Micro-poetry, the poetic existence of the fragmented era
January 2022 with the same inscription poem plum blossoms
Remote knowledge is not snow
Only dark incense comes
【The host poet of this issue: Zhan Hailin Yan Ruyu】
Zhan Hailin
He is a member of the Chinese Writers Association
Part-time tutor for master's degree students in the School of Literature and Communication, Hunan University of Technology
Yan Ruyu
He is a member of Guangzhou Writers Association
He is a member of Guangzhou Young Writers Association
Example poems
plum blossom
Zhan Hailin (Guangdong)
In the north, you spit blood and spit out a tree of red
In order to make a dress for a woman whose love has died prematurely
In the South, you're dressed in a silk coat, Tomon told me
Summoning the soul of Chinese poetry that is dying now
Yan Ruyu commented: The poem as a whole is very stunning, the words are shocking, and the elegant plum blossoms expose the darkness and depth of the other side, and even the ghostly atmosphere. The poem uses a synaesthesia technique, which makes people fall into the abyss after reading, and then the spicy irony makes people feel free!
Read Plum
I hope that, south of The South Mountain, you will be together
Walk slowly to the whitehead. Look at the plum pavilion on us with the sunset
The afterglow snuggles up to each other. Read Lin Hejing's poems
Wait for the moon to come out by the light of the snow
Zhan Hailin commented: This poem is a love poem, Nanshan looks at the plum, sees the white head, romantic and beautiful! This poem is also a poem that longs for the hermit world, Lin Hejing, the wife of Mei Hezi, is a hermit, and the qinggao lonely standard is proud of the world, which can be seen!
Selected works for this issue
White plum water cut-off snow
1. May
Deep Sea (Guizhou)
There will be tombs in the spring light. After the bee butterfly is born
The tree will accompany the encounter and wait
When ice and snow grow bones in the oath
The brilliant poison that cannot be scraped away is all released
Yu Qiong's comment: This plum blossom is full of infinite imagination, the poet introduced from the "spring light", "bee butterfly", "tree", "ice and snow", "bone" these images come to the face, and finally end with "release", causing people to think deeply.
2. Spring plum
Lin Wenhu (Guangdong)
Received the report that the spring plum has opened in a certain place in Jiangsu
The lazy wind and small gathering of warm suns collude
Winter's lies turn out
Tricked away the precocious heart
Yan Ruyu's small comment: Jiangsu Plum Garden, long-renowned. My heart has long been secretly promised.
3. Plum blossoms
A Tao Ge (Guangzhou)
The cold current is undercurrent. Only I know
Which plum under the sky, refuse
surrender. Even if it is a defeat
Nor do I spit out the red past to the world
Yan Ruyu's small comment: Wrote Han mei's pride and madness. The plum written by A Tao Song, such as the plum painted by Qi Baishi, the petals are scattered with pride, it seems that only plum blossoms solve my madness!
4. Plum Garden
Desert Forest (Beijing)
Ah, the plum garden on the water side
Red plum flame hunting boat
Large beads and small beads fall all over the green plum heart island
Yu Qiong's comment: The plum garden written by the poet has fresh and unworldly white plums and fragrant red plums, which are really brilliant and beautiful.
5. Meizhou Mei
Zeng Xianzhu (Guangdong)
Timing Midwinter
Iron bones are towering everywhere
The cold wind condensed into a blood red
Ignite the dream of the Red Land
Yu Qiong's comment: Mei in winter, fighting with the "cold wind", the poet vividly depicts the pride and temperament of plum blossoms with language such as "iron bone clouds towering in the sky" and "blossoms of blood red".
In a dream
See the dark incense again
6. May
Nishiko Bunjun (USA)
Plum blossoms are more than three lanes
In the dream, I saw dark incense coming again
A snow outside the Hanshan Temple
Since then, I have been waiting for the long winter
Zhan Hailin's comment: Plum blossoms are given a Zen meaning because of Hanshan Temple, and the charm is high and ancient, and it is new.
7. Ask Mei Yin
Red Rain (USA)
It doesn't matter if you're driving for me or not
I'll snow for you every winter
Let the heart cover the pure white and wait for you quietly
A red lip falls, stunning the wind and snow moon
Zhan Hailin's small comment: The love for Mei is seen at the end of the pen.
