The level of a child's composition has a great impact on the child's performance, so the improvement of the composition is very important for the child.
However, how to effectively improve the level of composition is a difficult thing, relying on the teacher?
It is not realistic for a teacher to take care of dozens of students in a class alone.
Then, only by relying on yourself and mastering more "cheats" of composition writing can you effectively improve the level of composition.
How can I write a good composition?
Master the eight core "cheats" of writing, and the high score will be caught
In the previous examinations, the score of composition accounts for a large proportion, and in the general 100-point examination paper, composition accounts for 4% of the score, so it cannot be ignored.
And some children, although they are good at Xi learning, often suffer in composition and always don't know how to write high scores.
In fact, this is not to say that the child is "stupid", but that the child has not mastered these core "cheats" of writing essays.
1. The title of the essay should not be empty and boring
The title of the essay is an important factor that affects the teacher's first impression of the essay, if the title of the essay is empty and boring, then the teacher's first impression will not be too good, so it is not easy to score high.
Therefore, in terms of titles, we need to know how to use clever rhetorical devices, apply words, borrow formulas, create suspense, etc., to point out the theme of the composition, so that people have a concise and concise feeling of wanting to find out.
2. The beginning of the essay should be wonderful
At the beginning of the essay, you must point out the main idea of the essay, and it should not be too ordinary.
For example, we can use the "straight to the point" method to point out the topic, and at the same time add some quotations and aphorisms, which can not only achieve the function of the beginning, but also reflect our knowledge, and the teacher will generally give high marks.
3. Pay attention to maintaining depth at the end of the essay
The end and the beginning are of great significance, and they are important factors that affect the teacher's grading, after all, when the teacher corrects the composition, he may face a large number of correction tasks, so many teachers attach more importance to the beginning and the end.
When writing the end, the first thing to remember is "echoing from the beginning to the end", the teacher is often impressed by the beginning, and if you can see the echo at the end, you will have a higher intention to give points.
In addition, it is best to use methods such as "quoting good sentences", "lyrical arguments" or "calls" at the end to subjectively guide the reader's resonance and improve the reader's approval.
4. The clues of the essay should be logical
A good essay must have a clue that runs through the whole text, and when choosing this clue, we must pay attention to the logic of the clue, and the logic can write a good essay very smoothly.
When choosing the type of clue, using the three types of "thing", "emotion" and "sentence" will be more conducive to logical presentation.
5. The description of the content should be vivid
In terms of content description, many people tend to be more blunt, such as describing a person laughing, usually directly saying "he laughed", "he laughed", etc., and had to write the word "laugh".
In fact, "description" is to show "laughter" without the word "laugh", such as describing a smile with "slightly upturned corners of the mouth", which will make the article more vivid.
Therefore, when describing things, do not "go straight", but know how to depict things through "action", "psychology", "language" and other side factors, which will be more vivid.
6. The narrative method of the content should be reasonably arranged
There are many ways to narrate the events of the composition content, such as narrative, flashback, interpolation, etc., these narrative methods are not used casually, we need to choose a reasonable narrative method according to the subject matter and content we write, or comprehensively use a variety of narrative methods to make our article more exciting.
7. Accurate use of language skills
Writing essays cannot be full of "what is written", but need to integrate the language skills we have learned.
For example, you must learn to skillfully use metaphors, quotations, comparisons and other writing techniques, and be good at using verbs and adjectives accurately, so that the article looks more literary, and the teacher will give a higher score.
8. Know how to expand imagination skillfully
Some children always have no clue when writing essays, they don't know how to write, and they don't know what to write.
In fact, if you can skillfully expand your imagination when writing an essay, then the content of the essay will automatically appear like a spring.
Imagination is not a kind of "cranky", it also requires skill, and if you develop imagination from the perspective of "scientific knowledge", "wishes" and "protagonist replacement", it will be more convincing and better organize the logic.
In fact, there are many ways to write a good essay, if your child can't write an essay, you can refer to this "Elementary School Student's One-sentence Diary", which is very helpful for children to improve their writing skills.
The above eight "core cheats" for getting high scores are explained in detail in this book, and teach children how to apply them and write a beautiful composition.
"A Sentence Diary for Primary School Students" is a composition tutorial book, the author is Gui Zhiming, a senior teacher in Huanggang, the former principal of Huanggang No. 2 Middle School, and a middle school Chinese teacher.
He has been deeply involved in the Chinese industry for decades, has very rich teaching experience and subject cognition, especially in composition, has won the title of provincial and municipal model worker for many times, and has published many composition tutoring books and extracurricular reading materials.
In addition to introducing the "Eight Cores", this book also introduces the "Four Methods" for mastering the essentials of composition, as well as the problem analysis and solutions to why children cannot write high-scoring essays.
There are also parents' cognitive misunderstandings and wrong methods for literary Xi, reminding parents to close the pit and teach their children to efficiently improve their writing skills.
My child has used this writing book for less than half a year, and his writing level has obviously improved by several grades. In the last few essays, the teacher gave the children an A+, and they even showed it on the podium.
Now I find that every time my child writes an essay, he knows that he should think in advance and establish the outline of the whole essay before he starts writing, and the child says that it is not easy to go off topic.
Recently, I read children's essays and found that children also know how to use poems, quotes, etc. at the beginning of the article, know how to use rhetorical devices in the content, and echo the end from beginning to end, the whole article is "flesh and blood", which makes people feel very comfortable to read.
With the help of "One Sentence Diary for Primary School Students", the child's composition level will continue to rise, and the score of the composition will also be firmly grasped by the child, so that the child will become comfortable in the major exams in the future, and the academic will naturally "sesame blossom and rise".
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