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If you had to choose something that you know and are interested in to introduce to others, what would you intend to introduce? What are some of the things around you that interest you? What is there in your world that fascinate you? Please choose a thing that interests you and write about it using the appropriate description.
1. Tell me: What are the things you love in life?
2. Observe
1. Shape (shape, size, color, material, composition)
2. Order of observation (from the whole to the part, from top to bottom, from outside to inside...) ）
3. Tell me about its origin. Write about how you got it and why it became your beloved object. What emotions are contained in it?
01 Depiction method
In order to write this essay well, students need to carefully observe the thing, analyze it carefully, and grasp the typical characteristics of the thing to describe it in detail.
In the process of description, we can use the explanatory methods we have learned to make things more vivid, more vivid, and more concrete.
02 Writing Method
1. Writing methods related to animals and plants:
1. Grasp the characteristics of the object of description. It mainly introduces the morphology, habits, distribution, varieties, functions, animal breeding, plant cultivation, and history of animals and plants.
2. Arrange the order of explanations reasonably. Spatial order: top to bottom, left to right, front to back, far: near, inside to outside, middle first, then both sides, etc. Chronological: from ancient to modern. Logical order: Feature-Use, Cause-Effect, Whole-Part, Major-Minor, Generalization-Specific.
3. Use appropriate explanations. Numbers, examples, comparisons, analogies, categories...
2. Writing methods related to objects:
Beginning: Briefly summarize the origin of the item and its general characteristics.
The middle (1) introduces the shape of the item.
(2) Introduce the usage of the article.
(3) Introduce the role of the object: summarize the object, borrow the object's expression, and express the emotion of the object.
In the process of description, it is necessary to pay attention to the use of various explanatory methods. For example, make numbers, make comparisons, make analogies, give examples...
This is conducive to describing the introduced items more vividly and vividly.
3. Writing methods related to food
1. First explain what we want to describe in our composition. Indicate when, where, and with whom you're going to cook or what you're going to eat.
2. After pointing out what is being described, we have to write about what kind of mood we are in, and after waiting, we finally see this food.
3. You can focus on the food, starting with its color.
4. After writing the color, you can write about the fragrance.
egret
Zhou Jiaduo, fifth grade of Minle Primary School
"Two yellow orioles are singing green willows, and a line of egrets is in the sky." I read this ancient poem, and I fell in love with the magical - the egret. I like egrets a lot because they are almost perfect birds, the combination of pigments, the size of their body, everything is suitable. The egret is a beautiful bird, elegant and noble!
The egret is an avian egret that is divided into four categories, among which there are the great egret, the middle egret, the little egret and the yellow-billed egret, all of which are called "egrets". The Great Egret is 70 to 90 centimeters long and weighs between 4 and 6 kilograms; The baby egret is about 20 to 30 centimeters long and weighs between 1 and 2 kilograms; Individual body length reaches 50 centimeters and weighs about 3 kilograms; The yellow-billed egret is 60 to 70 centimeters long and weighs between 3 and 4 kilograms.
The egret's curved neck resembles a small "S", and its long, thin beak resembles a strong needle-nosed pliers; Iron blue slender legs, often prefer to be independent on one foot; The snow-white feathers all over her body shine in the sun, like a fairy in white, beautiful and lovely.
There are 13 species of egrets in the genus, which are generally more abundant in China, Japan and Malaysia. The grace of the egret can even surpass that of the white swan. Egrets do not move in the woods and are rarely seen at sea, but are often found on the shores of lakes and marshes, paddy fields, river banks, beaches, and coastal streams in spring and summer, where they are hotels.
Egrets love to feed, nest, and breed near the water, and they are active during the day and never disturb humans. When they feed on small fish and shrimp, they will use the same foot to step on them, they are very accurate, and they always catch the fish that can swim.
The egret is a beautiful poem, a delicate poem, a prose poem that is contained in the bones. The mention of the name egret will leave me with a lot of memories.
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