8. Red Plum Festival
Linchuan Snow Fishing (Shanghai)
A long journey of inquiry
The thinker's blank manuscript
Not all of them disappeared
Does not highlight the weight of a drop of blood
Zhan Hailin's comment: Red plums are like blood, and the weight of a drop of blood can pay tribute to red plums.
9. Mei
Zhou Xiande (Shaoguan, Guangdong)
He once came alone in the snow
Under the flowers is suitable for boiling wine
Turbid wine slightly drunk
On the hero who offered his pride in the bitter cold
Yan Ruyu's small comment: Boiling wine and appreciating plums, slightly drunk, seeing plum blossoms is a heroic figure, this angle is also a very appropriate metaphor. I think of Mao Zedong's Wing Mei: it is already a cliff full of ice, like flowers and branches.
10. Plum
Lao Shentou (Guiyang)
Seven years ago, the branches burst out of winter buds
Bright as fire and clear as wax
Where will be the dark incense
Vividly proclaiming the beauty of perseverance to the world
Yu Qiong's comment: "The branches burst out of the winter buds", symbolizing "freshness" and "perseverance". The colder it is, the more spirit it opens, and Mei's fearlessness and adversity grow deserves our reverence and praise.
flower
Jump in the cold
11. Chongxin painting plum
Luo Yu (Guangzhou)
In the abstract incense of a tree,
Drunk on the winter branches and intoxicated with the summer flowers.
Wake up on a spring or autumn day,
A touch of ochre, a stroke of cinnabar...
(Chongxin: Full name Ke Chongxin, the author's art teacher many years ago.) ）
Yu Qiong's comment: With plum into the painting, with the painting into the poem, the poet vividly shows the beauty of the form and the beauty of the poem.
12. Plum blossoms in memory
Wu Zuoxin (Guangzhou)
Plum blossoms in memory, water droplets after rain
Emerge in the mirror of winter
The flower buds pulsate in the cold
It was as if spring had come to earth
Yan Ruyu's little comment: The plum blossoms in memory are embraced by the water droplets after the rain, and the sense of picture is super strong. Describing winter as a mirror, I remembered in the mirror the appearance of the plum's first bloom, clear and full of style. At this moment, of course, spring in the poet's heart. Good poetry!
13. In the name of plum blossoms
Chen Caiwen (Guangzhou)
I love winter in the name of plum blossoms
Love this icy world
Snowflakes fluttered over my whole being
Including the secret that the branches are too late to hide
Yan Ruyu's small comment: Wrapped in silver, Mei is the messenger of the winter festival, how many people love its ice jade clean, Zhengzheng iron bone. "Including the secret that the branches are too late to hide", wonderful sentence!
14. Plum blossom method natural
Zhuang Yu (Australia)
We praise you because we are afraid of the cold
Your jade-like texture is not cold armor
Ideals alone are not enough
Snowflakes, and you are originally green plum bamboo horses
Nanmu Comment: The praise that is eloquent, everything is so natural. "It is not enough to have ideals" resonates, and the poet compares snowflakes and plum blossoms to "green plum bamboo horses", which is both warm and sad, which makes people reverie.
15. Red plum
Quyuan Fengqing (Suzhou)
Plum bones appear in the branches
A snow spread out exam papers in the middle of winter
Proud snow linghan, primrose show Kuiyuan
A little red bush, smiling and spring breeze
Zhan Hailin's comment: Poetry has a lot of connotations, a snowflake is like a test paper, who is The plum blossom of KuiYuanshe?
Cross the spring colors
Mountains or corners
16. Momei
Lin Xiaopeng (Guangzhou)
A few snows fell on the branches
As if it had made you
Proud of the two words, all collected
The pen power follows the ink and dissolves and wanders
Yan Ruyu's small comment: Mo Mei, the expression of large freehand, this is another kind of love for Mei, the style is unique!
17. Plum blossoms
MoYangzi (Guangdong)
How many people envy, how many people boast
In fact, plum blossoms are plum blossoms
Noble aroma
Penetrates the wind and snow from the body
Zhan Hailin's small comment: Plum blossoms are high and clean, which is the consensus of poets.
