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The novel is intensively read "Su Seven Blocks", by Feng Jicai

author:Love to think without a way

Dr. Su's real name is Su Jinshan, in the early years of the Republic of China in the Area of Xiaobailou, he opened a clinic to practice medicine, took rings from his bones, hung up his head card in Tianjin, even foreigners raced horses, broke their arms and legs, and also came to beg him. (Explain the identity of the protagonist, his real name, the era in which he lived, the place where he practiced medicine, and the typical case.) The story is authentic and believable, attracting readers' interest in reading. )

The others were long in robes, thin and strong, fifty miles away, red lips and teeth, eyes racing lamps, chin chin a bunch of goat whiskers, soaked in oil-like black polish. (Write about appearance.) The sentences are short and concise, and the form and spirit are both available, so that the reader can see his person. Speaking openly, the voice came out of the chest cavity, with Dantian qi, as loud as near and far, if he had entered the class to learn drama that year, Bao Zhun would have been Jin Shaoshan's opponent. (Write the sound.) Using hypothetical and exaggerated techniques, it is commensurate with the appearance and makes people feel like they are heard. The movements of the hands are even more "clean and fast", when someone breaks his muscles and bones to find him, what about him? Fingers touched, the skin cut off the flesh, what was going on inside, immediately bright eyes. Suddenly, a pair of white birds raced with both hands, flying up and down, anxious as lightning, only listening to "click, click, click", before the patient felt pain, the broken bone was connected. Patch plaster, put on the splint, the patient goes back to self-care. (Write the action.) The image is vivid and meticulous, highlighting the "clean and fast" and making people immersive. If you come again, you will bow down and thank you for sending a large plaque. (The side sets off Dr. Su's "ability.") "One accurate", fully affirming its superb medical skills, hand to the disease, magic hand rejuvenation. )

>>> the beginning of the story: to explain Dr. Su and his superb medical skills.

People have the ability, temper is quasi-colored. (Transition cleverly.) "Grid" is a dialect that refers to the person's special, less acceptable characteristics. Set the suspense, which leads to the following. Dr. Su has a rule of character, whoever comes to see the disease, no matter whether rich or poor, must first take seven silver dollar codes on the table, he is willing to look at the disease, otherwise he will not take care of it. What's the rule? That's the rule! People scolded him for recognizing money and not recognizing people, and his ability was worth seven yuan, and for some reason he got a degraded nickname called "Su Seven Pieces". He called him Dr. Su in person and called him "Su Seven Blocks" behind his back, and no one knew that his big name Su Jin had scattered.

(Misunderstanding 1: Explain the origin of the nickname, "recognize money but do not recognize people", showing Dr. Su's "personality", giving people a very bad impression.) )

Dr. Su is good at playing cards, one day idle, two card friends to play, three lack of one, he invited the dentist Dr. Hua, who is not far north of the street, to come and put it on a table. Playing with the gods, suddenly the tricycle driver Zhang Si broke in, leaned toward the door, held his left elbow in his right hand, his head was sweating, and the coat around his neck was wet, obviously breaking his arm, and it hurt hard enough. But the tricycle drivers all earn a day to eat a day, which can get seven silver dollars? He said that he owed Dr. Su first, and then he was allowed to pay it back, and when he spoke, he still hummed and screamed in pain. (Rendering the pain and poverty of the injured, the side shows Dr. Su's "grid color.") Deepen people's disgust with Dr. Su, who can't be saved. Who expected Dr. Su to listen to the game did not listen, still draw cards to see the cards to count the cards, or happy or worried or surprised or pretend not to be alarmed, the brain is all on the table. A card friend could not look over, so he pointed his finger outside the door, and Dr. Su's eyes still did not leave the card. The nickname "Su Seven Pieces" is a cut-and-roll.

(Misunderstanding two: the contradiction escalated, without seven yuan money, the tricycle driver was not treated, which once again showed Dr. Su's "personality" and increased people's disgust and contempt for Su Qiyuan. )

The dentist, Dr. Hua, was notoriously kind-hearted, he pushed and said to pee, left the card table and walked to the backyard, drilled out of the back door, circled around the front street, quietly greeted Zhang Si who was leaning against the door, and gave him seven silver dollars in his arms. Without waiting for Zhang Si to be grateful, he turned around and returned to the original way, entered the house and sat back at the card table, and continued to play cards without doing anything.

