"Your Name"
With the lightest and lightest sound in the world,
Gently call your name every night and every night.
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Write your name,
Draw your name,
And the dream is your glowing name:
Like the sun, like the stars, your name.
Like a lamp, like a diamond, your name.
Like colorful sparks, like lightning, your name.
Like the burning of a primeval forest, your name.
Engrave your name!
Engrave your name on the tree.
Engrave your name on the tree of unspeakable life.
When this plant grows into a towering ancient tree,
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Your name is also bigger.
Big up, your name.
Light up, your name.
So, gently and gently call your name.
The poem has the beauty of imagery and melody. The poet creatively takes the "name" of the lover as the center and central image of the whole poem, and uses colorful and dizzying metaphors to complete the image structure of the whole poem around the center, borrowing the name of the lover on behalf of the lover itself, and the love and praise for the lover "your name" is the love and pursuit of the lover himself, which also adds a layer of implicit meaning to the whole poem.
At the beginning of "Your Name", the image of the lyrical protagonist of the poem appears, who calls the name of the lover in the first person. If the poet concretizes "your name," the whole poem is diminished by that particular referentiality. The generality of the abstract "your name" can elevate the personal emotional experience to the level of universality, arouse the reader's association with the beauty of different names, and thus participate in aesthetic creation. In the first and second verses, "calling" and "calling" have sound, which is auditory imagery, and "writing" and "painting" are tangible and visual images. Thinking about it day and dreaming at night, "dreaming" should be a real and illusory image. In the third stanza, the poet uses a series of metaphors to compare the name of the lover "glowing", and the poet's talent also "shines" in this way. This section uses seven parables in a row, and although all of them use the word "ru" to form a metaphor, there is no monotony, mainly because: First, the artistic means of Bo yu are used. People often say that "there is a good comparison", but the poet uses seven ratios in a row, which has a strong impression of interest. Second, there are more changes in the intensity of the image and the amplitude of the language. "Sun", "star", "lamp", "diamond", "colorful spark", "lightning" and "burning of the primeval forest", etc., are the same as "glow", but the degree of light is different, they are juxtaposed, you can see different changes, you can also see the poet's heterosexual thinking here as a fan. Verse 4 is also quite wonderful: "Engrave your name!" / Engrave your name on the tree, / Engrave your name on the tree of unspeakable life. "The love affair of the sea is rotten and rotten, and here it is expressed in a special aesthetic way. In short, the third verse writes the "light" of "luminous", and the fourth verse writes the "big" of "growing", although the angle is different, but like arrows in all directions rushing to a red heart, the poet's ornamental praise is dedicated to a Fangfei name.
Although "Your Name" does not pay attention to the rhyme of the feet, it pursues a round and smooth, beautiful and beautiful melody, like a pleasant and pure light music. Its melodic beauty is formed, one is due to the "repetition". The "lightest and lightest" and "lightest" and "light" and even "night and night" in the first verse are the repetition of the words that are closely related to each other; the "name" and "your name" used seven times at the end of each sentence in the second and third verses are the successive repetitions of the same sentence pattern; the first three lines of the fourth verse, "Engrave your name", and the two and three lines of "On the tree" and "On the tree of unspoiled life", are the repetition of phrases at the beginning and end of the sentence; the conjunction of the seven "light" words in the last verse is the repetition of the same word in the sentence. And the "your name" at the end of each line in this verse is a repeat at the end of the sentence. FuTuo renders a rich atmosphere, pours out the passion of the spray, and structures a unique melody. Just think, if the fudge was canceled, the poem would not have had such a moving style. Another important factor in the beauty of the melody is the "loop". For example, the opening verse and the last sentence of the whole poem, "Therefore, gently and gently call your name", constitute the repetition and echo of the beginning and the end, that is, the great loop of the entire aesthetic structure; the four lines of the third verse of the poem, which undertake the last sentence of the second verse, "And the dream is your glowing name", constitute the loop of the close section and the section; the six lines of the fourth section are the continuation of the first two lines of the second section, "Write your name" and "Draw your name", which is the glory of the long-distance section and the section. It is worth noting that the first sentence of the last verse, "Big up, your name," and the last sentence of the previous section, "Your name is also bigger," form a chain loop; the second line, "Light up, your name," forms a remote loop with the third verse, and "Lit up" corresponds to the last sentence of the second verse, "Glowing Name," like two lights calling out to each other in the field at night. In short, with the repetition and loop of unity with many changes, reading the poem's "every night and every night" is like listening to an affectionate and beautiful ballad.
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