Shenzhen students who love life and love writing, Jing Bao provides you with a platform - Jing Composition. The Crystal Composition Column has been officially met with you on July 16, aiming to provide a platform for primary and secondary school students to display their talents and build a platform for students to communicate and learn from each other.
The "Crystal Composition" column is open to students in grades 3 to 9 in the city, and students can write essays according to the theme and requirements, and submit articles as required before the deadline. Excellent essays will be published every Friday in Jing Pao Newspaper, and new media platforms such as Jing Pao APP.
Here, you can let more people see your words; here, you will meet excellent compositions unexpectedly; here, you can fully realize your literary dreams. In order to enable readers to better enter the excellent compositions of Shenzhen students, we specially invite the instructors of each small author to leave valuable comments for the articles.
The theme of this issue is" " Courage to Take Responsibility, Willing to Dedicate". In recent days, at the moment of the epidemic, many principals and teachers have bravely stepped forward as volunteers to support the fight against the epidemic, showing the responsibility and responsibility of Shenzhen educators. In our daily life and study, in the people you are familiar with, have you also found the touching example of "courage to take responsibility and dedication"? Maybe it's your family, your teacher, or maybe you were one of them? Tell us about your findings and write down your thoughts.
The following are wonderful essays from students from Shenzhen Pengxing Experimental School, Dongxiao Primary School, Cuibei Experimental Primary School and Buxin Primary School, please enjoy.
1. My hero
Author: Shenzhen Pengxing Experimental School Class 5 (4) Ou Yutong
There is a group of people, who are like red candles, illuminating the darkness. They are the red vest volunteers, the heroes in my heart.
Uncle Su of the community is more than 50 years old, with a thin and thin body and a somewhat hunched back. Wrinkles covered the face, and there were many silver threads in the hair. Although he is about to retire, he is not idle and works as an ordinary volunteer in the community.
Uncle Sue is enthusiastic and optimistic. When the epidemic hit us, everyone was worried, and Uncle Su was always so optimistic and positive, often comforting us not to be afraid, reminding us to wash our hands and wear masks frequently. He wore a red vest to work on time every day, guiding everyone to conduct nucleic acid testing in an orderly manner, often working late. Although the work is hard, he does not complain, whenever we go to do nucleic acid, he will smile and wave at us, "Little friend, don't be afraid, just go ahead!" "Those kind words and warm smiles, like a gentle spring breeze, made our uneasy hearts suddenly calm down.
Uncle Suber was diligent and conscientious. Every day when he was doing nucleic acid at noon, he often just finished lunch and hurried to the community square. He trumpeted and broadcast over and over again, reminding people to do nucleic acids. Listening to his somewhat hoarse voice, my nose couldn't help but sour. Every day, when I see him directing more than 2,600 people in the community to test nucleic acids, I will secretly worry about him. But the thin man has been standing there firmly for several hours, never screaming tired, insisting on helping people finish the nucleic acid.
Uncle Sue was eager to help and give. One day when doing nucleic acid, a big lady would not use the health code and was anxious to stomp her feet. Uncle Su stepped forward, took the phone and said, "Don't worry, I'll help you!" He lowered his head and concentrated on helping the eldest lady. The eldest lady waited for a while, and then she became impatient: "When will this be done?" "It's okay, it's already done." Uncle Su smiled as he respectfully handed the phone to the eldest lady. "Thank you!" The eldest lady finally showed a bright smile.
Uncle Sue is the epitome of countless volunteers. It is precisely because there are thousands of volunteers like Uncle Su that the epidemic has been well controlled in China. They do not ask for anything in return, extend a hand of fraternity to people, and build a healthy barrier for people. They stand up, have the courage to sacrifice, are willing to give, and dedicate their love to the world. Although they are ordinary, they are doing extraordinary things. They will always be the greatest heroes in my heart!
Shi Wei, Chinese teacher of Pengxing Experimental School Class 5 (4), commented:
The little author turned his perspective to the most ordinary and ordinary characters around us, volunteers, and through the touching stories of one of them, Uncle Su, in the anti-epidemic activities, praised the most beautiful retrogrades who had the courage to take responsibility and were willing to dedicate, and carried forward the most beautiful spirit of the times. According to the overall structure of the total score, the article specifically describes the ordinary and touching deeds of Uncle Su from three aspects in the form of a comparative paragraph, with clear organization, simple language, sincere feelings, echoing from beginning to end, and the center is clear and prominent.
