[Contemporary Poets Point General Tai] Li Jing Volume
Li Jing
Li Jing, pen name Xinsu, is a native of Hengshan, Nanyue. "Selected Poems of Meiwan Pavilion" is about to be published.
Mercy Qu straightened the language of the time, not caring about the ancients
A review of "Meiwan Pavilion Poetry" and the 40th anniversary of the establishment of He Nanyue Poetry and Painting Society
Author: Xiao Honghui
Forty years ago, that is, on August 25, 1983, Mr. Ma Jigao, a well-known expert in literature and history, president of the China Yun Literature Society, professor of Xiangtan University, and Mr. Ma Jigaoer, an expert in the history of ancient literature, chairman of the China Fuxue Research Association, and professor of Hunan Normal University, together with Tan Xuechun, Hu Xizhi, Kang Huachu and a group of older poetry seniors gathered in Nanyue Mountain Villa in Hengshan, announcing the establishment of Nanyue Poetry and Painting Society (actually Nanyue Poetry Society and Nanyue Calligraphy and Painting Society, the names are sometimes divided), with Mr. Yang Chunqiu as the president and Mr. Ma Jigao as the vice president. Tan Xuechun and Hu Xizhi are appointed deputy secretary-generals. Nanyue Poetry Society is one of the earliest and most influential poetry organizations established in the country after the reform and opening up. Most of the older generation of poets represented by President Yang Chunqiu have extremely profound cultivation of Chinese culture, experienced the baptism of blood and fire before the founding of New China, and also experienced the twists and turns and turbulence before the reform and opening up after the founding of the People's Republic of China. They have a "century-old worry", that is, they are worried that we are a "poetry country", and the tradition of poetry will be broken after a hundred years, so as soon as it is opened, they will rise to the top and shout wildly, set up a poetry society, sing and exchange, form a journal, open classes and lectures, and cultivate new people. Now, the Nanyue Poetry Society presents a thriving situation, the spirit of the poet, the literary brilliance and beauty of the poem, passed down from generation to generation and keeps pace with the times. The 40th anniversary of the establishment of Nanyue Poetry Calligraphy and Painting Society is worth celebrating!
On the occasion of the 40th anniversary of the establishment of the Nanyue Poetry and Painting Society, I read the new book "Meiwan Pavilion Poems" by Li Jing, a colleague of the Poetry Society and the current secretary general, carefully recited the whole text, savored it, and sighed without realizing it: With this special collection, it is worthy of the ancestors, and it can be comforted!
Teacher Li's poems, in summary, from the perspective of creation, she strongly advocated Yuan Zhang's "sexual spirit theory", so she expressed the sexual spirit alone, naturally free, and unrestrained. Correspondingly, in terms of overall style, it is fresh all the way, or fresh and vulgar, or elegant and beautiful, or clear and handsome, or beautiful and gentle, in short, the style is in a "Qing" character, reading her poems, quite refreshing, delightful. Moreover, the biggest feature of Mr. Li's poetry, which can also be said to be a contribution, is that her poetry has a strong creativity, on the basis of inheriting the ancient Chinese poetry tradition, and the various artistic techniques, that are really hand-to-hand, natural and appropriate, sometimes beautiful, wonderful. In addition, it is also very rare that the emotional tendency embodied in Mr. Li's poetry is optimistic and accessible, delicate and gentle, without clichés, and rarely sad.
Because Mr. Li's poetic language is fresh and has a strong sense of the times, I borrow two poems by Yuan Shu of the Tang Dynasty as the title of this commentary: Mercy Qu straightens the language of the time, and does not focus on the source of the ancients.
Tianmu Lake Wetland (1)
The warm sun is sunny and the clouds are full of trees, and the water is open and the mirror reflects the pavilion.
All things come into a double shadow, and spring doubles in Jiangnan.
It's a quaint song. Teacher Li studied and created old-style poetry, starting with absolute sentences, and put in a lot of effort, and his achievements were also the highest. The reason why her poems are very creative is mainly reflected in the absolute sentences, and it is reflected in the transformation and combination of the absolute sentences. Let's take this song "Tianmu Lake Wetland (I)" as an example to explore. From the first sentence, the imagery has three adjectives "sun", "cloud" and "grass and trees", respectively titled with the adjectives "warm", "sunny" and "prosperous", dense and rich in warm colors, sunny in spring, lush vegetation, and love can also be seen in the scene. The second sentence continues, the previous sentence has been written from heaven to the ground, this sentence continues, then writes the ground, writes water, and the image goes from dense to thin, from surface to point, and from shallow to deep. The level is like a mirror, using a metaphor, because the water is like a mirror, so the pavilion on the shore of the lake is reflected in the water and is clearly visible. The use of a "open" word in the sentence, the realm is suddenly born, and it is seen that it is the initiative of "water", and this initiative actually writes the theme of spring praise and spring, and the beauty is quite playful. However, overall, the first two sentences, although fresh and lovely, are still not surprising. However, the first two sentences play a good role in the whole poem and momentum, everything is ready, surprise creation, is in the transition. "Walking all things into a double shadow, spring to Jiangnan double", flowing water and clouds, artistic conception and beauty are amazing, "spring to Jiangnan double", spring can be doubled, new! Strange! High! Wonderful! Beauty! Spring is beautiful, double again, how beautiful is this spring, how desirable, lingering and loved? And this wonderful sentence of the poet, logically, just closes the previous sentence, "Walking all things into two shadows", because the lake water is clear and flat as a mirror, so no matter what it is, what flies in the sky and walks on the ground, as long as it can be illuminated, it changes from one to two, one shape and one shadow, and everything becomes a pair. This turn, upward is connected, downward, is enlightened, and overall the turn is closely connected with the union. So it can be seen that this poem begins as a section and merges into a section. In the image of the poem, strict logic can be seen, and the sentences are sticky and intricate, which together form a wonderful poem.
