Bookman Tea Talk | Notes on the poems of Gu Zhi, Qian Zhonglian and Huang Zunxian

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Huang Zunxian led the modern "poetry revolution" with the declaration of "I write my mouth by hand", but "I write my mouth by hand" is by no means like the wagging pen of ordinary people, and its inaccessibility lies in the ability to integrate ancient and modern China and foreign countries, and to produce extremely pure classical words, so Huang Zunxian's poems are actually not easy to understand, so his "Human Realm Lu Poetry Grass" has been written by two famous scholars, of which Qian Zhonglian's "Notes on the Grass notes on the Poetry of the Human Realm" is particularly widely circulated. In the first edition of the book (The Commercial Press, 1936), Fa Fan, Qian Shi mentioned: "The Collection to the Unnotated Edition ... Gu Zhi's "Poetry Notes of Mr. Huang Gongdu" in three volumes, the selected notes are less than one-third of the complete collection, and the mistake is to the ram (the following is summarized as five diseases, and there are many examples)... In addition, there are still flaws, let alone enumeration. Mr. Gu Shi Yu Huang is a township post-study, and his annotations are sparse, and he is not enough to be a hero of the human condition. "A very rude criticism of Gu Zhi was made.

Press: Gu Zhi (1885-1959), character Gong Yu, number layer ice, Guangdong Meizhou people. He is a member of the League and a member of the Nanshe Society, and was the head of the Department of Chinese of Sun Yat-sen University. He is the author of "Layer Bingtang Poetry Collection", "Dialectic of Han Poetry", "Cao Zijian Poetry Notes", "Ruan Sizong Poetry Notes", "Tao JingJie Poetry Notes", "Zhong Ji Room Poetry Notes", "Wang Rongfu Wen Notes", etc., and his "Mr. Huang Gongdu Poetry Notes" is three volumes, first published in 1927.

After the Qian's notes came out, Gu Zhi once wrote a "Trek" (1936): "Ten volumes of "Notes on the Poetry of The People's Realm", written by Changshu Qian Caosun Zhonglian. All the poems of the townspeople have been annotated from this point, and the letter is valuable. However, after reading it, I suddenly felt disappointed, and tried to say a little... (Summarized below into ten types of mistakes, and to give examples) To be said, Qian's note is full of omissions and makes people poorer than the index. Now it exists, and later it must be more Zhang ye. Gu's words, when made on Qian's "Fa Fan", can be described as tit-for-tat. However, the ancient note of money is "wrong to the rambler", and the ancient note of money is "full of omissions", which is very pleasant to read. However, a careful comparison found that this is not as simple as peers.

For example, the appendix of Qian's annotated book", "Poetry of Mengyuan'an", discusses Huang Zunxian's "Song of General Feng" Yun: "The use of the general character, this history, The Chinese grammar, is used in poetry, and the barrier is new." Gu Zhi commented: "This song is actually a change from Huang Zhongze's "Yu Zhongxuan Ancestral Hall"... Zhong ZeWu jinren, the poetry of the grand, not less public, Qian shi can not cite the poems of his hometown predecessors, He Ye? Gu Zhi ridiculed, the focus is on the four words of "barrier a new", the present check Qian notes the passage version, "Feng General Song" notes the cloud: "Case: The above four sentences, born from Huang Jingren's "Yu Zhong Xuan Ancestral Hall" poem cloud: '...'", then the four sentences of "barrier one new" have been deleted, while the appendix poem "barrier a new" Four sentences are still retained, and the sentence "This is born from Huang Zhongze's "Yu Zhong Xuan Ancestral Hall" poem" is added in front of it.

Gu Zhi youyun: "The Song of the Pearl of Wu's Song 'Neiguan Frequently Promotes the Yellow Gate Test', and Qian Notes the Book of the Later Han Dynasty and the Hundred Officials' Yunyun. This case: Sima Biao's "Book of Continuation of the Han Dynasty" has "Hundred Officials Zhi", and Fan Ye's "Book of Later Han" does not have "Hundred Officials Zhi". Taking Biao's "Zhi" as Ye "Zhi", mistaken! And 'Qun Hu ghosts disturb the Western Regions', Qian Zhu Dantao's "Complete History of the Qing Dynasty" Yunyun. The "Complete History of the Qing Dynasty" was written by the Japanese, and dan tao translated it. Taking the Japanese as the Buttao, this is wrong again! "Nowadays, the Book of later Han has been corrected to the Book of Continuation of the Han Dynasty, but the relevant text of Tao's "Complete History of the Qing Dynasty" has been deleted.