2. Adorable angel in white
Author: Shenzhen Pengxing Experimental School Class 3 (6) Niu Yiyi
Early in the morning of January 7, I got up to wash up and prepare to go to school early to make a final sprint for the final exam three days later. But I heard my mother say that Shenzhen suddenly had a new wave of epidemics, and Liantang was sealed! The COVID-19 pandemic is like a mischievous little mouse quietly coming to our side again.
After breakfast on this day, our whole family put on masks and went to the collection point to do nucleic acid. I thought we had arrived quite early, but I didn't expect that there was already a long queue here. I saw a lot of volunteers there to take people's temperatures, check their codes, and remind us from time to time to keep our distance. They smile and help those in need. The line moved slowly forward, and finally it was almost my turn. I saw paramedics wearing breathless protective suits, face coverings, and these cute "big whites" were like guards guarding us.
"Little friend, don't be afraid, open your mouth, ah..." "Big White" said to me gently while gently touching my throat with a cotton swab. Through the airtight protective suit, I could only see her dark circles and gentle eyes, and her movements were skillful and smooth, one after another, very fast.
I've been at home for almost a week, and I really miss being at school with my teachers and classmates! Late at night, I went to the balcony, saw that there were no pedestrians on the road, the nucleic acid collection point was still lit, I saw several "big white" figures, some lying on the table to rest, some standing on the side of the road on the phone, and some fell asleep on the bench... "Big white" - the courage to take on the white angel, is your guarding the outpost of epidemic prevention and control, protecting our beautiful homeland!
At this time, all I can do is go out less, wash my hands frequently, abide by various epidemic prevention and control regulations, and study well at home. I believe that with our joint efforts, we will be able to defeat this epidemic!
Guo Zhiping, a third-grade Chinese teacher at Pengxing Experimental School, commented:
The sudden outbreak of a new wave of the epidemic has changed our lives. In sincere and simple language, the young author wrote two scenes around him that were observed by the innocent eyes of children. The "Great White", who has the courage to take responsibility and is willing to dedicate, becomes the most beautiful retrograde. The little writer wrote what he saw, heard, felt, and realized. The epidemic has also made the little teenager understand the responsibility and responsibility.
3. I admire him — my military grandfather
Author: Shenzhen Pengxing Experimental School Class IV (5) Yang Yuchen
"Stroll along Shennan Avenue, admire the portraits of great people, in that spring, the mountain cannons here exploded..." On October 14, 2020, the 40th anniversary of the establishment of the Shenzhen Special Economic Zone. This year, the door of my family hung a glorious plaque of "Glorious Home" produced by the Ministry of Veterans Affairs and issued by the People's Government of Guangdong Province, because our family has a retired soldier who deserves praise, has the courage to take responsibility for the country and the people, and is willing to dedicate himself - my grandfather.
In order to realize the ideal of defending the motherland, my grandfather joined the army in December 1970 in the People's Armed Forces Department of Lechang County, Shaoguan City, Guangdong Province, joined the Communist Party of China in June 1976, and was honorably discharged in March 1979.
My grandfather, who used to be an Air Force engineer, was in charge of airport construction. Grandpa said that the country has its own airfield, in case of enemy attack, our aircraft can take off in time to fight back against the enemy, effectively protect the airspace and territorial security. The airport is the country's golden bell cover, Grandpa and his comrades-in-arms are not afraid of hardship and tiredness, took on the heavy responsibility of building the airport, his unit once built all the airports in Guangdong, Guangxi, Hunan at that time, including Guangzhou Baiyun Airport and Shantou Airport, one of the busiest airports today. I think that when I go to the airport in the future, I will definitely respect those ancestors who have the courage to take responsibility and are willing to dedicate!
My grandfather's experience made me very impressed and curious, and I asked my grandfather: "What impressed you the most when you were a soldier?" Grandpa said without hesitation: "The spirit of a soldier - independence and strength." Independence means that many things are done by yourself, not relying on others; being strong is embodied in not being intimidated by difficulties, encountering problems, and not being afraid. I think my grandfather is quite powerful, in his teens and twenties, he went south and north, exerted his youth, participated in so many major construction projects, and contributed to the defense of the family and the country!
I also want to learn from my grandfather's independence and strength, apply it to my own study and life, and become a talent who has the courage to take responsibility and be willing to dedicate!
I admire him very much, for the construction ideals of the motherland, for the pioneering development of the Shenzhen Special Economic Zone, he stuck to his post, diligent dedication, no regrets, our whole family is proud of Grandpa!