This kind of creativity of Mr. Li's sentences, this novelty and wonderfulness, will be summarized again. Generally, the first two sentences are paving the way, setting up the position, creating, and surprising and new only in the turn. She seems to have formed habits, whimsy, always at the end, often as it is. Let's take a look at the following two songs:
Spring steps
The umbrella puts new flowers in the rain, and the wind lifts the clothes and feet are stained with moss.
The spring steps are stacked like piano keys, and they play the streamer again.
Midsummer village view
A color of green seedlings looks around, and chickens and dogs bark leisurely.
In the dusk of the long line of willows, the sound of skewers of frogs catches up.
"Spring Steps", the first two sentences begin, for one, spring rain falls, a winter untouched umbrella stretched out, called "new" opening, or umbrella shape like a flower, or splashing rain into a flower, in short, although there is rain, and the umbrella is like a flower, it can be seen that it is joy. Moreover, a little heavier, "the wind lifts the clothes and the feet are stained with moss", there is no sad displeasure, and the two sentences are a good foreshadowing and gaining momentum. There is rain, wind and mud, and the footsteps of spring are approaching. Turning into one, stunning appearance, "spring steps are stacked like piano keys, and the streamer is played again", "spring steps" are already metaphors, spring and steps, abstract into images, but it is still not surprising, strangely, on top of the metaphor and then metaphor, perhaps, holding an umbrella, stepping on what steps, maybe, spring day by day, like a step by step, always "step" is very appropriate. Layers of steps, steps of spring; Day by day, the steps of spring, and like the keys, it is really like seeing huge black and white keys standing in the wilderness of spring, "playing the streamer again", there are both keys, as a play, there are raindrops in front, the wind sound in the back, and the sound of the piano in natural spring. The front is laid and the back is closed; Gain momentum in the front, erupt in the back. Fresh and natural, with a handsome and detached taste. The same goes for "Midsummer Village View". But it's not the overall pattern, it's the same, it's a thousand poems, that's not it. The overall characteristics are similar, but the specific poetic context is varied, just like the poetic grammar, the grammar has not changed in ancient and modern times, but the specific poem can not be written for a thousand years. Like this turn, "In the dusk of the willow line, the sound of skewers of frogs catches up." "The willow is like a thread, and it actually fishes up the frog sound in strings, and the frog sound can be fished, how imaginative and poetic! And how vivid and appropriate, writing a midsummer country night with stillness and movement, color and sound, full of interest and vitality.
In the "Poems of the Mei Wan Pavilion", the most beautiful verse mentioned above, this creative transformation, is not one or two, but many, such as "The grain frog picks up the wind and breaks the blue glass." "The mood is a QR code, and the east wind is full of poetry." "The most pitiful tender shoots probe out, the state of cute and turning over the March spring", "Leisurely walking through whose wife, a burden of spring into the green light" and so on, can be seen almost everywhere, all over the place, which shows the richness of the works and the overall high level. This is the result of Mr. Li's hard study, careful observation, thinking and creative practice. Of course, this way of writing the absolute sentence can also be said to be ancient times, such as the Tang poem "Luoyang relatives and friends ask each other, a piece of ice heart in the jade pot", "I am worried about the bright moon, follow the wind until the night Langxi", "This song should only be in the sky, and there are a few times to hear it in the world", etc., this creation of Mr. Li is an innovation based on inheritance.
Let's take a look at the words in the "Mae Wan Court Poems". Mr. Li's words and achievements are also very high. Through the three poems "Bu Operator", we can appreciate the lyricist's skillful and diverse artistic techniques. "Mei Wan Pavilion Poems" contains 90 poems, including 20 "Bu Operator", maybe the author worked harder in "Bu Operator", but not other words have a lower style, not at all, readers have the right to speak since they go to appreciate it. Here is just an example of "Fortune Operator".
Bu Shuzi Hengshan listened to the piano
The wipe is a spring breeze, ticking the empty mountains and rain. The waterfall is flowing up, waving the clouds to come and go.
But the sound of the finger is clear, and the heart should be understood. At the end of the song, the moon is at the pine cliff.
Bu operator watch early exercise for young children
Tiptoeing shoots pointed, twisting and rippling. Swinging small fish swim freely, turning flowers to bloom.
Beckoning the wind, eyes shining. Wielding the seven colors of childhood light, fly above the clouds.
Bu operator Guanmen Tougou Taiping drum
The sound comes from the Great Tang Dynasty, and the rhyme is in harmony with the Beijing accent. In the midst of thunder, wake up Yunshan early.
