I finished watching the original story of "The Long Season" "Winter Blade", it is said that this is the first draft of the script, the screenwriter is called Yu Xiaoqian, and the biggest change in the drama broadcast now is the character of Shen Mo, the original script is quite quite... Stimulate.
In order to simplify, the original script is called the original work, and the fate and plot of the characters I remember are different from when it was broadcast.
Xiaolu is Gong Biao's girlfriend and not just the object of flirtation, which is why Gong Biao was so angry about investigating the case later. In the play, Huang Liru and him divorced after 20 years, and after Gong made a fuss at the factory conference in the original work, Huang Liru's children were lost and divorced him, so Gong Biao has been single for 20 years, and there is no and Liru has not left to hook up with Xiaolu.
In the original work, Gong Biao and the case have never been decoupled, in order to avenge Xiao Lu, he single-handedly caught the murderer, was hanged by Shen Mo on the bridge, and died a miserable death, which scared Wang Xiang so much that he didn't want to solve the case.
Meisu did not hang herself but drowned herself with a basin, and she followed Wang Yang in the way of death after she went crazy.
The Hong Kong businessman did not rape Shen Mo, and the book only wrote that he was very obsessed with Shen Mo, but did not say how to succeed, Shen Mo had long wanted to get his money and fled to the south. Yin Hong did not betray Shen Mo at first, she was selected because of her height and appearance similar to Shen Mo, and Shen Mo introduced her to Fu Weijun. Yin Hong had a relationship with Fu, and she offered to take advantage of Shen Mo's drunkenness and partner with Fu to rob her of her money, and Fu slapped her unconscious. Shen Mo crushed her body and threw a section of the man's right thumb in the corpse, which I suspect belonged to a Hong Kong businessman.
This thumb was to disturb the sight of the police, and Fu Weijun killed the uncle before Shen Mo went to college - so Shen Mo's first target of retaliation was the uncle, and Fu lost his thumb, but because the time of the injury was not right, the police denied this evidence.
Fu Weijun is not the son of Shen Mo's adoptive father, but a patient she met in the hospital when she was ten years old, and he witnessed his uncle beating Shen Mo, and the two have been in contact ever since. Shen Mo even slept with him and Wang Yang.
After Wang Yang retreated, he was stunned by Shen Mo and kicked down the river, yes, he was also killed by Shen Mo. Shen Mo did not plan to give him a way to live at the beginning, and after kidnapping Hong Kong businessmen, Shen Mo asked Wang Yang to dock with the daughter-in-law of Hong Kong businessmen, exposing his appearance.
The daughter-in-law of a Hong Kong businessman has been tracking down endlessly, and Shen Mo sneaked into the hospital to change her medicine when she gave birth. The orphan left behind after her death was adopted by Wang Xiang, named Wang General, which is Wang Bei in the play, which can explain why Wang Xiang was able to adopt a healthy baby boy in that era.
Fu Weijun grew up in the welfare dean, and the dean did not send him to see a doctor, causing him to lose his deafness, and Shen Mo covered the dean in the hospital to avenge him, and they were each other's knives. But Shen Mo did not fully believe Fu, and when Fu revealed his intention to betray her, she pushed him off the cliff. But later she learned that Fu was intentional, he was seriously ill, and in order to let her feel at ease. This paragraph is written down, no matter how much Fu Weijun loves her, seeing her so ruthless, he should not die blindly.
How fierce is Shen Mo? After she sneaked back to Hua City, she was chased by Wang Xiang and others to nowhere to stay, and one day she spent the night at a prostitute's place, and turned her face and smoked the porcelain prostitute to death.
She even dared to cut the throat of the horse captain face to face, dared to kidnap Wang Jiang to force Wang Xiang to jump off the building, dared to demonstrate with the police, and was simply the first evil woman in New China.
She intended to take revenge on Wang Xiang, who passed by a massage shop a long time ago, temporarily went in, and heard a little girl next door calling for help. At this time, the police swept away the pornography and brought everyone to the bureau. This is the first time that the little girl has been sexually assaulted by the grandfather, she begged Wang Xiang to admit to hearing the movement next door, Wang Xiang lied that he had not entered the massage parlor, refused to identify, and the little girl remembered his name.