Mao Rui, a fourth-grade Chinese teacher at Pengxing Experimental School, commented:
Who is the cutest person? Writer Wei Wei said that they were soldiers of the Volunteer Army to Resist US Aggression and Aid Korea. Who is the cutest person? I say all the seemingly ordinary heroes who defend their homeland. Yuchen's article does not reveal a trace of the hardships of his grandfather's work era, but the four big characters of "Glorious House" are loud and sparkling, which is awe-inspiring. Grateful to those who have the courage to take responsibility and are willing to dedicate themselves to the backbone of the nation!
4. Different "battlefields", the same persistence
Author: Shenzhen Dongxiao Primary School Class 3 (4) Wu Baoyi
Due to the sudden outbreak of new crown pneumonia in Shenzhen, we can only stay in Shenzhen for winter vacation. There is such a group of "most beautiful retrogrades", they resolutely throw themselves into the frontline of the fight against the epidemic, do nucleic acid testing for residents, and escort the health of residents.
Every morning, nucleic acid testing points are built one after another, and residents of each household consciously line up to do nucleic acid. The testing point is bustling with medical staff and volunteers, who have been standing for hours at a time, and their gloves are full of sweat.
Healthcare workers on the frontline of the fight against the epidemic
At a nucleic acid testing site in Luohu, a young child had a foreign body stuck in the throat and had difficulty breathing, which was very critical. At this time, two medical staff rushed up and immediately used the "Heimlich First Aid Method" to finally save the child.
Luohu "anti-epidemic people" around me
My mother also participated in the volunteer team on the front line of the fight against the epidemic, and she fought in the front line of the fight against the epidemic, sometimes guiding the masses, sometimes assisting in scanning codes, sometimes maintaining order, and sometimes collecting information. I was particularly impressed by a photo of her mother standing in the crowd with a QR code, only to see her standing there with a sign of a Cantonese nucleic acid QR code, dedicated and dedicated, which is an example for me to learn.
Incarnate as the teacher of "Sherlock Holmes"
The teachers of our school also actively joined the nucleic acid testing points as volunteers, and they incarnated as "Sherlock Holmes" one by one, and carried out circulation work for the residents of the precinct by telephone. They have contributed to the epidemic in Shenzhen, and their actions are the "best textbooks" for educating us.
Different "battlefields", the same perseverance. The medical staff, teachers, my mother, and other volunteers who are on the front lines of the fight against the epidemic are on the front lines of the fight against the epidemic, guarding our health with their actions. They are the most beautiful retrogrades in Shenzhen! We want to give them a thumbs up for their efforts.
As a Young Pioneer, I want to learn from them, and I want to do my best to do a good job of personal protection: wash my hands frequently, wear a mask, do not gather, and insist on doing nucleic acid testing. I hope that the epidemic will end as soon as possible, let us cheer for Shenzhen!
Zeng Xiaohong, Chinese teacher of Class 3 (4) of Dongxiao Primary School, commented:
The small author selected three examples and used the form of sub-titles to interpret the spirit of Shenzhen people who are brave to take responsibility and are willing to dedicate. The article is lyrical while narrating, and the ending focuses on expressing emotions, both taking care of the beginning and summarizing the whole text, and the beginning and end are coherent and completed in one go.
5. My family's "most handsome retrograde"
Author: Shenzhen Buxin Primary School Class 5 (5) Zhan Qintong
A sudden epidemic has forced everyone to stay at home, but there is such a group of people, who are brave and brave in the face of the epidemic. They went to the forefront of the epidemic to help everyone. Have you guessed who they are? Yes, they are the "most beautiful retrogrades" that we can see everywhere around us. There is also such a "retrograde" in our family, he is my father, and he is also the "most handsome retrograde" in my family. What kind of story is behind him? Listen to me.
On the first day of the outbreak, Dad began to work from morning to night to assist the community to assist medical staff to do nucleic acid testing. Sometimes it was busy until midnight, sometimes it didn't come back all night. Dad hadn't come back when we went to bed at night, and when we got up in the morning, Dad was gone again, and I hadn't seen Dad in the same house for a long time. Just two days ago, Dad received another notice, saying that he was too busy to go to the Dapeng Isolation Hotel to support for a period of time, and he could not go home for the time being, and after getting up that day, his mother said that Dad had left home with his suitcase in the morning. At that moment, I was a little sad, and I was disappointed and unwilling in my heart. But I also know we can't stop it, because he has to help more people in need! Mom also told us about the previous Hunan snow disaster many people blocked on the highway can not go home, Dad rushed to Guangdong Shaoguan Expressway for the first time to support, sleeping in the freight car, eating boiling water noodles; and when the Wenchuan earthquake, Dad packed his luggage and was ready to leave at any time; Dad's courage to take on selfless dedication made me feel shocked, I seemed to see Dad's tall figure busy, round face full of sweat, thick eyebrows and big eyes smiling to help everyone, He disregarded the harsh environment to give everyone epidemic prevention and disinfection and distribution of materials, but he did not drink a mouthful of water, such a father is not afraid of pain and tired, I am proud of my father! I also want to use him as an example to help those in need around me. Come on, Dad!