The hammer rises and moves, and the shoulders shake the flowers. When the tide of the Spring River sounds, people laugh at the head of the tide.
The first one is written and praised by the piano. The first two sentences of the upper sentence, "erase" straight to the point, are written positively, extremely fast and appropriate, because a small order to write vocal performance, can not be written in ancient style like Bai Juyi's "Pipa Xing", can be long or short, the length is generous. But the two words are immediately followed by "is the spring breeze", as soon as it moves, there is a tune music, there is airflow, there is a feeling, "it is a spring breeze", which is both a metaphor and a synaesthesia, writing the beauty of the piano sound and the pleasure of feeling. "Hook down" closely follows "erasing" and "empty mountains and rain", and the technique is the same as "it is a spring breeze", which is both image and delicate touch. When the two sentences are combined, they are more dynamic and the image is richer and fuller. The next two sentences, "flying waterfall and flowing spring" are metaphors, all are music and piano sounds, the rhythm is urgent and slow, large and small, like the roar of the waterfall, like the rushing spring, in short, it is the feeling of the listener, and the skill is high. "Wave sleeves cloud comes and goes", another verb "waving sleeves" is playing, "clouds come and go" is a metaphor, saying that it is calm. Go one step deeper. There is a wonderful understanding of the listener (i.e. the author). "But the sound of the finger is clear, and the interest in the heart should be understood" The sound flow fingers, the sound of the song is beautiful, it is a layer; But to really understand, you have to appreciate it from the bottom of your heart. Hearing with the ear, knowing only its voice, and understanding the heart, is the truth. In the middle, it's fun. One voice, one heart, music is a medium, connecting the player and the appreciator, the music transmits, the heart connects, this is the wonderful song. In the last two sentences, write a scene when the song is played, the technique is like the ancient famous text, such as "the end of the song is gone, the river counts the maple blue", "stir up the chaos and worry endlessly, high autumn moon shines on the Great Wall", "do not feel the twilight mountains are blue, autumn clouds are dark" and so on. "The moon is at the pine cliff", ending with the scenery, a tranquility, when the soul is deeply intoxicated, a bright moon hangs on the pine cliff, what a good artistic conception! The whole word is fresh and elegant, with a unique high character: non-artist, no such song; Non-acquaintances, no such word.
Let's look at the second song, "Bu Operator, Watch Children's Morning Exercise", which is a very unique little order. The whole poem is fresh and lively, full of children's unique vitality. The bold artistic treatment gives the poem a unique charm. The four sentences are all meticulous descriptions of children's morning exercises, all four sentences are actions, are positive writing, and the four sentences are metaphors, all are visualized art and beautification. Moreover, each parable is vivid and expressive. Four consecutive actions, four metaphors, artistic non-appreciation boldness, effect, vivid image, leap on paper. Structurally, it is also unique. In general, the structure, content and form of the word are unified, that is, divided into two pieces, which is the form, but the content also follows the form, that is, one content in the upper piece, and one content in the next piece. Although the content of the upper and lower films is closely linked to form a song, and there can be transitional connections in the middle, but overall, the difference is obvious. This poem is a break with this tradition, in terms of content, the first two sentences of Xiayin still belong to Shangyin, that is, continue to write children's morning exercises, continue to describe, continue to portray, so that the image is fully full. The last two sentences conclude. There is a problem here, one content is to write the morning exercise itself, one content is to summarize and sublimate the morning exercise, the previous content has occupied six sentences, only two sentences remain to complete the second content. So, how to use two sentences and 12 words to complete the second content and achieve the desired effect? This really requires a lot of artistic skill. Let's look at these two sentences, "waving the seven colors of childhood light, flying above the clouds", the previous sentence summarizes the early exercise of young children, this is the seven colors of childhood, how beautiful! It also seems like a normal sentence, but the last sentence, it is completely different, "flying above the clouds", from reality to fiction, the brilliance of childhood flies on the clouds, full of imagination, not only praising the vitality of the morning exercise in front of children, but also looking forward to and foreshadowing the bright future of children. A fictional sentence, the space is huge, so it is enough to hold up a lot of specific content in front. That's art! Also competence. This artistic technique is the third unique feature of this word. These three uniqueness make this poem exude a stunning artistic charm.
