Commentary on the Poetry of Ge Ming Cao
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Light breeze and drizzle
Text/Deng Wanfa
The breeze craves a drizzle
From the side of the horse to the drizzle
Leaning on the railing to flick the drizzle's cheeks
Drizzle, eyes full of water, silent starlight
The heart waves that have been quiet for a long time in the middle of the night are rippling
Loneliness, waiting, longing
Bit by bit falls in the arms of the breeze, and the breeze understands the drizzle
A drizzle hugs the thinly clothed breeze
Drizzle loves the freshness of the breeze
The breeze loves the lingering drizzle
Wherever the drizzle falls, the breeze waits
The drizzle yearns for the breeze
has been silently waiting for news from the breeze in the heavenly palace
That night, the sound of heavy hooves woke up the drizzly dream
A drizzle of rain fell like a fairy in the wilderness
The excitement that has been hot for a long time, is hoofing
Pursuit, dream, expectation
Wisps poured into the eyes of the drizzle, and the drizzle loves the breeze
The breeze kisses the delicate drizzle
The breeze felt the gentleness of the drizzle
The drizzle appreciates the demeanor of the breeze
The breeze blows and the drizzle drifts
April 17, 2022
赏析
The first time you read this poem, you can feel the back and forth of the poem, in the poet's pen, the breeze and the drizzle are a proper pair of lovers, and it is not an ordinary love, but a lover in love. The poet grasped the characteristics of the breeze and drizzle very well, with the help of natural creation, coupled with the continuous influx of the poet's emotions, which contributed to the occurrence of this natural meteorological love, therefore, from the poetic language, you can see the romantic temperament of the poet. The important feature of this poem is that it is based on the occurrence and development of the breeze and drizzle, which opens up the emotional veins of the poem and makes the poem full of rhythm and affection. In the process of breeze and drizzle, emotions continue to heat up, and this smooth love reads to make people envious, yearning, and suddenly have the confidence to fall in love. Therefore, it is necessary to read this poem carefully and feel the depth of that love.
Appreciate the first verse, straight to the point, the breeze longs for the drizzle, and gathers with the drizzle from a distant place, which shows the attitude and action of the breeze, and the action reflects the determination and courage of love. The poet then writes about the interaction and affection of the breeze and the drizzle in detail, reflecting everything from the expression to the mental activity. This verse is written about the breeze following the drizzle, the drizzle waiting for the breeze, so the drizzle's psychological activities are more abundant, the poet writes "the drizzle has been quiet in the night for a long time, in the ripples, loneliness, waiting, missing", these words with emotional colors, the drizzle is written as a girl like a deep boudoir, Chu Chu moving, and Chu Chu pitiful.
This sentence "dripping in the arms of the breeze", just like the drizzle in the arms of the breeze, the lingering feeling appears, and continues to strengthen, from the words understand, hug, like, love, wait, the intensity of emotions from the outside to the inside continues to sublimate, completely beyond the experience of human feelings. The poet's observation and understanding of natural things can be said to have reached the realm, and such a delicate emotional description is like being in love, and the atmosphere of love is like contagion.
In the second verse, the breeze longs for the drizzle, and here it is the other way around, the drizzle yearns for the breeze, one positive and one negative, complements each other, and loves each other, such feelings are the love of the world, and the poet sees it in the breeze and the drizzle. The poet first explained that the drizzle waited for the arrival of the breeze, and when the wind came, it woke up the dream of the rain, which turned into a surprise of the rain. Then, the rain falls like a fairy, the mood is very full, the excitement overflows the lines of the poem, the poet uses heavy pen and ink to describe the eyes of the drizzle, and the eyes are the windows of the soul, and the emotional feedback is the most direct and obvious, which is an important reference for men and women in reality.
Then, the poet also expressed a lingering and sympathetic description, this time it is the display of the white-hot stage of love, love, deep kiss, feeling gentleness, appreciating grace, how to blow how to float, love, and mutual appreciation, each other is completely integrated into each other, and can no longer be separated, written like glue, envious of the reader.
Judging from the content of the poem, the poet expresses the reciprocal side of love through wind and rain, and only on this basis can love go smoothly and both parties have further possibilities. This poem completely brings human emotions into the content, which is why there are such vivid and touching scenes and psychological descriptions. The poet thus becomes the link of emotional communication, not only the transmission from reality to poetry, but also the reaction force of poetry to reality. From the love that resonates at the same frequency with the breeze and drizzle, we can understand the importance of love being evenly matched.
Throwing bricks and leading jade, discussing poetry on poetry, and learning by writing, this is the end. If you have different opinions, please feel free to communicate in the comment area. If you have a recommended poem, please leave a message to let me know, enjoy it together, and make progress together. I am the poet Ge Ming Cao, welcome to pay attention, see you in the next issue of poetry review!
Author: Deng Wanfa, 15 years in the army, with the rank of major, worked in the government department of Zhongshan City, and later founded a business and did business. Passionate about poetry.