In early summer, the weather is neither hot nor cold, but the scenery is very beautiful. Even if you don't see the peach and plum spring breeze, it is difficult to find the shadow of the begonia flowers, but the willow branches are hanging down the stream, the tall green bamboo is straight up to the clouds, and the wild flowers in the fields are also exuding bursts of fragrance, which makes people feel extremely comfortable.
In the evening, the sunset is shining and the afterglow is full of sky, and the moon rises tomorrow and shines for thousands of miles. The farmer is also busy, even if there is no spring, red and half dusty, but the scene of hemp leaves and leaves, boiling cocoons and village incense is more gratifying. The following introduces the seven laws of amateur female poets, full of strong atmosphere of peasant life, how do experts evaluate it?
Summer farmhouse
Author: Chen Jiaxin
The tall trees and cicadas are singing in the evening, and the residual glow shines on the willows and reflects the dust.
The green and green leaves float in the water, and the sound of frogs is clear.
The wild old man waited for the guests, and the fisherman listened to the rudder across the stream.
The smoke of the cooking is blown away by the wind, and the bamboo tower is alone to watch the moon rise.
Chen Jiaxin is a female college student, she liked to read very much when she was in middle school, and she also enthusiastically signed up for the school's poetry club to discuss and study ancient poems with everyone. After entering university, although she studied science and engineering, she still had a strong interest in poetry creation, and published poetry works in some newspapers and magazines from time to time.
Born into a poor rural family, the poet studied hard, often receiving scholarships and prizes in several national competitions. She once went home to visit her family, talked cordially with her elders, laughed with her childhood friends, and recorded her true feelings in poetry.
The opening chapter describes the weather conditions and the twilight scene, "The tall trees and cicadas are singing in the evening, and the residual glow is shining on the willows and flying dust." "The sky is clear, the birds on the branches start singing incessantly early in the morning, and the cicadas in the trees seem to be not far behind, even if the singing voice is not as beautiful as the yellow warbler, but it still performs tirelessly, and when night is about to fall, it seems to be very hard.
In the evening, when the sun sets, the remnants of the sun shine obliquely on the willow trees by the stream, and from a distance, you can see the fine dust in the air, they are like little elves flying up and down, and there is no pattern. It is precisely because the "air is clear" and the sunlight is not strong that the author can clearly distinguish those small particles.
The jaw coupling seems to be a combination of movement and static, "Qingqing Ping leaves float in the water, and the sound of frogs is clear." "The water is not rippling, the green pings are floating, and if it weren't for a few wild ducks and some swimming fish, people would have thought it was a frozen picture.
At this time, there were bursts of frog chirping in my ears, and although I couldn't see these small animals, I could still sense that they were also extremely powerful. As if they don't add a little spice to a beautiful summer night, they feel like they are living in nature in vain.
These two sentences are still moving, quiet in the noisy, and the word "clear" conveys a unique feeling in the summer night.
The coupling turned to portray the activities of the characters, "The wild old man is idle and waits for the guests, and the fisherman listens to the rudder across the stream." "Some of the old people in the village are quite literate, and they like to recite poems against each other, so poets often communicate with them, and they are often exposed to them. Although the elderly live in the countryside all year round, they can learn about the situation outside through radio and television. Neighbors will often walk around each other, talk enthusiastically, and even drink and talk happily, without getting drunk and not returning.
In the evening, the fishermen also began to call it a day, and they returned with a full load and a good mood, and sang a small tune loudly while rocking the oars vigorously. The three words "listen across the stream" show that the singing is melodious and can be heard clearly from a distance. At the same time, the battle of "idle chanting and steady rudder" is exquisite, expressing the leisurely and simple nature of rural life. (Partition is a sounding word)
At the end, a picture of pastoral life is revealed, "The smoke is curling and the wind blows away, and I go up to the bamboo building alone to watch the moon rise." "The night breeze is slightly cool, the face is not cold, and the smoke curls up, like a dream. The poet slowly climbed the small building, leaned on the railing to listen to the wind, looked up at the moon, and his mood should be extremely relaxed. As for what she is thinking at this moment, it is up to the readers to imagine it.
Looking at the seven rules of the amateur female poet, it is fresh and smooth, and the description techniques are varied, although there is a lack of some rhetorical devices, and there are no allusions, but it is not a disease-free moan, but it seems to be quite a peasant life, which is worthy of people's appreciation. Connoisseurs, what do you think?