(Misunderstanding three: Using the kind side of the dentist Dr. Hua to set off the "cold and ruthless" shape of Dr. Su, once again showing Dr. Su's "personality", making people feel that the "Su Seven Blocks" behavior is disgraceful. Misunderstandings arise and the story gradually pushes to a climax. )

>>> story development: Dr. Su adheres to the "rules of the grid color" and does not have seven yuan not to treat the tricycle driver.

After a while, Zhang Si twisted and twisted into the room, and put seven silver dollars on the table one yard. This time was faster than ringing the bell, Dr. Su was already standing in front of Zhang Si, rolling up his sleeves, putting Zhang Si's arm on the table, pinching a few bones, following the hand to pull left and right, pressing down on the top, Zhang Si pulled his shoulders and neck, closed his eyes and teeth, and prepared to take a few heavy blows, but Dr. Su said: "Picked up." (In response to the second paragraph, "Clean and Fast", Dr. Su's "ability" was shown in the on-site treatment.) The combination of the summary introduction and the typical case makes the article structure rigorous and increases the authenticity of the story. At the moment, he applied ointment, splinted on the central part, and gave Zhang Si a few packs of blood-activating and pain-relieving oral medicine face. Zhang Si said that he no longer had money to pay for the medicine, and Dr. Su only said, "I sent this medicine." (Write that Dr. Su is careful and kind.) Contrast with the previous storyline and promote the development of the storyline. then returned to the table.

(Misunderstanding four: exaggerated to write Dr. Su "this is faster than ringing the bell", see the money eyes open, and the previous text "grid color" to take care of, misunderstanding again.) It makes people feel that he really sees money and is obsessed with money. )

Today's cards have their own wins and losses, and they are endless, until when the lights are lit, the stomach is empty and screams, and everyone disperses. Before leaving the door, Dr. Su stretched out his thin hand and stopped Dr. Hua and left him in trouble. After the two card friends left, he took out seven pieces of silver dollars in front of his seat, put them in the palm of Dr. Hua's hand, and said, "There is a sentence, I have to tell you." Don't think that I am not good at heart, but the rules I have made cannot be changed! ”

(The misunderstanding is all solved: Dr. Su himself confessed that the real "ability" lies in kindness and not bad rules.) The author's ingenuity makes the reader sigh. )

>>> the climax of the story: Dr. Su shows his skills to cure the tricycle driver and confesses to solve the misunderstanding.

Dr. Hua brought these words back and pondered them for three days and three nights, but in the end he did not understand the deep meaning of Dr. Su's words. But he admired Dr. Su in his heart for this person.

>>> the end of the story: Dr. Hua admires Dr. Su. Sublimate the theme and be thought-provoking. The main body of the article uses the creative technique of combining depression and yang to praise Dr. Su's integrity, kindness, and adherence to the rules, highlighting the main theme of the novel; the ending shows that Dr. Su's beautiful qualities are admirable, infecting others, and deepening the main theme.

Knowledge building

The narrative twists and turns,Twists and turns//

The novel, centered on the portrayal of characters, reflects the literary genre of social life through a complete storyline and environmental description. Without a unique social environment or natural environment, the novel has no reasonable living space; without typical character images, the novel lacks vitality; without a tortuous and vivid storyline, the novel has a little less flavor. Most of the novels of writer Feng Jicai have a twisty and vivid storyline, and the narrative is often twisted and turned, which is fascinating. In the novel "Seven Blocks of Su", when the author created the image of the protagonist, he cleverly set up a misunderstanding and wanted to suppress it first, and the plot can be described as a twist and turn. First write su seven pieces to give people the impression of "recognizing money and not recognizing people", then write that there is no money and do not give the tricycle driver bone grafting that is unbearable, and then write that the tricycle driver takes seven yuan to pick it up immediately, which is full of misunderstandings, disgusting, and insulting. After the card game is dispersed and the dentist Dr. Hua's self-confession, the reader suddenly realizes that he is also kind, but just sticks to the principle. With an O.Henry-esque ending, the ending of the story is both unexpected and reasonable.

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