The doctor said that he was the worst at writing poetry, and that he dared to admit that he was inadequate, at least courageous. Compared with others who dare not admit it, or hide it, from this point of view, Dr. Shido Junyan is still somewhat admirable!
However, I have always disliked saying good things in the poetry world, I like to say bad things, and today I am going to be ready to criticize the doctor, will the doctor beat me up? Ha, no matter what the bad words, you have to spit it out quickly! Let's judge it from the three aspects of practice, theory and evaluation!
First, the practice
Dr. Shidao Junyan's poems, objectively speaking, are almost all plain vernacular, or with some oily taste, or pure complaints, and then rhyme, "Poetry also!" "This must be criticized, and the practice is not observable or uninitiated.
But people say that doctors of literature are not necessarily good or excellent in practice, and they love to write how to write? What level of love is what level? You can't control it?
And I would say that you are free to write your so-called "poems", but if you write them for posterity or on the Internet, others have the right to comment and point out flaws. Unless you write it and hide it in a cabinet at home, there is no need for others to read and comment.
Therefore, I personally suggest that you have a larger amount of gas, others point out your flaws, you must dare to admit deficiencies or flaws, listen carefully to opinions, and if you change them, you will be encouraged, so that there will be progress.
2. Theory
Let's talk about the Doctor's knowledge of poetry theory. Some examples of PhD's theories are as follows:
"Absolute sentences are divided into absolute, ancient, and absolute."
"You can express the absolute law of the law or the poem of the right law, but you have no right to prohibit others from being absolutely lawless."
Judging from the classification and labeling specification requirements of the above sentences, it is clear that Dr. Shidao Junyan, your theory is not comprehensive or there are errors. Absolute sentences can be broadly divided into two types: absolute and ancient, the former including seven absolutes and five absolutes, and the latter refers to the absolute sentences with relatively free rhythm (mainly the absolute sentences before the Tang Dynasty, and the ancient absolutes simulated after the Tang Dynasty). For example, Liu Zongyuan's "Jiang Xue", which is an ancient masterpiece, is as follows:
Thousands of mountain birds flew away, and thousands of people disappeared.
Lonely boat, fishing alone in the snow of the Cold River.
In addition, for the labeling of absolute sentences, this norm, is strictly in line with the norms of legal poetry can be marked as legal poems, otherwise it can not be marked as legal poems, this unwritten rule, presumably people who write poetry and understand poetry understand, but when they get to the doctor, they do not understand, and also say: "You have no right to prohibit others from labeling legal poems!" This is unreasonable, but also the knowledge of poetry theory is shallow and distorted, this kind of thinking is not allowed, wrong is wrong, there is nothing to argue or arbitrarily mark it. This commits the problem of imprecise style of learning, as well as distorting knowledge and disseminating erroneous knowledge.
3. Appraisal
Let's talk about the appreciation of Dr. Shidao Junyan, the appreciation is average, and there are many wrong comments, such as Jin Jun's poem of the Yellow Crane Tower, the obvious chapter is messy, the verses are stiff and incomprehensible, and it is said to be a smooth poem, if you want to strictly say, that work is not a poem, the flat rhyme is mixed, but when it comes to Dr. Shidao Junyan, it is touted as a commendable poem, so I dare not compliment the doctor's appraisal level.
Judging from the performance of the above aspects, there are many deficiencies and defects in the practice, theory and appraisal of the doctor, of course, your biggest highlight is the doctor, which I dare say that many people in the poetry world have a diploma that is not as good as you.