I like to write poetry and keep a diary without missing a beat of inspiration
◎Guangwai Affiliated Foreign Language School Fifth Grade Lin Jiaqi
As soon as they heard that they wanted to write an article, some students were afraid, and when they saw the title, they were confused and felt that there was nothing to write. This is easy to cause the pen before not carefully conceived, but "foot on the watermelon peel, slide to where to count", wrote for half a day has not yet entered the right topic, the time is almost up, had to panic to the end. Some students are afraid of not writing enough words, so they use the flow account to make up the number.
I've actually experienced all of these situations. But after careful study, I was no longer afraid of writing. Let me share a few careful points.
First of all, when you feel at a loss about the topic, don't panic, recall which people, events or scenes in your life are related to the topic. Even if there is only a hint of inspiration, you must immediately write down the key words, and write as many keywords as you can think of, so as not to forget. Don't rush to deny your ideas, and don't worry about not writing a complete article. When the mind gradually opens up, it is like a net that spreads out, and it can connect a lot of written content. At this time, through comparison, the most interesting or novel or valuable content is selected. For example, at the end of the fourth grade, I wrote one thing under the title of "Warmth", and I first thought of the care of my parents when I was sick, the care of my classmates when I fell, and the help of teachers when the exams were not ideal. But after comparison, I think the first three topics have been written by many people. Most of the time, students are used to writing about familiar people, which is of course true, but sometimes writing about strangers may have different effects. So I continued to reminisce, suddenly remembering that one weekend, I was riding the bus alone, but I found that the balance in the Yangcheng Pass was insufficient, and a harsh sound was emitted. I didn't have any money with me, so I had to borrow YangchengTong from others to help swipe my card, at that time I was shy, I felt very embarrassed, and I was not sure that the stranger would lend me the card, afraid that the driver would let me get off the car in full view of everyone, which was both embarrassing and delayed. But in fact, the man readily agreed. A few days later, I met him again, and I gave him back his money, but he said that he didn't have to pay it back because he saw that I was so honest, and he chatted with me all the way, so that I felt the warmth from strangers.
It is not enough to write an article to make the word count, and to make the event more specific, there must be some detailed description. If you pay attention, there are many ways to write in every storybook that is worth learning. For example, "The Strange Man of the World" is very popular with everyone, but it would be a pity if you only watch the hilarity, I learned from this book all kinds of ways to write about living people, especially action descriptions. I wrote "Football Squad Match": "I sprinted with the ball, the opposing player defended from the right side, I made a sharp stop, sent the ball forward with the heel, passed him, and then passed a few people by bicycle. Then the left foot charged up, shot hard, and the ball made an arc in the air and entered the goal perfectly. Another example is to write that dad makes intestinal powder: "I saw him put two eggs facing each other, gently bumped, clicked, broke an egg, quickly poured the yolk and egg white into the plate, and rubbed the egg evenly with a large spoon." Pour in the rice milk and shake the plate back and forth a few times, and the rice milk will spread out and slowly fill the entire plate. Dad took a spoon and deftly picked up ingredients such as shallots, shiitake mushrooms, and dried radishes into the plate, and finally, pushed the plate into the steamer. The whole process is done in one go, but in one minute. ”
Lin Jiaqi
We can also combine some psychological depictions to highlight the inner activities of the characters, which I learned from "The Unique Ivan", which can make the article more real and delicate. For example, I wrote in "And the Master" that I played table tennis with the boss: "He was ready to kick off, and I was a little careless: an old man, it is estimated that he came to exercise, and this ball may not be addictive." I casually set up a posture, thinking that I could easily block the ball back without moving. Unexpectedly, as soon as his ball came, my racket just touched the ball, I didn't know where to go, and with a whimper, the ball flew into the sky. 0 to 1! I couldn't believe it, I had to get serious, swing my feet apart, squat and take a good horse's step, while making a good position to catch the ball, my eyes staring without blinking; while nervously guessing what ball he might send this time, whether I could catch it again. In this way, I wrote out the different psychological states before and after, and also highlighted the extraordinary skills of the elderly, showing my fun on the weekend after the "double subtraction". Another example is to write about the duck killed in the butcher's shop: "I think that when it is alive, it runs freely and travels freely." But at the moment, it could only raise its head, as if chanting a sad poem. ”
Of course, if you want to write a good article, it is not just a matter of class, but it is important to accumulate materials in normal times. For me, I think writing poetry (ancient or modern) is a great way. I have written poems for peach blossoms, kapok, cloud changes, Huangshan scenery and other scenery. For example, "Huangshan Jiajing": "Lofty mountains and green sky towering, cliffs and cliffs Lotus Peak." Miaobi raw flowers strange stone standing, Huangshan ancient trees welcome guest pine. "Although I am still very young, I am very satisfied, because writing poetry has exercised my observation ability and creative ideas, as well as paying more attention to whether the words are accurate and rhyme.
I often write down various interesting things in my life in my diary, such as the scene of hanging lanterns during the New Year's Festival in the community, the leisurely swans in the school Swan Lake, and the growth process of the kittens in the family. I wrote about hanging the lantern in the neighborhood: "The uncle straightened the lantern first, then took out a wire, skillfully cut a small section with pliers, and then went through a hole in the lantern, circled it twice, and then hung it on the branch." Suddenly, the festive atmosphere spread out..." Written on the Haixin Bridge to admire the moon: "The bright moon rises, and in the distance, it seems to stand on a boat... After a while, the lights of the city were turned on, and the entire Pearl River was immersed in dazzling light... The moon rose into the air, crumbling... The moon is higher, and the little barbarian waist is on the same foot, which is simply a wonder of the world! ...... After getting off the bridge and looking up at the sky, the shining bright moon stood on the spire of the small barbarian waist. ”
These are my writing experiences. I hope that everyone will read more, practice more, appreciate this beautiful world, pay attention to the bits and pieces of life, and record it. These seemingly inconspicuous things, as long as you observe them carefully, you will also be immersed in them. Enjoying the beauty of life and writing an article, why not?
Finishing: Nandu reporter Liang Yanyan