readers can experience the majesty of the Hongshui River Grand Canyon Waterfall in regret. (Guiqiao)
980
Late return to the moon
Same
The light of the car fire building melts into the night, and the giant screen echoes a city red.
The small garden is rarely lit, and the moonlight is very different.
"Car fire floor light", "giant screen echo", "rare" and "actually" From the darkness of the dark moon to the "big difference" of the real moon, the same month, the environment is different, the perception is very different. (Guiqiao)
Biography:
The young man once herded cattle on the banks of willow creek and collected salaries in the wilderness of the peach forest; the old man wanted to stick to the heart of the ghost and return to the purity of nature, so he had the alias of Guiqiao. I like to read poetry, and occasionally have one; I scribble and talk about making up for my temperament.
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