Text/Liu Bangmin
Recently, I have admired several of Mr. Fukuho's poems and read these short, pithy, fresh and bright poems, and I am very happy. I feel that whether it is the choice of theme, the expression of content, or the expression of art, his poems are full of interest in life. The poems are full of passion, the imagery is soft, the artistic conception is profound, and it gives people reverie. Although this has been tempered by the years, it is more of a humanistic feeling in the author's heart and a sense of life and society. In the following, the author will analyze the respective characteristics of several of Mr. Fukuho's poems for the benefit of the reader.
I. "Why can you make me shed tears?"
The English poet Wordsworth said: "Poetry is a natural outpouring of strong emotions, which arise from emotions accumulated in tranquility." ”
A poem is the unfolding of the poet's life course in an instant.
In the poem "I want to give you a home", the poet evokes the image "you" through self-questioning and self-answering, evoking the image "I" and "I" can't worry about myself, showing my thoughts and feelings of deciding "I want to give you a home". At the beginning of the poem, the poet evokes our emotions:
"The thousand-year-old wind and sand can't blow into my eyes / Why can you let me shed tears"
We don't know what kind of life journey the "you" in the author's poem has experienced, but through the poet's tone, we know that "you" are currently encountering "discomfort" in emotions and life, otherwise, why would the author "let me shed tears"? Because "the thousand-year-old wind and sand can't blow into my eyes" There is no difficulty that can make the poet "yield", but only the tenderness of "you", your life caprice, your waddling along the road, and your love for life, and each other's sincere friendship, these make the poet shed tears for it.
"The years are a merciless melting pot / Nor have they melted your heart / Time is a sharp sword / Nor has it cut the worry left in your heart / Lovers will always be hurt by the heartless people, all your worries for whom, no need to reply", these verses, can really be described as "the flame of passion after communicating with thoughts, like a lightning bolt, showing the depths of thoughts, shaking our whole hearts." ”
Indeed, with the natural flow of the poet's emotions, we are also deeply immersed in the waves of emotions, and we seem to see that a concise and sound picture of the poet's emotional refinement is presented to us.
"For your innocence / Through the sun through the moon, you know / I will give you a warm home"
Just a few heartfelt promises, let us see the sincerity and friendliness of the poet. The reason why "I Want to Give You a Home" can move the actioners and infect people's hearts is that the poet captures the visual attention of the reader's heart: full of love, full of passion, full of humanistic spirit!
The poet's language comes from the everyday language, which is the highest degree of refinement and reinforcement of the daily language; the poet's language expresses the emotional world. Emotion is the life of poetry.
"I Want to Give You a Home" is full of passion and passion, thus infecting the reader.
"Blessing is also a way of love"
Imagination is the mental process of processing and transforming stored appearances in people's minds to form a new image.
The poem "Love-Hate Love" is a poem in which the poet blooms his imagination.
Imagination is the wings of poetry. The wings of this pair of wings are associations and fantasies.
Association is generally due to someone or something caused by the relevant thinking, people often say "from this and that", "from the surface and inside", "from one to three" is the embodiment of associative thinking.
"I hate that you can't say why / In the vast sea of people I am looking for distance from each other / I hate that you can't say why / The span of time makes us look at each other / But never thought of giving up...
I love you as a gift from God / Coming together from different worlds / I love you is a gift from God / Although not having / Blessing is also a way of loving"
Here, the poet wants to promote the first, "I hate you for not being able to say why", what is the reason? Deliberately not to show, let people imagine. "In the vast sea of people I am looking for the distance between each other" What distance? Deliberately go around in circles to make people reverie.
And when we gradually expand our associations, imaginations, and re-creations from point to point, according to the image, the poet continues to chant: "I love you as a gift from God / Although I can't have it / Blessing is also a way of love" The heart is clear and makes people feel infinitely.
The short poem "Untitled" is also a dazzling, but soon heart-warming poem intertwined with associations and fantasies: "Your shyness is gentle as water / Your elegance is as beautiful as a dream / Your ladylike tranquility / Softness really makes people sway in dreams... The poet likens "shyness" to "water" and abstracts it into figurative. The water is so idyllic, gentle, clever and appropriate; "elegance" is likened to "dream", of course, this is not an ordinary dream, but a spiritual pleasure, and naturally it is matched with beauty. This poem writes another layer of beauty, a simple and feminine landscape painting that comes into view: "ladylike tranquility" and "swaying in dreams". The creation of the beautiful artistic conception of the poem "Untitled" is woven through the knitting of "association".
III. "May My Delusions and Admiration Be Accompanied by Loneliness and Sorrow"
A good modern poem should be the beauty of music, painting, and architecture that appear everywhere in the poem.
Reading Mr. Fu bao's poems gives people the opportunity to watch a painting with external and beautiful connotations in the flow of emotions.
