Teacher Ying's comments:
This is yan zhao's first serious composition, and it has been revised 3 times! Look, you wasted your creative talent before, write seriously, write with heart, you can write well! A sincere heart touched another sincere heart, so that the flower of friendship could bloom - in the past half a semester, the name "Hongye" has been recited in my ears countless times, and today it is finally mentioned in the text. Lucky, Hongye!
Carefully reading Yan Zhao's text, this child is grinning and crazy (forgive me for using this word to describe, I understand everything), in fact, there is a delicate heart hidden, but sometimes, he does not know how to properly express his emotions. As his teacher, I also found for the first time that this child's written expression turned out to be so concise and fluent - this is also inseparable from his usual rich reading, but before this baby was not enlightened, did not write with heart.
In the third year of junior high school, other dolls who played human games like Yan Zhao before, everyone is catching up, are you still sleeping?
The road ahead is long, the friendship period is long (917 class Zhou Yanzhao)
The Year of the Ugly Cow, one night, thinking about the long road ahead, also missing the friend Hongye. Don't sleep, tired, think of friends, write this article, to cherish the hongye.
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For netizens, some people say that some people are good and some people are bad, but I have my own happiness in the network - no one knows me and no one knows me. Wandering around with the title of "deuterium tritium" allows me (supplement: pour) to get a rare happiness.
One day, a friend application rushed into my eyes, after passing to ask what happened, it turned out that he wanted to join the group and was rejected, knowing the reason, I solved it casually (change: by the way) opened his space, a picture came into view,—— the overall gray, a dark green Shiba Inu squatted in it, only the sign on the head was emitting a green glow. The caption "tired" fills the comments section with comfort. My heart was full of curiosity and worry, so I asked him, it seemed to have an object to talk to, under my comfort, Hongye told me things like a bamboo tube pouring beans - the emergence of another personality led to (supplement: he) parting ways with friends, once unsuccessful, multi-party mediation and frustration, sick thoughts (change: death - the original text is written this word) was found again, I read the message, while constantly comforting, perhaps so, let us become friends who have nothing to talk about.
Suddenly, one day, I accidentally saw a video of him, and the idea of making one germinated in my heart, so I asked Hongye (change: please advise), and Hongye replied to me: "Replay (replay)". I tried to make it, and without even thinking about it, I "snapped" on the ground before even taking the first step - the support of different core APIs was different, resulting in a conflict with opi. Hongye recommended fab-opi (compatibility plugin) to me after asking, and after a simple study, I made a recording, and as a result, a hard indicator was missing - the rendering plugin, without which Replay was useless. Again, under the guidance of Hongye, download, batch unzip, install, and start rendering. After sharing with Hongye, I can't hide my joy to express my gratitude to Hongye, and Hongye instructs me how to adjust the video parameters while playing haha: "Is it okay, is there any communication, besides, we are friends!" (Supplement: Helping each other made me taste the beauty of friendship too—this would make me deduct the question.) (Comment: Students should note that there are not many people who write such materials in the examination room.) Many students also use computers to play games all day, but they can't use them in the article... ）
Today, I am already a junior high school student who has entered the middle school examination hall with half a foot, and Hongye in the distance has also stayed in high school, even so, we will still care for each other, motivate each other, and learn from each other. But in any case, our friendship or (supplement: Xu) will be like the road we will go forward in the future, full of unknowns and challenges, I hope that the long road is long, and our friendship will continue! (Supplement; duration length - it is better to use the title to deduct the question.) ）