If it is possible that the above may have been corrected by Qian's own later, then the following article is obviously not the case. There is a cloud in the ancient qian annotation: "A poem of "Qungong", 'Everyone has six grades of sin distinction', and Qian Note: 'The New Book of Tang and the Biography of Cui Instrument: Li Dan performed the song, but was convicted of the sixth class.' 'What is the sixth class, Mo Nengming also.' Now according to the Tongjian Tang Ji Thirty-Six, Cui Ji said that all trapped thief officials should be executed. He was convicted of a sixth-class offense, a heavier punishment in the city, a second-time suicide, a second-time scepter of a hundred rods, and a third-class exile. The General Book of Passages, and then the poetry is unmistakable. "Check the money note in the various books, and the relevant text of the "Zizhi Tongjian" has been supplemented. However, it is worth noting that the text of the Tongjian supplemented by Gu Zhi is a summary, not the original text, and the Qian Zhi Zhu Tong Ben is not wrong with Gu Shi. It can be seen that Qian Shi did not check the original text of the Tongjian, but directly quoted the words of Gu Shi.

In addition, Gu Zhi and Yun: "The song 'Qi Luan Xifu' is 'The people's hearts are still wearing toward the Yellow Emperor', Qian Note: 'The Book of Han, The Biography of Wang Mang:'Changing Empress Dowager An's title of Huang Imperial Lord, absolutely to Han Ye.' 'Present case:'Huang' is a mispronunciation of 'king', and the non-schooler is mistaken, that is, the hand people are also mistaken. "Gu Liang Biography": "The king, the people's place to return to." "Han Shi Wai Biography": "The king goes to the king, the world goes to it, and the one who is good at maintaining the health of the people is also." "White Tiger Pass": "The king, to the future, the world to the end." 'The people's hearts are still like the king's righteousness.' Emperor Maharaja, referring to Emperor Dezong. If it is a money note, it means the empress dowager. Regardless of the Gongdu Imperial Party, it will not be praised, and the inscription cloud 'Qi Luan', and the poem is hypnotized, is there a poem Faye? The "Check money note is used in the various books, and it has been changed to: "Ancient straight note: 'Huang' is a typo of 'king'." "Gu Liang Biography": "The king, the people's place to return to." "Han Shi Wai Biography": "The king, the past, the good health of the people also." "White Tiger Pass": "The king, to the future, the world to the end." 'Judas goes to the king, and righteousness is this. The Emperor, the Maharaja, refers to Emperor Tokusei. "Press: Most of the corrections made by Gu Zhi have been corrected according to the Qian Zhi, but only this article indicates that it was adopted from Gu Zhi. As for the original use of Gu's notes in the Qian's notes, that is, the so-called "Gu's case language, plus the three words 'Gu Zhi Zhi' to clear the eyebrows" in the Qian Zhu Ben, it is not a place where Gu Zhi corrects the error, which is slightly different from this. In this way, it seems that Qian Shi is not ashamed to directly adopt Gu Shi's note, but he is not willing to let people know that Gu Shi has pointed out flaws to himself, and this subtle psychology cannot be ignored.

Nowadays, the first edition of Qian Zhu is no longer easy to allegorize, and Gu Zhi's article can be said to have left some old looks for readers. To be fair, the ancient notes do have omissions, and most of what Qian's "Fa Fan" refers to is also reasonable. Therefore, at the beginning of the first edition of qian's note, his teacher Chen Zhu (who is also a friend of the Nanshe Society) has a preface: "The notes of the present people are quite detailed in the notes of Professor Gu Zhi Gongyu, but they are not missing. "The language is more fair. However, as far as the matter is concerned, the post-output and refined version is the proper meaning, and the notes of the predecessors are wrong, and they are discarded without taking, or it can be pointed out in the main text, and it is completely unnecessary to tirelessly count the wrongs of the predecessors in "Fa Fan". What's more, the Qian clan has a lot of praise in ancient notes, but does not promote the strengths of people and exposes the shortcomings of people, which is appropriate for ancient straightness. When Qian's notes were published, Gu's correction of its errors, even if it was provoked by Qian's "Fa Fan", was not inferior, it was also a normal academic discussion. However, Qian shi not only adopted his theory to make corrections, but also concealed his merits, and even after revision, it was not easy to make his derogatory remarks (the revised editions of "Fa Fan" only deleted the three sentences "Gu Shi Yu Huang is a rural post-study, and his annotations are sparse, and he is not enough to be a meritorious person"), which is inevitably a loss of scholarly style.

Wang Mengchuan