18. Plum blossoms
Sophi (Vancouver)
People like to praise your noble and lonely spirit,
But forget your helplessness to fall into the mud.
The fragrance in the cold wind is the tears of plums,
Spring will eventually clothe the earth with vulgar clothes.
Nanmu Comment: The poet used "the helplessness of zero falling into mud" to point out the fate of plum blossoms blooming and falling. I really like this sentence "The fragrance in the cold wind is the tears of plums", there is joy in worry, tears, and fragrance.
19. Ask Mei
Tu Lao'er (Hunan)
Since it is for spring,
Why is it incompatible with chunge,
If you just want to plate a primary color for spring,
Why bring the harshness of winter again.
Nanmu Comment: This song is very interesting, the love and worry for Mei, straight to the chest, as if talking to themselves, and it seems to whisper privately with Mei. Intimacy jumps out.
20. Green plum
Nanmu (Guangdong)
Cross the spring colors, the mountains or the corners of the walls
Deep and shallow, whispering and smiling
Guard a quiet place, let the mountains and rivers be steep
Penetrate the silk rain, and be proud of the wind
Yan Ruyu's small comment: Keeping a quiet place, this is the background color of many literati and inkers. This green plum, more like the poet himself, penetrates the silk rain and is proud of the wind!
Cold plum on the branches
Closer to the heart at this time
21. May
Liu Yun (Guangdong)
Walk through the forest of poetry
With hands that are no longer young
Fold down the first plum of the new year
Dedicated to you facing the sea of stars
Zhan Hailin's little comment: Folding plums is far away, and the affection is strong.
22. Plum blossoms
Dao is wuqing (Hebei)
I was counting plum blossoms, one, two, three
I was counting snowflakes, one, two, three
Winter held a butcher knife behind me
Plum blossoms carry out a revolution under the cover of snowflakes
Yan Ruyu's little comment: The Tao is qingless but sentient! Cold plum proud of the snow, soaring wind, this revolution, who is not moved?
23. To Mei
Yu Qiong (Guangdong)
A corner of the shadow, stretched freely
Silence, light and darkness
The deep winter is withdrawn in the dark incense, and the age is safe
Mei - with the same doctrine as ever, infiltrated with ideals
Yan Ruyu's small comment: This corner is also where my heart desires, the shadow is oblique, the dark incense floats, year after year, safe and sound, silent and joyful, so, very good!
24. Han plum
Yu Xinming (Guangzhou)
North wind, too cold, too bitter
Fragrant, too strong, too intense
Yin Hong exploded on the branches
The lonely spirit beckoned to the sky
Nanmu comment: The more "cold and bitter" the "north wind", the more "fragrant" the "strong and fierce", until "Yin Hong burst on the branches", which made people have a visual impact and a shock to the soul. The last sentence is in place.
25. Plum
Fifi (Ningbo)
Perhaps, cold plums on the branches
Snowflakes fall, silence
It's like the evening bell in the distant mountains
Zhan Hailin's comment: Keep the heart of the plum, the snowflakes are like the evening bell, what if it falls on the heart!
Plum Blossom Poetry Review
This issue of plum blossom poetry collection, in the waxing moon drums to the end, the footsteps of the Spring Festival came to the plum blossom tree, an ancient and beautiful festival is the plum blossom shouted, so it is full of freshness and good. This issue has many good manuscripts, from all over the world, as if it is the plum blossom petals stained on the geese, there are northern red plums, there are also southern white plums, plum blossoms such as classical beauty, "the road is broken by the bridge, lonely and ownerless, it is already dusk alone, only incense as before", the real poet, must be lonely and self-congratulatory, not lost in red dust, not presumptuous, not frivolous, not mean. This is the character of plum blossoms, but not all people have plum blossom feelings, plum blossoms belong to poets who can withstand loneliness, keep happiness alone, and endure hard work. The 25 masterpieces selected in this issue are written with the proud bones of plum blossoms, and the fragrance is far away, colliding with poetic words and sparkling. With the rhythm of the long and short sentences, the reader appreciates the plum blossom and reads the soul of the combination of plum blossoms and poetry, unconsciously, such as drinking fine wine, indulging in poetry.
END