The textbooks have been used throughout the country for five years, and the compilers of the textbooks revise and change some of the small things that exist in the textbooks every year. However, the seven history textbooks "Lesson 1 The Unification and Demise of the Sui Dynasty" introduced Han Jiacang in the relevant historical events section, and the new textbook has been using this picture since its inception. The author believes that there is a problem with this illustration and text introduction, and it does not fit well. Now I would like to express my views on this issue in order to seek advice from the Fang family, and please correct the inappropriateness.
The text on page 2 of the textbook is introduced and illustrated as follows:
Carefully read the text introduction of the textbook, you can find the problem: the text narrative of the Jiacang and the picture of the Jiacang can not be well connected. The text introduction is that the site of Hanjiacang covers an area of more than 400,000 square meters and has hundreds of grain cellars. The textbook is accompanied by a picture, and the text description is "Schematic Diagram of Kakura". But the fact is: the site of Hanjiacang covers an area of more than 400,000 square meters, there are hundreds of grain cellars, and the accompanying picture is only a schematic diagram of a grain cellar (cross-sectional diagram), which is not correct. The author believes that there is a "flaw" in the handling of the text with pictures: the use of a schematic diagram of a grain cellar to replace the huge scale of Hanjiacang, such a picture and the description of the picture and the historical facts of the text there are many differences, and will make the learning teachers and students misunderstand, should give the necessary modifications, so that the text expression and the picture more rigorous and more scientific.
Here are two revisions that can remedy this minor flaw:
(1) Modify the text description of the picture: change it to "Hanjiacang grain cellar schematic map", add two words, convenient and simple.
(2) Replace the accompanying picture. The author found a picture on the Internet, which can be used as a schematic diagram or redrawn.
The above is just the author's opinion, thank you for your peers to point out and put forward their own views and insights.
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