The third song, "Bu Operator Guanmen Tougou Taiping Drum". The style of this poem is stylishly handsome, and it has a majestic and heroic momentum. The whole word is written about the scene of Mentougou Taiping Drum playing, which belongs to the natural cultural heritage, with a sound shape and magnificent momentum, which not only writes a sense of vast time and space, but also has a profound uplifting era. Shangyin, write sound. The first two sentences are a concise narrative. "The sound comes from the Great Tang Dynasty, and the rhyme is wonderful in the Beijing dialect", originally from the ancient prosperous era, and its sound rhyme belongs to the Beijing dialect. It's realistic, but it's proud. The last two sentences are like their sounds, with "running thunder and ups and downs" as a metaphor, and "awakening the clouds and mountains early" to write their effects. This in turn personifies Yunshan. Inferior, shaped. "The hammer rises and moves, the shoulders shake and the flowers fight", are all metaphors, the sentence "hammer up" is more exciting, the drum head is like the sun, indeed, the drumstick knocks down, into the momentum of soaring, really vivid. "Shoulder shaking flower fighting", the body is twisted when playing the taiping drum, and it is a group activity, so there is momentum and lineup. The beauty of this sentence is not that the shoulders are shaking like a flower, but that it is "fighting", and the formation and mental outlook are like in front of you. The last two sentences, "Hit the tide of the Spring River, people laugh at the head of the tide", write the overall feeling of the drum sound, the spring river is thousands of miles, the tide is boring, the last sentence is very brilliant, people stand at the head of the tide, the foothold is not the sound of the drum, but the image of the person at the head of the tide, in this way, the whole word writes the Taiping drum on the surface, and actually writes about people, on the surface it is to write the momentum of the Taiping drum playing, in fact, you can imagine the society represented by this kind of momentum, which is very artistic skill.
In short, Li Jing's poetry creation, from the artistic point of view, is extremely rich and subtle, skillful and natural, making people feel that her poetry, under her artistic construction, scene and love, reality and virtuality, object and me, image and abstraction, a poetic heart, these through, poetic language flow, poetry art axe without trace. The author once said that he did not deliberately use any techniques in his creation, but felt that he should write like this, and write how he wanted. This is true, and I myself feel that the artistic technique is a thing that is smoked and obtained, and learned is the bottom, so I will not say much.
The above two parts respectively use the jieji as an example to analyze the most creative highlights of the "Meiwan Pavilion Poetry", and use the three words "Bu Operator" in the lyrics to evaluate the artistic techniques of using freely and without traces. This is not to say that other poetic genres in the collection are not worth appreciating, not at all. Teacher Li Jing has been immersed in poetry for many years, learning both in all bodies, learning at the same time, and having both beauty, and the level of five-word quasi-sentences, five-word rhythm poems, seven-word rhythm poems, and even ancient styles is very high. Now let's talk about the thoughts and feelings embodied in Mr. Li's poetry. This point I think is another important reason why her poetry is successful, accurately expresses and even shapes herself, reaches a considerable level, and is loved by the majority of readers, and it is also worth learning, and the use cases here are not limited to any poetry genre.
The thoughts and feelings mentioned here are broad and include emotions, attitudes, values, etc. And read "Rain in the Road of Bright Village":
If you want to explore the peak of the sudden rain, the car is like a boat moving the sound of the river.
Taoyuan will not allow people to enter lightly, and only let them go.
The author and his party wanted to visit a scenic spot in Nanyue Hengshan, in Guangming Village, and soon after departure, they encountered heavy rain. These are the first two sentences, the narrative is only an explanation, but "want to explore the peak of wonder" and "sudden rain" artistically widen the gap between desire and reality, "the car is like a boat moving the sound of the river", and then carefully rendered, the idea of the plot is the same, that is, to prepare momentum, reverse momentum, in order to launch the last two sentences. "Taoyuan is not allowed to enter lightly, and only let go after washing the dust", the most wonderful two sentences are not only rich in artistic creativity, but also artistically express their own ideological understanding and realm. In general, when you go by pleasure, you encounter obstacles on the way, spoil the scenery, and return without happiness, you can't help but be frustrated and complain. In short, it is a foreign accusation and low mood. What is different about this poem is that it is a kind of introspective reflection and understanding that leads to enlightenment. This is thought, understanding, attitude, character and realm.
Words are the voice of the heart, and poetry is like people. Whoever is a person writes whatever poems and writes poetry, becomes whoever he is. Therefore, writing poetry is to express oneself, the more you write, the more you express, the more you write and the more you shape yourself into a person like poetry, so writing poetry is practice. "Taoyuan does not allow people to enter lightly, and only let them go", is it not the performance and result of practice to be able to ask oneself and look at problems with optimism in this way?
The so-called thoughts and feelings are people's feelings and reactions to things and experiences, things and experiences are often the same, it is objective and inevitable, but people are different, feelings and reactions are different, and the poems written are of course different. For example, life's troubles and setbacks, failure and pain, inevitable, everyone has experience and experience, look at Mr. Li's attitude and feelings:
Appeal Order
The streamer flickered Shen Dong. Looking back at the rain is hazy. Where is the vast loneliness, the fog is heavy.
How many things, find no trace, self-contained. Sit and watch the clouds rise, throw plum blossoms, and embrace the spring breeze.
In addition to the time indicated in the first sentence, the last three sentences all complain of inner suffering, the past is unbearable to look back, the sea of dust is lonely, and the road ahead is vast. This is the bitterness of life. But Xiayin, turning over and jumping from the pain of Shangyin, obviously, between Shangyin and Xiayin, is the sorting out of his thoughts, feelings and moods, and Xiayin presents the state after this precipitation. "How many things, find no trace, self-calm", the past is blown away with the wind, calmly faced, and moved towards a new life. The last three sentences, on the basis of the first three sentences are somewhat straightforward and summarized, using visual language, artistically expressing their optimistic attitude, "throwing plum blossoms, embracing the spring breeze", eight words, language art, thoughts and feelings, can be called the famous sentences of contemporary old-style poetry.
