2024年高考英语｜读后续写——比赛收获篇

读后续写

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✦✦阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Every October, my neighborhood has a Halloween costume contest. And every October, my neighbor Ollie and I race to the announcement board in the park to find out the theme. One year, the theme was “Dress up as your favorite book character.” Another year, it was “Be something scary.” But this year, the theme was kind of, well, themeless.“Be creative?” I said, reading the announcement board. “That’s not really a theme, is it?”Ollie hopped off his skateboard s to get a closer look. “You’re right,” he agreed. “I think my favorite theme ever was ‘Superheroes’. I loved my Super-Force Flying Eagles costume so much, I kept that thing hanging in my closet for years!”“My favorite theme was ‘Farm Animals’.” I giggled. “Remember how you insisted on being a Stegosaurus (剑龙)?”“When I was five, dinosaurs were my world.” Ollie laughed. “I would have loved to see a Stegosaurus out grazing with the cows.”“Now that’s the creative spirit we need for this challenge!” I said. “Maybe, since we don’t know exactly what we want to be yet, we should start by choosing some cool costume-making materials. ”“I’ve got it!” Ollie said, scooping up a bunch of fallen leaves.“Really?” I said. “You’re going to make an entire costume out of leaves?”“Why not?” he said, scooping up some more.“They’re totally free, and I can guarantee, no one will be a tree as great as me.”“Don’t you mean, a tree as great as we?” I grinned.“Um, first, that grammar doesn’t sound right,” said Ollie. “And second, no way! Think of your own creative ideas.”“Aw, come on,” I said. “You should be flattered that I like your idea so much. Plus, I just thought of the perfect way to make branches.”Finally, Ollie said OK.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1: We ended up filling two jumbo bags with different kinds of leaves.__________________Paragraph 2: Then the big moment came.__________________✦✦

解析

✦✦本篇文章以人物为线索展开。每年十月，作者的邻居Ollie都会参加万圣节服装比赛。每到十月，作者和邻居Ollie都会去看一下万圣节的服装比赛主题。然而，今年却没有主题。于是，邻居Ollie突发奇想，产生了用树叶来做衣服参加万圣节服装比赛的想法。作者喜欢邻居Ollie有创意的想法，两人一拍即合，立刻付诸于行动。 1.段落续写：（1）由第一段句首内容“最后我们在两个超大的袋子里装满了不同种类的叶子。”可知，第一段可以描写两人装满叶子后具体做衣服的过程和感受。（2）由第二段句首内容“然后重大的时刻来到了。”可知，第二段可以描写人们看到两人服装后惊叹的反应和两人创作成功后的感受。 2.续写线索：装满树叶——回家创作——重要时刻的到来——服装展示——众人惊叹——赢得掌声——成功的喜悦和感悟✦✦

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We ended up filling two jumbo bags with different kinds of leaves. Oak, maple, and sycamore leaves crunched under our feet .( 运用了as引导的时间状语从句) Ollie was right: there was something thrilling about the idea of creating a costume out of nature’s own supplies. As we walked back to Ollie’s house, our bags rustling with each step. I couldn’t help but feel a surge of excitement for the upcoming contest..(运用了省略关系代词that的定语从句)

Then the big moment came. On the night of the contest, the park a colorful spectacle of creativity. As we arrived, we saw pirates, princesses, and even a giant jellyfish made entirely of balloons. Amidst the crowd, Ollie and I stood proudly in our leafy attire. Whenpresent our costume, we confidently strutted onto the makeshift stage. , the crowd . Our innovative choice. As we walked home that night, our makeshift tree costumes, we couldn’t stop smiling. Sometimes, the best themes are the ones you create yourself. (运用了省略关系代词that的定语从句)

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We ended up filling two jumbo bags with different kinds of leaves. The excitement bubbled within us as we handpicked the vibrant foliage, (运用了as引导的时间状语从句) envisioning the fantastical costumes they could become. to our collection, our anticipation swelled, (运用了with + 宾语+ 宾补） igniting a collaborative burst of creativity. Laughter filled the crisp air as we experimented with various leaf arrangements, casting aside any concerns about a predefined theme to revel purely in the joy of creation. （运用了现在分词作状语）Despite our hands the colorful marks of our labor, we found delight in fashioning something extraordinary from nature's bounty. When our task was completed, our garments-to-be brimmed with potential, （运用了现在分词作状语） Then came the grand moment. (运用了with + 宾语+ 宾补）we our leafy ensembles, （运用了形容词作状语）As we approached the contest grounds, a mixture of excitement and anticipation enveloped us,. （运用了过去分词作状语）A midst the kaleidoscope of imaginative costumes, our leaf-clad figures stood out as a testament to the power of friendship and . Immersed in the festivities, exchanging smiles and admiring the craftsmanship of fellow revelers, （运用了分词作状语）regardless of the contest's outcome, we had already woven precious memories and strengthened the bonds of camaraderie through our shared pursuit of creative expression.（运用了宾语从句）