Five Laws • Rhymes with Cold Fragrance
(Pingshui / Zeyang Drunken Body)
【Star Spirit Dream】
First, the invasion of rhyme:
West [line] < mountain >{road} block,
Late {mist} (turn) [low] deep.
Total {sigh}< root> [base] shallow,
Finally [off] < water > {wave} deep.
Wind [dust] < seal > {tired} pen,
Rain {dew}< lock > [Arashi] qin.
And {to}< in the lonely > [village],
Steal [sleep] < relieve > {painful} heart.
Second, the true rhyme:
East [fence] < knows > {sick} body,
Ya [qi} < has > [stained] dust.
And {send}< high > [mountain] night,
Place [成] < small > {road} spring.
Heaven [ya] < many > {abandoned} friends,
The sea {upper}< less > [return] people.
Hi {in}< he > [township] warmth,
Heartfelt [love] < also > {is} pro.
【Star Spirit Explanation】:
In flat water rhyme, the encroaching rhyme should be used independently, and it should not be borrowed from the three rhymes of truth, smell and yuan.
I want to travel west but can't succeed, Wang Weishi said, "I don't need to use it, don't say that I know the sound", sighing that I am not a poetic Buddha! Only by using the method of stealing sleep, put the pen on hold for three days, and relieve the pain in my heart.
There is still an attachment in life that will not let go! Crying, laughing, scolding the world for not understanding poetry, yin and yang only in the garbage, showing off the ugliness of ignorance......... But the Si people are not, they still follow the ups and downs of the star spirit! At this time, I thought: When Cao Xueqin died, his dream of the Red Chamber was compiled by Hong Yan's confidant!
2023.4.28.
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