The poems in "Poems of Meiwan Pavilion" that embody the overall ideological and emotional characteristics of the poet's optimism and understanding, delicate and gentle can be described as everywhere. First of all, the overall style of concentrated poetry is fresh, and freshness generally has the characteristics of meticulous presentation of imagery, which leaks the inner gentle and joyful mood in the general artistic conception of landscape painting. That's the big part. The other part is expressed, the above two are typical examples, others such as, "The Visitor Has Not Met" "The owner has not seen and has no regrets, sometimes there are idle clouds to comfort the loneliness"; "Drinking Fire Order" wrote the moon season, "is floating zero, is Ye Qi, is the dew deep frost heavy, the same laughing red dust"; "Non Yin Early Spring" writes about plum blossoms, "I know plum blossom faces every year, why fear the wind and frost are full"; "Autumn Hair Loss, Morning Rise, Yongzhi and Answering Friends' Questions", "But Xie Qingsi resigned me, and there are not many troubles in three thousand" and so on.
Even as a female poet, writing about the most common and personal parting of love and lovesickness is particularly different. "Knowledge will drift away, and knowledge will be fruitless. One day, I look back at the shallow marks, remember the amorous me", a rational answer after a sensual touch, no complaints, no accusations, cherishing each other, leaving amorous memories. "The butterfly dance among the flowers is a dream, and the wind blows into dust. How many situations will occur after the pain of love? However, there is not a word about the process, the pain, but still frequently recalled, maybe, the memory is always good. "I remember that spring and plant lovesickness as one person. Shu Yu and light clouds met for the first time, and Qulan Lonely Moon was sad alone. Mu Lang's knees were blue and messy, wiping my cheeks with red tears. Sideburns add frost to what to fear, the world is rare to get white-headed relatives. "The most daring song to write lovesickness, although there is the loneliness of lovesickness, but more is the beauty and even madness of two loves, "red tears frequently", should be crying with joy. "There is a moon that gives clear light, and nothing is joyful. Or afraid that fools will not sleep, and see the moon as you. The fine chrysanthemum fragrance comes, and the flower shadow lamp leans forward. Half-dyed autumn shirt and half-dyed poetry, thin and people than "the simplest lovesickness, but also really lovesickness, for each other's consideration, with this confidence, this is happy lovesickness!" Therefore, "thin and compared to people", this "thin", does not mourn, even, there is no grudge, on the contrary, there are chrysanthemum flower shadows, and poetry. "Hand in hand with Jun across the lotus path, the wind sends coolness, the flute sends melodious, and the moonlight of Qiong Yao is broken. Life is rare to cherish good fortune, walk in pairs, sit in pairs, look at the pool together and add fragrance", straight write "walking also into pairs, sitting also into pairs" happiness. These are fresh and gentle, so that the most classical and beautiful love is written in the most contemporary and popular language, but in terms of emotional tendency, there is little sorrow and sorrow. And this emotional tendency is also an integral part of the thoughts and feelings that emerge from the entire collection of poems.
Mr. Li's poetry creation can reach such a high level and achieve such high artistic achievements, there are reasons of the times, but also its own reasons. We live in an era when traditional culture is moving towards a revival, and the revival of poetry seems to be a harbinger of cultural revival. Therefore, our era already has a better soil and atmosphere for the creation of old-style poetry, which enabled Mr. Li to come into contact with this exquisite art more than ten years ago and found that old-style poetry turned out to be the most suitable art form for himself. Since then, writing poetry has become Mr. Li's unswerving pursuit, participating in online forums, participating in offline training, reading relevant theoretical books, reading a large number of ancient and modern masters' works, and boldly and uninterruptedly insisting on creation, which is the final publication of today's "Mei Wan Pavilion Poems". Teacher Li is a typical example of learning poetry and creating success in middle age.
Chinese poetry is classical, and she comes from history, from artistic classics and beauty. This is the land under our feet, and without the dirt, there can be no such artistic crop as poetry to grow. However, poetry is also the old form, and it can have new content and language. I call history dirt and times sun, air and water. When we come to study and compose poetry today, we cannot do without the soil of history, but also need the sunshine, air and water of the times. And Mr. Li's poetry works are handled appropriately in this relationship - not only do not lose the classical art and beauty, but also have the freshness and spirit of the times. It is very likely, "mercy channel straight at the time, not the source of the ancients", the ancients also praised this.
On the 40th anniversary of the establishment of Nanyue Poetry and Painting Society, there are poetry works such as "Meiwange Poems" as a gift, which can comfort the deceased founders of the old timers: Chinese poetry will never die; Chinese poetry must be revived and is also being revived; "Meiwange Poetry" is a representative of the existing poetry level of Nanyue Poetry and Painting Society, and it is also a particularly beautiful flower among the countless poetry flowers of China's contemporary poetry revival! I am not a poetry critic, and I cannot cite scriptures to prove how good the Mae Wan Court Poems are, but as a reader, a lover, I can only talk about the little experience I have gained from repeated reading and tasting. But I hope that my words will play a role in introducing jade, and I hope that there will be more real poetry critics, and more readers who love poetry, to taste and appreciate!
