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"Looking at the Moon and Cherishing the Distance". The sea is born with a bright moon, and the end of the world is at this time

Look at the moon and look away

[Tang] Zhang Jiuling

The sea is born with a bright moon, and the end of the world is at this time.

The lover complained about the night, and even thought of each other at night.

Extinguish the candle and fill the light, and the cloak feel dewy.

Can't afford to give away, but also sleep in the dream of a good period.

Appreciation:

This is a poem that remembers the distant people on the night of the moon. The opening sentence "Bright moon born on the sea" is majestic and broad, and it is a good sentence for thousands of years. The opening sentence looks bland, without a strange word, without a little bit of dyed color, blurted out, but naturally has a high-level and harmonious atmosphere. This sentence is completely a scene, pointing out the "looking at the moon" in the title. The second sentence, "The end of the world is at this time", that is, from the scene into the emotion, into the "Huaiyuan". These two sentences take the scene of the poem title together, but it is effortless, and it is still the natural style of Zhang Jiuling's ancient poems.

From the moonrise to the moon's sunset, it is a long time, and the poem says that it is "even the night", that is, all night. This all-night moonlight is indifferent to ordinary people, and the two friends who miss each other across the world can't sleep under the moon for a long time, only to feel that the long night is long, so they drop a "complaint" word. "Lover" refers to a friend with deep feelings. Three or four sentences, centered on the word "resentment", echoed with "lover" and "lovesickness", echoed with "remote night" and "night", and the first two sentences were carried up in one go. These two sentences use flowing water pairs, which are natural and smooth, with ancient poetic rhymes.

I can't sleep at night, who is to blame? Is the candlelight in the house too dazzling? So I extinguished the candle and walked out of the courtyard in my clothes, and the light was still so bright. This round of bright moon at the end of the world is so touching that it makes it even more difficult for people to fall asleep when they see its beautiful and perfect brilliance. It was late at night, the climate was cooler, and the dew had wet the clothes on his body. The word "nourishing" here is not only moist, but also contains the meaning of breeding. The word "Luzi" is written in the spirit of "remote night" and "night". "Extinguishing the candle and giving mercy to the light, cloaking and feeling dewy", two sentences delicately write the actual scene of the moon that does not sleep late at night.

When you are sleepless, what can you give away? There was nothing but a hand full of moonlight. This moonlight is full of my heart, but how can I give it to you? Or sleep! Maybe I'll be able to be with you in my dreams when I'm asleep. The two sentences of "unbearable", the conception is wonderful, the artistic conception is quiet, there is no deep emotion and personal experience, I am afraid it cannot be written. Here the poet uses the Two Poetic Meanings of Jin Luji's "Shine with Afterglow, And Win The Hand" ("An Sleeping North Hall") to turn the old into the new, and leisurely put out not to think freely. At this point, the poem stops abruptly, only to feel the afterglow, which is evocative.

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