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Also appreciate Mr. Tang Xingshun's "Joy"
□ Guo Jinliang/Wen
Seeing that a friend appreciated Mr. Tang Xingshun's "Joy", I aroused my own interest, so I also wrote a little after-reading feeling.
The first few paragraphs don't read anything. Use the local language into the prose, use the anthropomorphic to write about the trees, use the imagination to open some pictures, read Mr. Tang's articles more, and do not feel new.
It's a little surprising to start at the back. Yong handwritten article to write a encounter with goji berries, move goji berries, plant goji berries, goji berries live, very happy, it is over. The master's beginning made it change a little - the goji berries did not live well, I took care of her, she was even worse, I let her go, but she was lively. There was an extra twist in the middle.
Then there is the style of writing the wolfberry after it is alive. Really write her as a person, write that she has a style, write that she has emotions, and use her mind to blossom and bear fruit here and here, ming'er there. But it's just slightly taller than the average person, and it's nothing.
But writing about the bird's song is a bit otherworldly: "What is even more wonderful is that the sound it makes, first it is crisp and crisp, it seems to be cut off, and suddenly a long tone is pulled out, thousands of miles have gone, and then it spins back, turns, goes down, rushes up, and the strength and weakness of the thickness are complicated..." And Liu Hu's "Old Remnant Travels" in the writing of Wang Xiaoyu can be comparable. In addition to writing the high-pitched and euphemistic parts, then writing the belly singing is also vivid: "There is a strange sound that is sending outward from it, low, complex, multi-tone, reverberating for a long time. At first I didn't think it was, because it didn't open its mouth and its neck didn't move at all. ...... Such a small thing, the sound of making a fool of itself is like a thousand armies and horses trying to move, and it is also like countless birds whispering. "And the action description of the bird pecking at the red goji berries is really exquisite." When he first arrived, he said, "It's standing on a straw in the courtyard... Jump for a while, fall for a while, flutter your wings for a while, peck the leather rope with your beak, look up and down, look up and down, in short, surrounded by enemies. Agility in charging: "It finally left the shelving and landed on a thick branch of the apricot tree facing west, its wings trembled, pecking at the bark, looking left and right, suddenly flew up, landed on the top of a sharp stone in the bamboo forest, the body was completely close-up, one leg independent, one wing propped open, it seemed to be unbalanced, it was going to fall, suddenly it flew high, landed on a slanted bamboo branch, the bamboo branch shook, it panicked, it flew up, it fell on the high branch of the apricot tree, looked down, the arrow landed, jumped quickly, broke steps, walked in a straight line, turned in circles, Tentatively to the wolfberry tree, and then retreated, and then forward, jumped up, fell, finally jumped high, pointed his beak at a drooping red fruit, did not get it, tried again, if it was three or four times, the last time, it seemed to be only a little bit, he took away the fruit, flew directly into the air, and did not stay anywhere... "The bird did not stand still on the stone, the unstable momentum of the bamboo branch, let me think of Guo Ede's calligraphy work "Xingshu Chibi Fu" fragment, the words are tilted to the left, leaning and tilting, dangerous and not falling. On the whole, this large paragraph of text makes me look at it step by step, and I can't help but think of the tense drum board and the demeanor of the actors in night clothes in the Peking Opera "Stealing Silver Kettle".
Yet these are trails. Will the author use a small piece of text to make the climax of the whole text? No, no.
Sure enough, there is! It is written spiritually that "the fruit of the goji berries is not red, and when it is not ripe, the bird also comes." At this time, it is mainly flying around the goji berries, and changing the pattern - "Strange and strange also!" What's going on? It turns out that the two lives of the bird and the goji berries are rejoicing in each other, and it is the animals and plants that are in love, which is really incredible. It's a bit of a puxian flavor. Such an article is already quite interesting!
There is still a trick. Obviously, the bird and the goji berries were in love, and an old guy actually moved from behind the window to open the door and walked out, and looked at the birds and goji berries happily. It is simply a wonderful love triangle that does not violate the harmony, just like Lin Huiyin and Liang Sicheng and Jin Yuelin.
hi! This beautiful world, this beautiful word.