Xiao Honghui
Xiao Honghui is a senior Chinese teacher and subject leader of Hengyun Yueyun Middle School in Hengshan, Hunan Province, and a director of Hengyang Poetry Society.
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Author: Tang Jianhong
Li Jing, poetry has a different talent, joyful chanting, although she is a little woman, but she has grandeur. Chanting poetry, heroic and personable, known as "Jing Gongzi".
Nanyue Hengshan literary circle is very small, I remember that it was Sister Jing introduced by Panruo, it was very strange, and I didn't remember the first meeting scene at all, because we didn't have a transition from strange to familiar, and we had a natural sense of acquaintance as soon as we met. Sister Jing chanted poetry, and there was a light emitted by her inner nature. Every time with Sister Jing, sitting and talking as if uncomfortable, I had to stand, lean into a half-meter diameter, and talk about a topic until I was happy before I started my feet. But often after saying one after another, this mountain looks at the height, the edge corresponds, climbs each other, and when it is at its fullest, it has not moved two steps.
Sister Jing has a good verbal expression, and she likes the text even more. The master of words is often also a master of the use of synaesthesia techniques, Jing Jie's poems are particularly prominent in this regard, abstract and figurative can be freely transformed by the communication of feelings, and are good at making the poems vivid and easy to understand, popular, and full of romantic peculiar imagination through figurative devices such as metaphor, anthropomorphism and exaggeration. In writing landscape poems, he also makes good use of white drawing, embellishing one or two verbs, quantity words or words with table colors, which has a sense of aesthetic picture and immersive space. The imagery is original, the surprise is bright, the picture is empty and flexible, so that the reader of the poem is unaware that it is full of poetry, just like a flower in a shirt, the shadow falls in the pool, it is really "the autumn breeze is fragrant and far away, half dyed poetry and half dyed clothes".
You see, she writes about the movement and momentum of fog: fog is like a divine beast Fushan root, and everything comes and swallows it in one gulp. Seeing the sunset on the way to writing: arrange the twilight field as a court, the old tree bows and wants to rise, the wind whistle rises at the foot of the cloud, and the mountain gate breaks straight into the sky. Comparing the static sunset to a fierce dynamic goal, a wind "whistle", a "broken" word, the imaginary image is strange and bold, it is really amazing. Write a thin cloud with feelings: a wisp that does not follow the wind, idly lying at the bottom of the peak, occasionally passing through the pine stones, to sit together. Write the amorousness of flowers: the wind stains the dew branches tremble, and the wisps of fragrance are like poetry. What a "so" word, I see pity! Write moss low-key but cold arrogance: do not envy the crowd of fangdou, know the roots shallow and low platform, but also add spring color three points of green, why bother the east wind fine tailoring. Writing the color of spring can be quantified: everything comes into a double shadow, and spring doubles in Jiangnan. It can be concrete: the breeze is in the fence, and the birds are shaken three or two branches. Write friendship, the cloud can be made into a note: this goes to the home mountain clouds, waiting for Jun to extract as a poem. Write that the spring rain is sprinkled on all things: the spring steps are stacked like piano keys, and the streamers are played again. This poem "Spring Steps" won the first prize in the final sentence category of the 4th "Poetry China" competition because of its unique imagery, and was included in the selection of "Poetry Magazine". Write valley echoes: empty forest birds chirping, a string of laughter chasing, I call the name of the king, the mountain answers countless times. All the natural things in the pen have been drawn up as people or things, with arrogance, affection, great weather, and small nature, and many images are seen for the first time.
Sister Jing is like a blue flame, pure and ethereal, warm but cold, loving the warmth of the world, the dust on her is like water on a lotus leaf, at this time, she has long let go of the burden, the wind in her armpits, the light boat has passed through ten thousand mountains.
For example, in response to others saying that her WeChat avatar has changed again: the avatar changes frequently, the mood is new, Nanshan is a confidant, and he gave me a white cloud body. Writing about the changes in your mental state with the changes of white clouds is really more and more comfortable. Write about the vegetable farmer who entered the mirror in the morning light: who idly walked by, and a burden of spring light entered the green light. Write about the customs of the hometown, regardless of the times: a group of hemp ducks have no intentions, swinging over the low wall. Write about hometown love: I don't see the shadow of leaning on the door, and a sadness is like a falling flower. Even listening to a chicken call and drinking tea is: the wind is slow, and the rooster is chirping outside the fence. A clear tea for half a day, meet without asking for surname and first name, sit and watch Bai Yunsheng. She was standing in the bow of the boat, her clothes were upright, and she did not forget to sing a sentence when she stood facing the wind: The wind is fast, send me Shuiyun Township, the people stand on the bow of the boat and the waves roll snow, the peaks fly under the eyes are blue and cool, and the white birds break the green sky. It is really a painting in poetry, reflecting the aesthetic pursuit of the integration of poetry and painting in traditional Chinese literati painting. Write about the rain in the road when I went to Guangming Village for sightseeing: I want to explore the peak of Qifeng and the sudden rain falls, the car is like a boat moving the sound of the river, Taoyuan is not allowed to enter lightly, and only let it go after washing the dust. These last two sentences have an ideal, unexpected finishing touch, and the Zen is endless.
