The five-character poem "Song of the Goose" uses three "geese" at the beginning, which can make people feel refreshing while pointing out the meaning of the topic.
The five-character poem uses only 18 words, but it does not affect it in the slightest to become a classic work handed down to the world. Who would have thought that this was just a poem written by Luo Bingwang when he was 7 years old.
Who knows, Luo Bingwang, a great poet, was at the peak of his debut, and throughout his entire career, no poem has been more well-known than "Song of the Goose".
The reason why this poem is classic is that under its simple and clear rhythm, it uses popular and concise language to vividly express the state of the big white goose swimming in the water.
It is precisely because it was written when Luo Bingwang was 7 years old that it has been used as an enlightenment book for children for many years. It is no exaggeration to say that almost every one of us memorized this classic ancient poem when we were children.
Since Luo Bingwang can become a famous poet through the ages with a song "Song of the Goose", why can't we create a song ourselves, if we are lucky, it is not impossible to become famous in one fell swoop.
As long as the mind does not slip, there are always more ways than difficulties. There must be many people who have this idea, and the number of people who really take a step forward for this is very small.
Xiangyin County, Hunan Province, an old man named Wei Yong is one of these attempts, he has been fond of poetry and poetry since he was a child, although the family conditions are quite poor, he can't afford to go to school, but his heart like poetry and poetry has never stopped.
People are afraid of this, as long as it is something they want to do, they will do everything they can to do it. Although he is not highly educated, the words he does not know, in addition to consulting others, he can also solve them by consulting dictionaries.
comes and goes, and ordinary words are not difficult to be brave. With the support of words, Uncle Wei Yong has the capital to write poems, and often tries to write one or two poems.
After a long time, Old Man Wei can actually export into a poem, just point to something, he can write a poem casually, as for the rhyme or not to rhyme and put it aside, it is quite smooth to read, and catchy.
For the classic poem "Song of the Goose", naturally it can't escape the old man's "palm".
One day, when the old man saw the rooster in the yard announcing to the sky, he had an inspiration and wrote a song "Song of the Chicken" based on "Song of the Goose".
Not to mention, this "Song of Chicken" was really written at a super high level, which helped Wei Yong win the national honor of "Peasant Literature Award" in one fell swoop.
"Chickens, chickens, chickens, with their sharp beaks crying to the sky; ”
Although these two poems are both poultry songs, and the number of words is also 18 words, there are quite a few differences between the two poems.
First of all, let's taste Lao Han's "Song of Chicken", he used three consecutive "chickens" to catch people's voices, in order to highlight the rooster's diligence and punctuality in the sky. The second sentence, "Sharp beak cries to the sky", describes the "heroic" appearance of the rooster crowing.
The next two sentences can be used as a classic work of the whole poem, to show the "functionality" of the rooster, the third watch to announce the dawn, the fifth watch to crow, in ancient times when there were no clocks and watches, every night for people to accurately tell the time.
So, although this poem won the "Peasant Literature Award", can its level be PK "Song of the Goose"? In Xia Bucai, I think that although Wei Yong's poem shows the momentum of the big rooster, it still cannot be compared with "Song of the Goose".
First of all, the three "chickens, chickens, chickens" have lost the opportunity, "goose, goose, goose" can refer to the goose itself, but also to refer to the goose's call, when "chicken, chicken, chicken" can refer to the rooster itself, but when the "chicken" to refer to the rooster's cry, it will not be able to show the momentum of the rooster, only the chick will "chirp" non-stop.
Originally, it was to take the lead, but in this way, more than half of the aura was lost.
Let's look at the next sentence "Sharp mouth cries to the sky" to "Song to the sky", which depicts the appearance of a big rooster crowing to the sky, in which the cry is a little sad, and it mostly refers to crying.
The "song" is a little more enjoyable, and the big white goose bends its neck and sings towards the sky, full of vigorous momentum. On the other hand, the sharp mouth cries to the sky, and the "cry" here reminds me of "the apes on both sides of the strait can't stop crying", and a sad atmosphere spreads.
The last two sentences are even more defeated in comparison with "white hair floating in green water, red anthurium plucking clear waves" in "Song of the Goose". Luo Bingwang used color contrast, "white, green, red" three colors are fused together, with "green water" and "clear waves", the picture is full of sense.
Even people who have never seen a white goose floating in the water can imagine it after reading this poem. However, the last two sentences of "Song of the Chicken" are a little lacking in form.
It's just that the rooster crows is written, but the specific rooster is majestic and heroic, and how it brews the strength to make the rooster crow, is not reflected at all.
There is no so-called "yellow foot, red crown" description, people who have never seen a rooster, just by reading this "Song of the Chicken" there is no way to surface the picture, in contrast, the judgment is made.
"Yongji" was dumped eight streets by "Yong Goose", perhaps this is the difference between professional players and amateur players.
Although this poem is not comparable to "Song of the Goose", as an award-winning work, it still has a lot of commendable points, and it deserves to win the award.
On a whim, many netizens created a song "Song of Duck" for everyone to read:
Duck, duck, duck,
The flat mouth is called quack.
Eat grain on the shore,
Underwater fishing for shrimp.
This is not analyzed, the aura is much worse than "Yongji", let alone "Yongge......