The argumentative essay of the college entrance examination, to put it bluntly, is the policy of the scientific examination, and in the current version, it is a simple argument, which is the writing of official documents and the writing of political papers. On the basis of correct and clear views, speak of examples, reasoning, famous quotes, quotes from scriptures, show your knowledge level higher than other students, and score high scores, you are the winner. Literary and artistic youth said: Poetry is a shining pearl on the laurel crown of the goddess of literature, unfortunately, the college entrance examination essay is not to write poetry. You can recite, appreciate, study, and quote poems, but you won't be allowed to write them!
why?
This attitude of college entrance examination composition is very obvious and straightforward, that is, the examination room writing ≠ literary creation. Literary creation needs opportunities and inspiration, "Yu Xin articles are older and more successful, Ling Yunjian's pen is longitudinal"; examination hall writing needs rules and practice, "yin an a word, cut off a number of stems and whiskers" is roughly similar.
Argumentative essays in the examination room mainly master two skills, you can get high scores during the exam, and you can also dance and ink in normal times. These two techniques are not complicated: reasoning is speculative, arguments are related. Reasoning and speculation is the non-direct "point of view + material = argument", and there must be a process of analysis here; the argument association is that the selected material in the text must be typical of the use case and well cited (the final embodiment of the consistency of the title).
Test-taking essay high scores, must follow this path.
The following is the opening of two "learn to learn" examination room texts to see the implementation of speculation and association.
Read the material below and compose as required.
Learning to learn is one of the core qualities that middle school students must have, how do you think about "learning" or "learning to learn", please write an argumentative essay of no less than 700 words to explain your point of view.
Requirements, clear points of view, substantial arguments, reasonable arguments.
Example 1
On the Way of Learning (in parentheses for the teacher's annotation)
Learning is an eternal topic that has lasted for thousands of years, from "Persuasion" to "Teacher's Sayings", from ancient times to the present dynasty, the discussion of learning has always been continuous. Ouyang Xiu said: "Standing up to the establishment of learning is the first. Mao Zedong once said: "The situation is constantly changing, and if you want to adapt your thinking to the new situation, you must study." "This shows the value of learning. Therefore, we should master the way of learning and harvest growth from learning.
The way to learn is to "learn what?" With whom to learn? How to learn? (Well said, whipped in)
In today's age when information is pervasive throughout life, selective learning is the only way to grow. In the face of the difficult problem of learning what to learn, we must first practice our wisdom and go to the false and the true. In the overwhelming amount of information, we should distinguish between right and wrong, and we should not learn fallacies. During the COVID-19 epidemic, people who blindly learned the "soil method" of anti-virus on the Internet were not only ineffective, but even harmful. It can be seen that a pair of eyes is important when learning. Second, learning varies from person to person, and we should not blindly follow the trend. The story of Dong Shi Xiao is well known, and the ugly woman blindly imitates Xi Shi's delicate state and is disliked by the world. Dong Shi is not good-looking, but he can win with a good heart, blindly following others without examining himself, which is counterproductive. Learning, you must combine your own reality, choose the right nutrients to absorb, in order to achieve a towering tree (there is analysis, good).
Every plant and tree in life, every little bit, has something to learn. And the question of who learned, Confucius had given the answer a thousand years ago. "Threesomes, there will be my teacher." And now, not only three people, but three hundred and three thousand or even three billion people, all have shining places, are our teachers. Take out the attitude of not being ashamed to ask, find the shining points on each person and humbly ask for advice, in order to improve yourself. Of course, learning from others is not simply imitation, handan toddlers not only do not progress, but lose themselves (negative argument, there is strength). And Mr. Lu Xun's advocacy of "taking" and taking its essence to refine it for oneself is truly effective learning.
Learning is expensive in persistence, the so-called learning of the sea is endless, and the determination to persevere in how to learn is inevitable. Sun Jingsu Qin hanging beam thorn stock; Helen Keller is disabled and does not forget to study; Song Lian reads "handwritten notes, counting the days to return", and they all eventually become famous artists (typical cases, closely related). Therefore, learning is important in perseverance, and with the strength not to give up and not accept defeat, we can get the joy of learning and achieving success. Learning should accompany a lifetime, consistently, as the Sixteenth National Congress pointed out that lifelong learning should be. Only by not stopping the pace of learning can we keep up with the wheel of the times.
The way of learning is not only suitable for individuals, but also for society and the country. In the current new era, it is even more necessary for all mankind to join hands, learn from each other, forge ahead together, and move towards a better tomorrow.
Comment: This text is both literary and beautiful, reasonable and logical. In terms of argument and case correlation, it can be remarkable. Proper in a category.
Example Bunji
Learn what I see
Learning refers to the process of acquiring knowledge and skills through reading, listening, thinking, researching, practicing and other ways. Learning as a way to obtain knowledge and exchange emotions has become an indispensable and important content in people's daily lives, especially in the twenty-first century, this era of knowledge economy, independent learning (why jump to "independent learning", small hehe) has been people continue to meet their own needs, enrich the original knowledge structure, obtain valuable information, and ultimately succeed in the magic weapon.
Today's social frenzy of pursuing rapid development binds the happiness of young people to the success formula jointly framed by morality and public opinion, and the immersion in learning will make us understand that young people in the new era should use the enterprising concept of happiness to cross the shackles of this paradigm, break through the shackles to pursue what they love in their hearts, and live a truly pluralistic world (language is quite tense, reflecting the solid accumulation of small authors and the ability to control language). It is precisely because of learning the merits of our predecessors that we can constantly enrich our cognition, better and faster face the tests of the times and the world, broaden the boundaries of value judgments for the world, and give everyone the opportunity to take the road wider and wider. As Chinese teenagers, we naturally shoulder the responsibility of the home country for the creative expression and innovative development of excellent traditional culture and national spirit, and we should pass on the torch of "reading for the rise of China" (this section is slightly blunt).
It is true that learning attitudes play a decisive role in the learning process, but the correct performance of learning methods makes learning more effective with less. First of all, we must think independently, step out of the comfort zone, and observe and feel with our own eyes. Second, develop a targeted learning plan to correct lazy habits. In addition, we need to learn to give a lesson about knowledge (the argument here is very important, it can be absent). Memory is not learning, information is not knowledge, personal exploration and discovery will bring true knowledge, thereby improving their own cultivation and ability to deal with things (good speculation, analysis).
I have been with me for a long time, and I would rather be me. The meaning of choosing a distant place lies in the rush of wind and rain. Learn to learn, learn to be yourself, learn to reconcile with the world, learn to move forward. In the most important years, let go of the past, walk out of the corner where I linger, to the new and hot years, take advantage of the footsteps that have not yet stumbled, with the Tang, Song, Yuan, Ming, and Qing dynasties that have not withered for a thousand years, Ling Ran strides away. Because only on the road can we get rid of attachment, get rid of yesterday's limitations and insecurity, let all the pain become medals worn on the shoulders, and the guardians of this land I love deeply under the illumination of the west wind every morning and night. (The ending is quite literary, but it is still not compatible with careful consideration.) It can be arranged in such a way that learning – becoming yourself – moving forward – and reconciling with the world is what learning is all about. ）
Comment: From this article, it can be seen that the small author has a foundation, a train of thought, a vision, and is absolutely talented. However, the context is slightly scattered, the material is not typical enough, there is no strong material association argument, unfortunately! If you slightly modify and upgrade, it must be good text!