The church composition | craftsman spirit: a bright light on the road of national rejuvenation

【Composition question】

Innovation is the inexhaustible driving force for development, and the spirit of craftsmanship is the guarantee of high-quality development.

In the course of reform and opening up, countless skilled craftsmen have dared to innovate and achieved world-renowned achievements.

Please record the examples of innovation around you that create brilliance, or talk about your understanding of the spirit of craftsmanship.

【Student Study】

The times change the old face, and the ingenuity is not extinguished and renewed

□ Li Yiyan Guangzhou No. 16 Middle School Senior High School Class 1 (1).

I first met craftsmen when I was a child watching an exhibition of traditional handicrafts.

From those gorgeous and gorgeous embroidery and ingenious tide carvings, I felt that these exquisite works that cost a huge amount of manpower reflected a unique brilliance, so that I had a first impression of the craftsman's spirit - the craftsman has the belief and persistence of "choosing one thing, lifelong", and also has the meticulousness and patience of "one heart, one thing".

In this ever-changing era, traditional handicrafts have gradually been replaced by industrial production, and the "craftsman spirit" that people think of as exclusive to craftsmen seems to be lost in this torrent. But it did not disappear in my heart, but more radiant with the unique light of the times.

As I grew older, I participated in more class organization work, and the craftsmanship spirit in my mind was no longer limited to the exquisite craftsmanship of traditional handicrafts, which meant the professional quality of countless ordinary practitioners who strived for excellence and surpassed themselves.

Hu Sheng, a senior technician at the 14th Research Institute of China Electronics Science and Technology, wants to use CNC machine tools to control the machining accuracy of the core components of domestic early warning machines within 4 microns, which is an "impossible task" in the eyes of professionals. He saw this huge and difficult task as a kind of "challenge", did not hesitate to take it, and finally succeeded;

Huawei conducts independent research and development, from the chip all relying on imports to today's continuous progress towards higher precision, every difficulty overcome by technical personnel is a deeper interpretation of the professional and innovative craftsman spirit in the field of manufacturing.

It is these ordinary practitioners and enterprise units, not willing to be mediocre and strive to surpass, only to achieve the development of individuals in the torrent of the times, only to push the spirit of craftsmanship from the stereotype of "limited to craftsmen" to the current "all walks of life talk about craftsman spirit".

In fact, when I participate in off-campus volunteer activities, I strive to do the best team tasks and contribute to the collective and society as much as possible, and the craftsmanship spirit in my mind is no longer limited to individual development, but from "small me" to "big me".

I also have a sense of mission in my heart from "craftsmen" to "big country craftsmen".

Cui Yun, a technician at the Technology Group, once said: "I want to forge a path to lay a good foundation for the next generation of rockets in our country." With this original heart, he skillfully used more than 500 assembly tools to lead the team to complete the rocket assembly and ensure the misuse of tens of thousands of components.

He is the "arrow caster" behind the realization of the Chinese nation's thousand-year-old aerospace dream, and his pursuit of the ultimate craftsmanship spirit has long been not only for himself, but also for the lovely motherland in his mind.

Since the reform and opening up, it is countless skilled craftsmen like him who have devoted themselves to their posts and poured out the achievements of the motherland with sweat.

Zhou Hao, the "deep-sea craftsman" of Chinese aerospace, although he is a worker, has designed a leveling method with the skills and experience accumulated over the years, and successfully solved the problem that the shaft of the bearing base of the manned submersible cannot be rotated.

It is the innovative craftsman spirit of Zhou Hao and "Zhou Hao" who has made great contributions to the realization of China's "dream of a maritime power", and they have integrated personal development into national rejuvenation and given the best reward to the cultivation of the mother of the motherland.

At this time, the spirit of craftsmanship has risen to a broader world, becoming a bright lamp on the road of national rejuvenation and a powerful spiritual force that inspires us to move forward.

The spirit of craftsmanship has never been far away from us.

When we carefully plan and reflect on our daily lives, when we pursue better and dare to explore in our learning work, when we actively dedicate and pursue the ultimate in voluntary practice, we all need the nourishment and guidance of the craftsman spirit to lead us to strive for excellence, meticulousness, and courage to undertake the mission.

The spirit of craftsmanship is everywhere, it is only given the new mission of the times, with a new proposition of innovation and development, only by surpassing itself and standing at the head of the tide can we continue to interpret it and carry it forward. This is the so-called "change of the times is easy to look old, ingenuity is not extinguished and renewed.". (For more news, please pay attention to Yangcheng Pie pai.ycwb.com)

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【Teacher's Comments】

At present, building a team of high-quality industrial workers, building a large country craftsman, and cultivating the spirit of craftsmen in the new era have become hot topics in all walks of life. As a student, how should you write a big theme well? Combining the examples around you is a good creative angle.

Combined with the "gorgeous and gorgeous Guang embroidery" and "ingenious tide carving" that he saw when he was a child, the author came up with the first impression of the craftsman spirit - the belief and persistence of "choosing one thing, lifelong life" and the meticulousness and patience of "one heart, one thing".

Then, combined with his own experience as a class cadre and volunteer, he was promoted from a simple "craft" category to a professional quality of practitioners who strive for excellence and surpass themselves.

Then combined with examples such as Hu Sheng and Zhou Hao, the spirit of craftsmanship will rise to a broader world and become a bright light on the road of national rejuvenation. The vein is clear and the steps are improved, both from life and higher than life.

The title "The Times Change The Old Face, the Ingenuity Is Immortal and Revitalized" is particularly wonderful, which not only points out the core of the craftsman's spirit, but also summarizes the whole text very well.

(Liang Qiuyan, Guangzhou No. 16 Middle School)

【Non-division comments】

The topic of "craftsmanship" is not new, but it is not easy to write deeply and newly about the understanding of this term.

The author's understanding of the spirit of craftsmanship is undoubtedly very profound, accurate and high: "The spirit of craftsmanship in my mind is no longer limited to the exquisite craftsmanship of traditional handicrafts, but also means the professional quality of countless ordinary practitioners who strive for excellence and surpass themselves." For the argument of this point of view, the article cites four examples of China's scientific and technological fields to a higher and more cutting-edge solution to a higher and more sophisticated problem, such as CNC machine tools, Huawei mobile phones, rocket assemblies, and aerospace manned submersibles, which strongly proves the important value of the spiritual quality of practitioners to strive for excellence and surpass themselves.

The requirements in the stem are "or record the brilliant examples of innovation around us", "or talk about the understanding of the craftsman spirit", this article is to skillfully combine the two, with the achievements of scientific and technological innovation in the field of science and technology in China to prove their understanding of the "craftsman spirit".

This article also pays attention to combining their own experience, from watching traditional handicraft art exhibitions as children to participating in volunteer activities, explaining how young people in the new era should inherit and carry forward the spirit of craftsmen, so that the article has personal understanding. However, the case of volunteerism appears weaker.

The title of the article is brilliant, and the language of the whole text is accurate, which also reflects the good writing ability of this high school student.

(Deng Yuhuan, Associate Professor, Department of Writing, College of Letters, South China Normal University, Vice President of Guangdong Writing Society)

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