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Junior high school original essay review: "Sharing love", using flashbacks to set suspense

Junior high school original essay review: "Sharing love", using flashbacks to set suspense

Above the head is the blue sky, under the feet is a warm and warm land, between heaven and earth, everyone can feel the beauty of nature. The earth shares its beauty with people, and there are some beautiful emotions in the world that will be shared and spread like a spring breeze throughout the world.

Once there was the daughter of a rich man who had a quarrel with her father, a woman named Nightingale. Now everyone knows her, and Nurses' Day in most countries around the world is Nightingale's birthday. Nightingale was simple from an early age, never despised the poor, met begging people on the street, she would give her pocket money to help others, people thought she was very loving. Nor did she ever go to any ball, and those in tuxedos had solemn faces on their white faces, but greedy eyes, and Nightingale would grieve at the sight of such a face, and she seemed to be completely unable to get along with them. She didn't understand why these people, who were so rich, couldn't share their love and help those in need, just blindly pursuing material pleasures?

The quarrel with her father was because she wanted to be a nurse on the battlefield and dedicate her love on the battlefield. At that time, everyone thought that nurses were a lowly profession, and only poor women or women of low status would become nurses. For this reason, both her father and her sister desperately tried to stop it, believing that Nightingale would tarnish their family's reputation by doing so. But Nightingale went anyway. She always thinks: Is kindness still precious?

Junior high school original essay review: "Sharing love", using flashbacks to set suspense

At the field hospital, she earned the title of "Lantern Goddess". She also went to the ward with the highest risk index of contagiousness and the highest risk index of the virus to comfort the patients, and the patients were touched by her, and under her careful care, the mortality rate of the patients gradually decreased. Later, her fame grew, and an International Nurses Day was set at the international level. Since then, the status of nurses has no longer been inferior, and more and more people have become nurses. Now, nurses can be seen everywhere in the hospital, the environment for patients to treat diseases is getting better and better, and the confidence in fighting diseases is getting higher and higher.

Nightingale's love was quickly transmitted to the whole world. People began to share love, someone fell on the street, and immediately someone lifted him up; when the beggar begged, he no longer had to fear the indifference of the world; when there was a car accident, someone immediately dialed 120... The spring breeze of shared love blows throughout the world.

Junior high school original essay review: "Sharing love", using flashbacks to set suspense

Nightingale is an angel, and the light emitted from her body illuminates one person after another, making everyone an angel; Nightingale is a mirror that refracts love to others.

Sharing love brings happiness to people, the world is full of love, the world will be better; sharing love is like the root of a big tree, which can deliver nutrients to all parts of the tree, and the big tree will grow a pavilion canopy, without fear of wind and rain!

Comments:

You use the flashback method to set up a suspense at the beginning, let the reader think about why the father and daughter quarrel, and then describe the growth process of Nightingale's heart little by little, praise Nightingale's kindness, and also appeal to the atmosphere of kindness and mutual help.

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