Introduction: The beginning and end of the poem must be connected, and a sentence cannot accommodate two themes
Let's look at the previous issue of The Flying Mountain Poems on 1565:
The wind shakes the bamboo and sprinkles acacia tears
See which friends have a good sentence:
@ Shen Changming 3
"Winter Plum"
The wind shakes the bamboo and sprinkles acacia tears, and the snow presses the plum to moan loneliness.
Where the flute sounds three lanes, the heart is only for the sound of primrose.
Transfer sentence ping 仄: 平仄仄平仄平仄, the last three words 仄平仄, can be seen as a bad sentence, but there is a lonely flat in front, which is very difficult to read, so it cannot be used as a "quasi-law sentence".
@123 Old Mei Wu Lin Fu
Seven desperate and nostalgic
The wind shakes the bamboo and sprinkles acacia tears, and the snow presses the plum to chant the love poem.
The homeland is difficult to leave the old age, and who knows how to go homesickness day by day?
The first two sentences are male and female lovesickness, the last two sentences are the sad voices of the elderly, I don't know which one is the theme?
@Wang Quanji
The wind shakes the bamboo and sprinkles acacia tears, and the rain beats the peach and sings romantic poems.
The green willows are green and green, and the spring light is brilliant and bright.
"Rain" has the meaning of destruction, very not "romantic", suggest: Lurun, so that there is a cheerful meaning.
Look at the picture proposition poem "Courtyard Deep":
@Chen Yangzhu
The courtyard of "Five Absolutes" is deep
The courtyard is deeply silent and the flowers are fragrant.
The beauty wears the path, and the butterfly wings touch the clothes.
The latter sentence is very peculiar, but the sense of beauty is insufficient, can you change the rhyme:
The courtyard is deeply silent, and the yellow oriole is empty and good;
The beauty wears the path and the flowers are full of tears.
@In Joe One Leaf 2
A path through the secluded place, deep in the verdant.
Leaf sieve light and shadow are wrong, mottled self-made poetry.
The last two sentences are very compact, well related, and extremely beautiful, poetic, rare good poetry!
@ White water a cup 9875
"Deep in the Courtyard"
The willow shadow by the silent pool is oblique, and the moon in the deep courtyard is pitiful.
The heavy curtains are biased to imprison people, and they also cover the scenery together.
The text is fresh, the situation is beautiful, and the charm is full! However, the word "prisoner" is not good, and if you don't look closely, you still think that it is a place where prisoners are closed, and it is not okay to change a few words to see:
The willow shadow by the lonely pool is oblique, and the moon is deep in the courtyard;
The heavy curtain seems to understand the meaning of the people, and wants to cover the scenery together.
Well, it's time for me to make up the sentence, first of all, the sentence syntactic poem:
Sentence: The wind shakes the bamboo and sprinkles acacia tears, and the flat is flat
Pair of sentences: Sun warm lotus raw silk wave. Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping
Transfer sentence: Willow Bank Covered Bridge Bright Moon Old, Servant Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping
Syndication: Where does Xiao Lang sing with whom? Mediocre and mediocre
Waves, songs, flat water rhymes under the flat five songs.
Liu'an Covered Bridge mingyue old, where does Xiao Lang accompany whom to sing? Image from the web
The courtyard is deep and the pictures are from the web
Look again at the picture proposition poem "Courtyard Deep":
The courtyard of "Seven Absolutes" is deep
The lonely empty court bamboo shadow shakes, and the servant is flat and flat
Green fat red skinny cannabis. Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping
Yellow flowers have long gone with the east wind, and ping ping is flat and flat
The dream in front of the moon gate is far away. Ping Ping Ping Ping Ping
Shake, banana, haruka, pingshui rhyme under the flat two Xiao.
A river of gulls and herons singing spring dawn, the picture is from the network
Childlike, picture from the internet
Well, take a look at today's outlink:
Shanglian: A river of gulls and herons singing spring dawn, pingping pingping pingping
Lower link: 仄仄平平仄仄平
Look at the picture as a propositional poem "Children's Fun", the title can add words, unlimited rhyme, five and seven can be absolutely.
Looking forward to the wide participation of friends and friends!