In the play, Wang Xiang followed Shen Mo on the railway and did not catch her. In the original work, he chased "Fu Weijun", and Shen Mo, who pretended to be Fu, used a bird hammer to force him to strip himself half-naked with only babbling A'a, kneel down, count with a whistle, and humiliate him. How hard is Wang Xiang's mouth? He insisted that Fu Weijun had shot him before he let him go, and the horse captain helplessly said that the black bolts were rusty and could not be fired. This stroke wrote Wang Xiang thoroughly.
Love, human affection, family affection, here is a joke in Shen Mo.
The original book has a silky part of the behavioral logic. For example, Shen Mo has been blackened since he was ten years old, and his character has always been the same. She used to set up a bureau and use the truck to create a car accident to block Wang Xiang's road; pushed Xiaolu into the substation, so that the police thought that she was electrocuted with slippery feet; tracking Wang Xiang with a taxi radio; Help Fu Weijun create an alibi that he did not go to jail in the original book. Wang Xiang was not so saintly, he did not forgive the third punishment, and the third punishment did not appear after all. The horse team did not lose his job, he just couldn't solve the case and didn't leave Hua City, and he never got promoted.
But there are indeed many loopholes, the biggest bug is that she shares a name with Fu Weijun instead of pretending to be Yin Hong, the book confesses that Fu Weijun looks beautiful, Shen Mo is more than one meter and seven meters tall, and Shen Mo has been undergoing plastic surgery for 20 years to get close to Fu Weijun's appearance. But the plot ends in 2018, ID cards have long been online, a woman pretending to be a man, how difficult is this? Obviously, it was much easier for her to pretend to be Yin Hong who had no relatives, and she was very similar to Yin Hong.
In 2018, Shen Mo pretended to be Fu Weijun and dangled around, which is also difficult to film, Wang Xiang They have always recognized her as Fu Weijun, because they did not see her face head-on, and everyone who saw her died. But the audience can't see ah, it's a gang when you see it, you can't let Fu Weijun's actor dress up as a woman, and no matter how beautiful the man is, you can see it at a glance in reality. Unless Shen Mo is already indistinguishable, but the book explains that she is very beautiful.
People lose the thumb of the right hand, the right hand is basically wasted, and it is reasonable not to lose the little finger. Shen Mo's force value in the back is also excessive, including when she first started doing the crime, she was still a freshman, how could she be afraid at all and not so skillful? Deified of her abilities.
The original story is very clearly imitated by "White Night Walking", only a little crazier. The plot about Wang Xiang is basically unchanged, and it is still as annoying and nesty as ever.
I haven't heard of this screenwriter, but I think he's pretty miserable. This story originally had a recommendation value of 88% on WeChat reading, but it was given a bad review after the show was broadcast, and it has now fallen to more than fifty. Many people who scored him thought that his writing was poor, but in fact, the writing was not bad at all, and the description of the steel plant was more detailed, not like a script and more like a novel.
The details of the era elegy composed in those TV series basically come from the original work, including the two timelines. In the book, Wang Xiang always shows off that his father built the first brick of the steel mill chimney, the first piece of soil shoveled, the shattering of his sense of ownership, and the process from self-restraint to self-preservation is written in detail. Even the "Master Wang's whole sound" that echoes from beginning to end is in the original script. In terms of depth and epochality, the first version of the script has already laid the foundation.
The original book is a relatively standard suspense theme, but the back is a bit like Wang Xiang in the play, which is blown up. I can't evaluate such an extreme dark character as Shen Mo, it's certain that it won't pass the trial, but as a novel it can be written like this, I can't think of such an evil heroine in domestic dramas who killed half of the cast.
The original script is 1, and the subsequent modification and shooting regardless of whether the degree of completion is 10 points or 100 points, if there is no 1, zero can only be zero. The strengths of "The Long Season" lie in the production, poetry, and the mood of the current people. If there is a shortcoming, it is that the logic of the case is not perfect, and this problem is in the original script, so how to repair it cannot be completed. This shows how important the original is! Everyone always can't look at Zijin Chen's writing, but they don't know that Zijin Chen's logic is rare among domestic reasoning writers, and his case is stripped away, even if the murderer is announced at the beginning, you can feel the author's IQ.
Be smarter than the audience to become a good suspense writer.