There is such a poetic eye and poetic heart, it is really "also to the vulgar dust, but also in line with the ghostly people, to capture the time and shade of fine tailoring, people in the spring breeze." "I heard that Sister Jing's poetry selection for nearly ten years was collected into "Meiwan Pavilion Poems", ready to be published, congratulations to Sister Jing, the poetry collection is actually only the added value of her poetic life, not the destination, first there is poetic life, then there is life poetry, this is the non-fulfillment of life, the life of life. As Jing Jie explained the word Mei, Mei is the place where water and grass meet, which is close to the water and the shore, and it is like the shore of the water, and it is not the water or the shore. Water is a dream, the shore is reality, the water is a mysterious distance, the shore is a touchable eye, Mei, is the most touching artistic conception in the eyes of Chinese literati for thousands of years.
Every time I see Jingjie's poem, I will read it carefully and forward it involuntarily, I know that there must be something I want to read, and when I read it, I will have the desire to copy and share. We are close spiritual friends, and we don't need to stay together often, we don't need to maintain formally, and we don't even need to ask too much about each other's personal affairs. Because "meet without asking for surname and name, sit and watch Bai Yunsheng", and because in the text, even if we don't confess, we always have the satisfaction of knowing each other and reuniting.
Tang Jianhong
Tang Jianhong, female, pen name Yibi My Heart, a native of Hengshan, Nanyue, has a wide range of hobbies, and is currently the chairman of the Hengshan County Writers Association.
Li Jingjie chose the sentence
It rained in the Bright Village Road
If you want to explore the peak of the sudden rain, the car is like a boat moving the sound of the river.
Taoyuan will not allow people to enter lightly, and only let them go.
Tianmu Lake Wetland (2 songs)
One
The warm sun is sunny and the clouds are full of trees, and the water is open and the mirror reflects the pavilion.
All things come into a double shadow, and spring doubles in Jiangnan.
Two
The green dragon is close to the water to make the posture, and the pavilion is jagged and willow spitting.
A few frogs chirped and picked up, and the sound shattered the blue glass.
The old woman sells vegetables
Ye Cui pepper red spring color, every time people ask the price.
The money was transferred to WeChat, and there was still no article in the pocket.
Guiyang returns to Xiang Road
Hearing that steaming Xiang is not far away, a curtain of smoke and rain is shining.
The wind also has a dialect flavor, and old songs are sung high and low outside the window.
Worship the god of flowers at the Flower Dynasty Festival
Huan Pei sang in the air, and the light shirt was delicate.
The spring breeze is like learning to walk in waves, and the flowers are blowing in the path.
Portrait of Mr. Yang Lu Xun
The wild grass is scattered in autumn, and the eyes are like a torch shining on Shenzhou.
Why sitting in the spring breeze today, he is still frowning.
The tomb of Mr. Lu Xun
Li Zheng Shenzhou shouted frequently, and bowed his eyebrows to the people.
In front of the tomb, I was ashamed of myself, and I was also a person who wrote about it.
Qiu Si
The dewy moss steps into the night cool, and the frog sound intermittently passes through the lotus pond.
A lonely moon is like a poke, and it prints a few lines of sorrow.
Touching
The smoke is misty and the grass is oblique, and a few pestles are on credit.
The desert autumn yin people sit alone, and there are lotus flowers in the silt.
Five Finger Peak
One palm supports the division of heaven and earth, and the stars rub the clouds in the evening.
The giant spirit's divine power is high, and it does not take half a text from the world.
Spring
The wine is fragrant and warm, and the face is full of spring.
The mood makes a QR code, and the east wind is full of poetry.
Wing Li Blossom
Pear Whirlpool smiled shallowly to welcome spring, and the long moon and the cloud did not look real.
In the warm breeze drunkenness, add a piece of snow spirit.
See plum blossoms in the Martyrs' Shrine
Looking at the morning smoke of Fangshutuo, 100,000 clouds reflect the blue sky.
Words to people in the wind: Qingxiang first you go to the temple.
Xuanyuan saw the red plum blooming
Yan Wei chirped Liu Wei Wei, where Dongjun is difficult to guess.
A bay of cold water shines on the plum shadow, and the spring light is embraced early.
Wing moss
Do not envy the crowd and fight brightly, and know that the roots are shallow and low.
Also add spring color three points of green, why bother to cut it finely.
See the bamboo branches inside the wall coming out of the wall
The claustrophobic shadow of the high wall is drowsy, and who relieves the night in the middle of the night.
Take advantage of the oblique wind to break through, adding to the unrest of the world.
Wangjiang Pavilion
Looking at Po and then looking at the river, a silver light shone into the sun.
I opened the scissors wide-angle and cut his saliva back.
Summer view
In the old weather, a bean shed supports the emerald drapery.
The red umbrella and white skirt are independent, and the butterflies fly around the shoulders.
Hengshan smoke
Natural ink eyes are born, how many qifeng clouds are painted.
When hidden, there are thousands of wisps of light, so that people can identify the name of the mountain.
Strange stone freehand
Invite apes to enjoy career, pillow the stream against wildflowers.
The old monk sat down and cut the clouds to make a robe.
