Specifically, it is the first step in writing a good article ("That Thing I Still Remember" by Xiao Yang Rui in the sixth middle school)

Original: Chen Precious 1960 Big Language Composition Today

I still remember that event (610 words)

Sixth Grade Attached Primary 5 Grade Yang Rui

That was two years ago, I can't remember the months and days, the time was around 4 p.m. ...

That morning, my mother and I returned to Haozhuang, my grandmother's house. As soon as I entered my grandmother's house, I saw my beloved puppy, Hua Hua, a black female poodle who was 4 years old. I said hello to my grandparents and went to find my eldest mother's little three Ni Yang Shiqi, she is my sister, I like to call her "Xiao Qiqi". I played with Xiao Qiqi for a while, I will not list what I played, after eating at noon it was already 1 o'clock, my sister and I were "sleeping" in bed, around three o'clock in the afternoon, we got up from bed, and played for a while until 3:30, Xiao Qiqi said, "Sister Yang Rui, I went to my house to get some dolls, you don't go with me." I said, "Okay." ”

After about 15 minutes, Xiao Qiqi had not returned, I just wanted to go to her, a car came, there was a cage on the car, I thought: What is this for! So I stayed and watched. Grandpa took the flower over, untied the necklace, carried it to the cage, and closed the cage door. Hua Hua kept screaming, and I was very confused, so I asked Grandpa, "Why do you want to lock up the puppy?" Grandpa said: "The puppy has allergies" to be sent to the hospital for treatment, if it is good, it can come back. Grandpa finished speaking, and the car left. I watched the flowers leave, turned around and ran to the living room, sat on the couch and cried, and kept saying, "Why, I don't want it to leave." My mother comforted me next to me: "It is possible that I will come back." "I ignored my mother, and my mother simply did not persuade me, and I continued to cry as my sister came." Seeing that the flowers were gone, but replaced by small flowers, she came to the house to comfort me, as if she had known about this matter for a long time, I don't know how long I cried, and my eyes were red. As I left, I was still choking up and crying.

Every time I think about it in the future, I will be sad.

(Chen's comment: This is a clear introduction to the article.) There are several specifics: the first time is specific, the second, the location is specific, many of these students write more generally, the third event is specific, and the fourth process is specific. Of course, the character dialogue here, the character action is also concrete. For example, write about my mother: my mother comforted me next to me: "Maybe I will come back." "I ignored my mother, and my mother simply did not persuade me — how earnest it was. Of course, you can also look at things in a contact way, such as the weather conditions when you go to grandma's house, and it is better to talk about it. ）