We have missed Dad very much since he left. But we can't drag his hind legs, to make him more at ease in the front line of work, we clean the house, the door handle is also disinfected every day, so that every small corner is filled with fragrant breath, I think this is to welcome Dad home! When my mother goes out, I also accompany my brother, we study, exercise, do housework together at home, waiting for the day when the epidemic is over, as long as we are confident in the future, we will definitely win!
From my father, I learned the spirit of responsibility and dedication, which inspired me to go forward and go further. I want to learn to help each other, dedicate love, become a little "most beautiful retrograde", and hope that this battle with the virus will be won as soon as possible, and everyone will be safe, healthy and healthy.
Yuan Yixiao, Chinese teacher of Class 5 (5) of Buxin Primary School, commented:
Dad is the protagonist of this article, when the country is in danger, he is not afraid of danger, goes against the current, guards the "small family" and "everyone" with a cool head, and is the most real "most handsome retrograde". The little author recalls the bits and pieces of life, what the book thinks in his heart, and expresses his reverence for his father. The language of this article is fresh and lively, and at the same time, it makes good use of comparisons and reasonably quotes ancient poems, which adds a lot of color to the article. Dad is great and selfless, and the most precious wealth he brings to the author is responsibility and dedication. The little author takes his father as an example and does his best to become a little "most beautiful retrograde". Readers deeply feel the powerful power in the heart of the little author and praise the little author! Let's look forward to the arrival of the good together with confidence!
6. Dedication of special time
Author: Shenzhen Cuibei Experimental Primary School Class 6 (4) Li Zheqi
The sudden arrival of the epidemic caught us off guard, and before we could say goodbye to the teacher, we entered the winter vacation life. Angels dressed in white shuttle through all corners of the city, wherever we go we need to "hug the green code", the sound of "normal temperature" is always coiled in the mall office building.
In the special period, many volunteers who dare to resist and are not afraid of the virus have emerged, although they are not doctors or staff of the community street office, they still stand up to assist medical staff to do nucleic acid for people, assist the streets to do safety precautions, and help the community to send warmth to the observers in home isolation, including the teachers of our Cuibei Primary School.
Under the leadership of our vice principal Zou, all communities in Luohu District can see their hard work, on January 12, the first batch of 20 teachers sank the community, some teachers struggled in the front line of nucleic acid testing, the weather was quite cold that day, but they were as meticulous as usual in school, working with enthusiasm, blue clothes and hats are particularly obvious, they warm people with smiles, when people have no operation, they stride forward and seriously tell them how to operate, When someone has checked the nucleic acid code, the teachers will gently point in the direction of the queue, smile and nod, and when someone does not cooperate and does not pull away from the distance of one meter, they will calmly go forward to persuade them. Another part of the teachers went to the street office to assist the staff to carry out big data collation and verification work, and all those who had been to dangerous areas made phone calls one by one, hundreds of calls, and teachers dialed one by one and proofread and entered one by one. Teachers gave up their holidays, responded to the call of the state, assisted the medical staff to be nervously busy, dedicated, in the face of difficulties, sacrificed their small homes for everyone to actively stand up and fight in the front line of the fight against the epidemic! They are truly responsible for practicing the struggle culture of Luohu's pioneering spirit.
It is precisely under the efforts of medical staff and volunteers that the epidemic situation in Shenzhen has been initially controlled, and behind these achievements, there are not only the efforts of medical staff and community street workers, but also many people like our teachers who silently dedicate themselves to it and work hard in it...
As students, although we can't go to the front line of epidemic prevention like teachers, we can get vaccinated as soon as possible, reduce going out during the epidemic, and wear masks when going out, which is also a special dedication.
Zou Guoliang, Vice Principal of Cuibei Experimental Primary School, commented:
The sudden outbreak of the epidemic has allowed teachers and students of primary and secondary schools to enter the winter vacation in advance, during this time, Luohu educators have taken the initiative to ask for help in epidemic prevention, and children have also actively cooperated with home epidemic prevention. The little author is good at discovering the beauty in life, understanding the dynamics of the epidemic through TV news and media reports, and carefully understanding and reproducing the scene of Luohu educators fighting against the epidemic.
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