The chrysanthemums at home are still fragrant after the light snow
The trail of singing geese rested at this time, and the clear air still circled around the small building.
Even if the wind and frost are cold to the bone, hold on until the plum fragrance is whiteheaded.
Pingqiao Stone Dam
Looking down at the mirror lake, it was shocking to rush to thousands of mountains.
A few in the world are like kings, flying low and flat in high places.
Yanglin Ancient Dutou
One water evenly divided between the two banks of autumn, the red reed white Manting Prefecture.
Do not hear the light waves, only see the idle clouds transition head.
Dragon Boat has a feeling
The banks of the Miluo River are full of people, and the thousands of stacks of poetry are high in waves.
Qu Zi had a spirit that should be too rested, and several people recited in their hearts.
Inscribed Black Shatan Waterfall
The bottom of the stream is surging with cold jade, and it is difficult to walk in the depths of the stream.
Leap into a marvel, teach the world to look up.
Farewell
The wind whistles one by one, and the clouds are far away.
Aoyama was relieved and let go of the trip a little more.
Go home on National Day
Before leaving, the parents wet their eyes, and the special garden vegetables were harvested.
If you want to send a few times without moving, it turns out that overloading is nostalgia.
Nanyue picks tea
The snow melts and sprouts are new, and no one can be heard when laughing.
Grabbed a few baskets of clouds, and Nanshan boiled a pot of spring.
To the mountains in early summer
Walking slowly in the mountains in a slightly wet clothes, neem flowers flying snow is just in time.
The breeze is in the shadows, and the birds are swayed three or two times.
Spring night balcony sit
The silver glow on the ground opens the plain note, and the shadows of the flowers are sleepless.
No one sent it when it was written in the heart, but it was cold to the fingertips.
Spring steps
The umbrella puts new flowers in the rain, and the wind lifts the clothes and feet are stained with moss.
The spring steps are stacked like piano keys, and they play the streamer again.
Xin Ugly Chun Visits Jinghengju (2 songs)
One
Thousands of times out of Yamakuma, a few points of blue and blue.
Spring light should be in the place of the king, so Qingxi was sent to send the letter.
Two
Hearing that spring in the mountains is complicated, he leisurely visited the flower source.
Yun Shen Bamboo Secret did not need to ask, and the fragrance led all the way to the door.
Wild cherry blossoms under the smell of shakuhachi
Qingxi smoke trees are far away from dust, and the sound of flowers and birds comes with guests.
Who holds the shakuhachi wind neutrally, blows acacia all over the tree.
Title: Jade Hairpin Spring
Whoever plucks the strings should be a hidden elf.
As soon as the jade hairpin fell from the clouds, it stranded Wu Shan's ten thousand strands of blue.
See fallen leaves in spring
The slightly cool dawn shone through the window frame, and the leaves were full of leaves.
It should be the night after the storm, and the old branches let the young branches green first.
Occasionally
In the past, farmland is now planted, and the frost and snow on the shoulders are not worried.
Worry is the most begging road, running for days and days?
Listen to my mother and aunt on the phone at night
Having said that the recent situation said that as a child, the three months changed to the west.
Secretly happy to be 80 years old, his voice is not lower than last year.
Lookout at Lake Ridge in the morning
The water spring light produces light smoke, and the ghost bird is two or three spinning from afar.
Qingshan had just been lifted by the clouds, and he entered the wave heart to learn to plant lotuses.
Minamiyama Bamboo Sea sees new bamboo shoots
Cuiying Juanjuan bird speaks frequently, and every breath is fresh.
The most pitiful tender shoots poked out, and the state turned over March spring.
Cloud Pavilion Return
The drizzle is drizzling, and the birdsong and bamboo path are stunned.
Baiyun should be a Jun family item, and let it be collected by Ruxin.
Gossip
The summer moon is suitable for lattice windows, and the flowers invite bamboo to hide and seek.
Sneak in the shadow lying book case, steal the smell of tea in the cup.
Night rain
The vertical wind and rain clasped the door, and the heart was warmed under the lamp.
Spend 100,000 in the mountains, and spend my soul with me tonight.
Eyebrow nevi
The spring breeze in March is soft and crispy, and you can look at the double frost side by side.
The red beans in the past life are moles in this life, and they are engraved in the eyebrows.
Bailu saw ginger sprouted
A branch in the corner of the exposed wall, clear posture like a standing water.
Pity her for not knowing the cold smell of heat, even if Qingqing can be for a while.
okra
The flowers bloom and the summer is fresh, and the branches are full of blue smoke.
Who knows the frost, wind and rain, and the sharp finger dares to face the sky.
Xin Ugly visited Mei the day before the winter solstice, and lost his mobile phone
Three years of snuggling and suddenly lost the king, searching for only clouds of smoke.
Could it be that the fairy invited to go and contact Meihua on duty early.
What you see in early summer
The durian flowers on the branches are causing fire, and the fruits are hidden first.
A flock of pockmarked ducks swayed over the low wall.
What I saw when I returned home
The rain moisturizes the new mud and adds tenderness and coolness, leaving the weeds around the pond.
The durian flowers are old at the beginning of the spout, and the farmland is still deserted in April.
Editor: Hu Rui