First, the content of the examination is clear.
1, from the word deformation, do you know what type of essay to write today? (Imaginary Composition)
2, "Remember", have you ever read a book with this word as the title? (Journey to the West, The Adventures of Tom Sawyer, Robinson Crusoe) These are all interesting stories, so we must not only deform today, but also write about deformation? (Experiences, travels, why to change, how to change, seeing and hearing, your own feelings, etc.), to write an interesting and engaging story.
Second, how to "deform".
1. If you are allowed to change, what do you want to become? Tell me why? There are many things that we can deform.
2, how to write "deformation"
There is such a text "The Village of Grass Worms", read this passage, read which sentence, you know that he has been deformed? Why? (Space expanded)
Method one Changes in the surrounding environment
There is a famous novelist Kafka in the world who has a novel also called "Metamorphosis", which sentence do you know he has been deformed?
Unlike just now, it was just through the change of the surrounding environment that he was deformed. But it's not here, here's straight to say. What else do you know he's deformed?
Method two: changes in appearance, changes in living habits, and changes in psychology
Which of all the things you most want to become natural, in this way, you can choose one, or several to use, and write about the process of your own deformation. After writing it, read it to others and ask, where to start, you are deformed?
Third, how to write a wonderful story
1, metamorphosis has only completed the deformation here, but the important thing is not the deformation, but the experience after the deformation, there is a child who is also deformed, you read it, think he wrote how?
3. Has he deformed? Change is change, but how do you remember the story?
(1) The story is incomplete and has no ending. What happens after the foot is stepped on?
(2) There is no detailed description
You can also write about their inner fears, how they found food, what happened to their surroundings after they came down, etc.
4, this child modified his own work, this time to see how he wrote? Where has it become concrete?
Writing Points:
(1) When we want to make others believe in it, in addition to the detailed description, real feelings, we also need to bring people a sense of picture, that is, to describe the scene when the story occurs, the action of the characters, the demeanor, psychology and other details of the description, can give people a sense of picture.
(2) The plot should change and be attractive.
This is a metamorphosis written by a child, read it, will your mood change with the development of the plot?
When reading, the mood also fluctuates with the plot, which is exactly in line with an idiom - a twist and turn.
If there are some twists and turns, accidents, interludes, and surprises in the Metamorphosis, the Metamorphosis will be more convincing.
Fourth, how to write the end
1What kind of self do you see after the transformation, and which self do you prefer?
2How does the new experience after the transformation give you a new feeling? How has the perception of things changed?
Writing Requirements:
Not only to write out the deformation, but also to write out the experience after the deformation, not only to have clear details, to have real feelings, but also to create some surprises, accidents, so that the metamorphosis you write has a sense of picture, the plot should be twisted and turned, and finally achieve the unity of things and me.