Please see the poem "Wrong Love - Dedicated to a Girl with a Red Face"
Poetry Wrong Love - Dedicated to a girl with a red face, the flow of the poet's emotions, under the arrangement of the inner structure of the poem, slowly and ups and downs moving forward. The poet starts from the virtual, captures the image, and borrows the object to carry the emotion——
"My love / is not trying to keep you / inseparable / hinder your development,
My love / not trying to bind your wings / hindering you from flying in the blue sky,
My love / not to stop you from going into the sea / to cut through the thorns in the great waves,
My love / is to help you overcome all difficulties / reach the other side of the ideal as soon as possible"
Four consecutive comparative sentences, in one go, let people feel the poet's agitated "love feelings", and the beauty of music is completed in the reader's appreciation;
"My fault, only those who understand me will know,
My fault, only those who have a relationship can know,
My fault, only time can prove everything about me,
My fault, only those who stand on the other side will applaud my mistake..."
Here, the rhythm of the music has changed the rhythm, and self-examination and self-blame are also moaning back and forth in the low back and forth of the music, which is unbearable;
"Wrong love, my wrong love, although there is a time distance, that is not the problem,
Wrong love, my wrong love, I am not afraid of my delusions, my admiration, becomes lonely and sad, I wish my delusions and admirations accompanied by loneliness and sorrow, flying in a small boat to where I want to go..."
It was a series of introspections again, the rhythm was noticeably accelerated, and the mood of the poem was solidified in the music of this chant. There is no right or wrong in love itself, it is only the environment and the inopportune time that is wrong, because: "Only those who stand on the other side will applaud my mistakes..."
"Wrong Love - Dedicated to a Girl with a Red Face", carefully read, the three-story exquisite building built by the poet's heart is presented in our vision: "My love - my fault - I wish my illusion and admiration accompanied by loneliness and sadness, driving a leaf boat to the place to be..." Like the wind drifting through the strings, it instantly shocked people's hearts.
The poem "Coffee House" is written about what people see and think while drinking coffee with friends, full of fun and wisdom.
"In a corner of Starbucks / expecting your arrival / The bitter / Sweet smell that emanates from the whole house / Almost makes me forget myself / In a nervous mind / As if smelling a fragrant and fresh breath / A hint of Lankou brand perfume smells in the coffee house / Inadvertently / The coffee cup you held up / Walked into my world / Left me full of memories / Inadvertently / The coffee you left me / Let the taste swirl in mid-air, holding the love of my dreams and reminiscing in taste,......
This is a cottage of love constructed by the poet's heart: a quiet humanistic landscape painting, two collisions full of memories and expectations. "The bitterness that emanates from the whole house" is the coffee that rises;
"In a nervous mind
Smell a fragrant and fresh breath,
That's your coming;
The coffee cup you hold up
Walked into my world."
A literal building exudes a fragrant beauty. Our aesthetics, along the poet's narrative, in the world of emotions, experience the flow of the poet's emotions at this moment.
Any beautiful poem does not stereotype life. The reason why poetry has become a work of art is that when it reproduces its own depiction of the object, it always strives to express the characteristics of the depicted object that best reflect the essence and the most personality. The poem "The Coffee House" understands this.
The aesthetician Prodin said: "If the eye has not yet become like the sun, it cannot see the sun, and so can the mind, and if it is not beautiful itself, it cannot see beauty." "Appreciate the poetry of the poet Fu Bao, sincere feelings, fire-like enthusiasm, and strong self-confidence, which infect us." To appreciate poetry, we know our hearts through the minds of poets. Mr. Fukuho is the CEO of a joint venture company, sincere and open-minded. Whenever he meditated alone, there was a sense of life that came out, and he quickly used his pen to record the feelings obtained from this moment of inspiration and sorted it out artistically. As a result, a poem that, although short in length, but contains his wise contemplation of life and society and a profound understanding of the results and a deep philosophical approach, flows out of his heart valley, which is pleasant and enlightening. As far as the poetry works we have shared and the characteristics they show in art, I feel that Mr. Fu Bao is deeply influenced by the Tang and Song poems, and strives to write works that are easy to understand, understand and picturesque, but also deep in connotation, subtle and timeless. In his poems, he uses verses that everyone can read, green pictures, accompanied by beautiful rhythms, expressing his feelings of home and country in the flow of music, and pursuing the artistic effect of "looking horizontally into peaks on the side of the mountain, with different heights near and far".
Mr. Fukuho is very busy at work and cannot "carve" his own works like professional writers. Therefore, the works presented now are often the true feelings of their instantaneous psychology. We read it, although it is very vivid, but it is slightly rough. Artistically, his poems also have some places to consider. For example, sentences such as "My love / is to help you overcome all difficulties / Reach the ideal shore as soon as possible" are straightforward and implicit compared with the previous verses. In other poems, there are similar flaws. In addition, modern poetry pays attention to the transformation, fragmentation and mixing of time and space, the completion of the flow of emotions in the object and the condensed space, so that the image, symbol and inner rhythm in the color, light and shadow, music flow harmoniously sneaking, obviously, we in these poems, appreciate the above comfort is not enough, these are Mr. Fu Bao need to work hard to improve. But none of this affects Mr. Fukuho's fascination with poetry.
We wish Mr. Fukuho to continue to work and love both, and on the road of art, with the spirit of artisanism, to create more and better excellent works, in order to feast on the readers and friends who love his poetry!