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I wrote an opening, about 1200 words, everyone help me see, can I write a novel at this level? "Yikes! With a loud noise, Zhou Yan was knocked out by a red car

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I wrote an opening, about 1200 words, everyone help me see, can I write a novel at this level?

"Yikes! ”

With a loud noise, Zhou Yan was hit by a red car and flew out more than ten meters. Lying motionless in the middle of the road.

I don't know how long later, Zhou Yan was confused and heard a noisy sound coming from her ears, there was the siren of an ambulance, there was a running sound, and there was a sound of talking! 

A young nurse was kneeling on the ground doing her cardiac resuscitation. After a moment, the nurse gently opened her eyelids, shook her head, and said, "There is no help, the pupils are dilated, and the heartbeat is about to stop." ”

Zhou Yan felt her heartbeat slower and slower, and the pain in her whole body slowly disappeared, replaced by a fluttering feeling, as if the soul was about to leave her body.

Suddenly, the little nurse saw Zhou Yan's mouth open, and the little nurse quickly put her ear close to Zhou Yan's mouth and asked, "What are you going to say, I listen!"

Zhou Yan used up the last bit of strength, barely squirmed his lips, and said, "I think... I can also... Rescue again..."

After speaking, I tilted my head and stopped breathing!

In the 223rd year of the Bactrian calendar, a loud baby cry broke through the night sky in the Marshal's Palace of Kyoto!

Today is the day when Han Ping'er, the wife of Liu Changming, the Grand Marshal of the Terracotta Army of the Great Xia Kingdom, gave birth.

Liu Changming and Han Ping'er have been related for many years, Han Ping'er has never been pregnant with a child, originally thought that there was no hope in this life, that zhi Laotian suddenly tired of care, under the unremitting efforts of the husband and wife, finally conceived.

"Congratulations to the old man, he xi old man, the lady has given birth to a thousand gold, the mother and daughter are safe!" The stable woman ran out of the room with a happy face, and said while saluting.

Liu Changming couldn't hide his excitement and walked quickly into the room!

Picking up her daughter who was still crying and coming to Han Ping'er's bedside, Liu Changming grabbed Han Ping'er's hand and said with pity on her face: "Madam, you have worked hard!" ”

Han Ping'er's pale and tired face was full of joy. He looked at her husband with affection and asked in a slightly hoarse voice, "Changming, will you be disappointed if you have a daughter?" ”

Liu Yiming couldn't help but be stunned, and then laughed!

"Why did Madame say this, the girlfriend is also the flesh of my heart, the pain can't hurt it, how can I be disappointed, and if the lady likes her son, then we will work hard in the future!" After saying that, Liu Changming looked at Han Ping'er with love on his face.

Han Ping'er glanced at Liu Changming, and a red halo appeared on her pale face!

Zhou Yan thought that she was dead, but she suddenly woke up again, and as soon as she opened her eyes, she saw the couple flirting in front of her and sprinkling dog food. What made Zhou Yan even more depressed was that she found herself turning into a baby and wanted to open her mouth to speak, but as soon as she opened her mouth, it turned into a wah-wah-wah cry.

Liu Changming hugged his daughter and shook while kissing the little guy's face.

In her previous life, Zhou Yan was just a freshman student, who had experienced this.

I can't help but scream in my heart, old guy, don't kiss me, make me salivate, it's so disgusting!

Liu Changming looked at the little guy with a loving face and found that the little guy was staring at himself with small eyes! Can't help but laugh!

Good daughter, your name is Liu Mingyue, this is what your grandmother gave you, do you like it?

Don't like it to be useful? Liu Mingyue was speechless.

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In the following days, liufu held a large banquet with lights and colors, celebrating the joy of thousands of gold. The Manchu Dynasty's civil and military colleagues came to celebrate the joy one after another, and the whole Liu Mansion was immersed in joy!

At this time, Liu Mingyue was not happy, the sudden car accident, inexplicably crossed! And it crossed over to this little one. I don't know what kind of place this is, and I don't know what kind of family I am in! Thinking about her parents on the other side of the distant time and space, how sad and painful her relatives will be at this moment because of her death, thinking of this, Liu Mingyue can't help but cry sadly, wow, wow!

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